Rate the Verse Above You Thread

[Artille]

This thread is set-up kind of like a "Rate the Avatar Above You" type thread. Basically before you post your written verse, you rate the persons verse above you on a 1-10 scale. You may also leave feedback about the verse above you if you want. I don't want any racism, beef, or arguments in this thread. Although, your verses may contain whatever. Verses should be 8 bars or more. I will start first.

Can't do an audio, so I kill you in the written
Starting 12/25, I will really start spittin
I'm a dog, you boy's pussy like a kitten
The Newports got your teeth yellow like a Britain
Look at all the punchlines that I'm hittin
If the track was a toilet, I would always be shittin
On you, and your whole crew
Suicide Squad, no bitch I kill you

EDIT: New rule - Quote the person you are rating, that way their is no confusion.

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

This thread is set-up kind of like a "Rate the Avatar Above You" type thread. Basically before you post your written verse, you rate the persons verse above you on a 1-10 scale. You may also leave feedback about the verse above you if you want. I don't want any racism, beef, or arguments in this thread. Although, your verses may contain whatever. Verses should be 8 bars or more. I will start first.

Can't do an audio, so I kill you in the written
Starting 12/25, I will really start spittin
I'm a dog, you boy's pussy like a kitten
The Newports got your teeth yellow like a Britain
Look at all the punchlines that I'm hittin
If the track was a toilet, I would always be shittin
On you, and your whole crew
Suicide Squad, no bitch I kill you

Id Give it a 8/10

but heres mine

Me No Audio Neither,So Im Killin With Writtens
Artille & Dizzy Given Em The Start Of The Beginning
Tell Me Who Winnin No Tell Me Who Losin
Dizzy Dont Pay Attention To Competition,Never
Cuttin Up On The Track Watch It How I Sever
Way I Come Up With The Lines You'd Say That Im Clever
But Whatever On The Next One Better Yet The Best One
Way Better Than You Number Ones Here Wheres Number Two

[Artille]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Id Give it a 8/10

but heres mine

Me No Audio Neither,So Im Killin With Writtens
Artille & Dizzy Given Em The Start Of The Beginning
Tell Me Who Winnin No Tell Me Who Losin
Dizzy Dont Pay Attention To Competition,Never
Cuttin Up On The Track Watch It How I Sever
Way I Come Up With The Lines You'd Say That Im Clever
But Whatever On The Next One Better Yet The Best One
Way Better Than You Number Ones Here Wheres Number Two

5/10. Some parts didn't flow/rhyme well

I live in a crazy world, but don't call me Jay Jenkins
It's time for me to give ya'll a lyrical spankin
I ain't talking Halo when I say I'm top rankin
So much money in my pocket, 24/7 bankin
Starting off strong, Artille and Drizzy
Not Dedication 3, but it's time to get busy
Yeah, whose gonna fuck with Artille
Like Lil Wayne, mothafucka I'm ill
I shock the world like an electric eel
I spit sickness, never dat heal

[YoungFire420]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

4.. That was for the first written. I had a phone call, so it took forever to respond. The written above me is a 3

Bitch you'll kill me? Ill fucking 'slaughter you'
I know why you hate on SS, cause you cant find a 'hotter crew'
You claim you got punchlines, but they 'straight missin'
Your dads thought you were a failure since birth, you probably 'hate reminiscin'
You think your writtens are all good, cause dickriders give 'you props'
Put out a mixtape the same day as me, you'd be the one 'who flops'
You're the type to wave 'to cops'.. like have a nice 'day sir'
Hahah you're a fucking lame, you couldnt be any 'gayer'

[Artille]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

4.. That was for the first written. I had a phone call, so it took forever to respond. The written above me is a 3

Bitch you'll kill me? Ill fucking 'slaughter you'
I know why you hate on SS, cause you cant find a 'hotter crew'
You claim you got punchlines, but they 'straight missin'
Your dads thought you were a failure since birth, you probably 'hate reminiscin'
You think your writtens are all good, cause dickriders give 'you props'
Put out a mixtape the same day as me, you'd be the one 'who flops'
You're the type to wave 'to cops'.. like have a nice 'day sir'
Hahah you're a fucking lame, you couldnt be any 'gayer'

