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[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Well I Been Writing This Song For A Couple Of Days Now Its A R&B & Rap Track (Yes Autotune Should Be Used For Singing If You Cant Sing Ofcourse)But Here It Is Its Called "When Your Not Around" Comment/Hate/Use As Yours/Do Whatever/Change It.

I Didnt Post In The Thread Cuz I Just Wrote It Im Sure Someone Else Will Wanna Use It..Thats What I Wrote It For Someone Else...

New Song I Wrote "When Your Not Around"

[Intro/Chorus]
Im Not The Same When Your Not Around[Not Around Not Around](Screwd)
Uhh Uhh No No Uhh Uhh No No
Not The Same When Im Not Around You[Around You Around You](Screwed)
When Your Not Around,Im Missin You
When Your Not Around,I Feel For You
When Your Not Around,Im Feelin Pain
And When Your Not Around,Im Not The Same

[Verse 1]
I Just Wanna Say When Your Not Around
I Cant Move And I Barely Make A Sound
Its Like Somethings Over Me And Its Holding Me Down
And Its Hard For Me To Breathe(Takes Breathe)Right Now
Im Wishin You Were Here Right Now With Me
Cuz When Your Here Im Great As I Can Be
But Girl When You Are Away Im Wishin You Stayed
Because When Your Not Around Im Not The Same

[Chorus]
Baby When You Are Not Around,Im Missin You
When Your Not Around,I Feel For You
When Your Not Around,Im Feelin Pain
Girl When Your Not Around,Im Not The Same
Im Not The Same No Im Not The Same[X4]

[Verse 2]Rapping(Alternative Dont Have To Use This)
Baby When Your Not Here I Sure Wish That You Was
Cuz Everytime You Not Around Girl My Heart Go Numb
And Im Down In The Dumps Like Where My Baby At
Damn I Really Miss Her Lemme Call Her Back
But It Aint The Same Unless We In The Same Place
I Like To Hear Your Voice But I Love To See Your Face
Baby Your Love Got Me Lost In A Maze
And When Your Not Around Im Just Lost In The Space
Im Like A Heart With No Beat A Car With No Seats
Clean No Gain Tell Me This Whats A Tarzan Without His Jane
Just Wild And Untamed Im Fallin Like Rain
See Baby When You Gone Im Not The Same

[Chorus]
Baby When You Are Not Around,Im Missin You
When Your Not Around,I Feel For You
When Your Not Around,Im Feelin Pain
Girl When Your Not Around,Im Not The Same
Im Not The Same No Im Not The Same[X4]

[Verse 3]
Baby When Your Gone I Miss You
It Feels Like Cupid Hit Me With A Missle
Love So Critical Im Nothin Without You
Nothin Else Matters More Than You Do
When Your Not Around I Feel Brand New
But I Wanna Be The Same As When I See You
I Dont Feel The Same Something Is Wrong
I Only Feel This Way When You Are Gone

[Chorus]
Baby When You Are Not Around,Im Missin You
When Your Not Around,I Feel For You
When Your Not Around,Im Feelin Pain
Girl When Your Not Around,Im Not The Same
Im Not The Same No Im Not The Same[X4]

[YoungFire420]

Re: Feedback/Comment/Use As Yours/Do Whatever

Its pretty good. Why dont you record it?

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Feedback/Comment/Use As Yours/Do Whatever

Its pretty good. Why dont you record it?

I Wouldve but I dont Like It But Since I Wrote It Didnt wanna Just Throw It Away..Im Sure Some guest Or Someone Like jrock will Use it...Maybe ill record a demo version