6/10

Come on Young Fire don't be mean
I'm sorry I can't rap, I'm new on the scene
That right there was called sarcasm
Flow crazy, I might have a spasm
You get no love, no X or O
You're lucky I saw your post, cause I have you as a foe
Young fire, he thinks he's cool
I'll have you swimming in your blood like a fucking pool

[Enigma]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Come on Young Fire don't be mean
I'm sorry I can't rap, I'm new on the scene
That right there was called sarcasm
Flow crazy, I might have a spasm
You get no love, no X or O
You're lucky I saw your post, cause I have you as a foe
Young fire, he thinks he's cool
I'll have you swimming in your blood like a fucking pool

Considering I don't know what a 10 would be, and saying it would be perfect none of yall will be.

3ish/10

Man if yall going at Skim come harder then that
Real talk, 8 bars should be killed like the curious cat
And bitches crazy (jcock) if they come at me on the attack.
Cus no fat ass you'll lose it quicker than slim-fast.
I still don't understand why you talking love with Skim
Need to stop it, we know it's reserved for the one thiefin'.
Yea jrock, no sneak dissin' asking where'd ya flow go.
Looking down on the competition, I think I'm catching vertigo

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

4.. That was for the first written. I had a phone call, so it took forever to respond. The written above me is a 3

Bitch you'll kill me? Ill fucking 'slaughter you'
I know why you hate on SS, cause you cant find a 'hotter crew'
You claim you got punchlines, but they 'straight missin'
Your dads thought you were a failure since birth, you probably 'hate reminiscin'
You think your writtens are all good, cause dickriders give 'you props'
Put out a mixtape the same day as me, you'd be the one 'who flops'
You're the type to wave 'to cops'.. like have a nice 'day sir'
Hahah you're a fucking lame, you couldnt be any 'gayer'

6/10

Come on Young Fire don't be mean
I'm sorry I can't rap, I'm new on the scene
That right there was called sarcasm
Flow crazy, I might have a spasm
You get no love, no X or O
You're lucky I saw your post, cause I have you as a foe
Young fire, he thinks he's cool
I'll have you swimming in your blood like a fucking pool

Clever but Yea Im Gonna Give It A 6/10

Back Again Never Slackin,So Wassup With The Action
Lights,Cameras We Rollin Yall Funny Ya Got Me Laffin
The Only Time You Strapped Is With A Condom On Jackin
Forreal Doe,The Beef Shit Is Gettin Really Simple
Watever Just Pass Me The Beat Watch Me Beat Like Kimbo
I Dont Like The Beef So Im Goin Strait Veg-O-Tarian
HQ Is The Rap Cementary Everybody Gettin Buried In
Come Lets Re-Joice And Try To Start Rebirthin

[Enigma]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Hmmm Yall aren't gonna hoe me like that. I suggest since people are typing theres and have them quoted that you type it up and Before you post, copy it and refresh the thread to see if someone posted when you were typing.

[Artille]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Come on Young Fire don't be mean
I'm sorry I can't rap, I'm new on the scene
That right there was called sarcasm
Flow crazy, I might have a spasm
You get no love, no X or O
You're lucky I saw your post, cause I have you as a foe
Young fire, he thinks he's cool
I'll have you swimming in your blood like a fucking pool

Considering I don't know what a 10 would be, and saying it would be perfect none of yall will be.

3ish/10

Man if yall going at Skim come harder then that
Real talk, 8 bars should be killed like the curious cat
And bitches crazy (jcock) if they come at me on the attack.
Cus no fat ass you'll lose it quicker than slim-fast.
I still don't understand why you talking love with Skim
Need to stop it, we know it's reserved for the one thiefin'.
Yea jrock, no sneak dissin' asking where'd ya flow go.
Looking down on the competition, I think I'm catching vertigo

4/10

Wow Enigma that was some true dick ridin
I'm first in line, your second like Joe Biden
My lyrics got you scared, now you're hidin
Hidin like a bitch, like Osama Bin Laden
But I'ma find you like you are Sudam Hussein
I kill you for real, no fake shit like David Blaine
But they think my flows magic like Chris
I hope you don't take this petty shit as a dis

EDIT: I agree with you trill. But I think that if you did that and somebody did post, you would have to redo the whole thing if its ether

[BonitaRoses]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Can girls join?

[Artille]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Can girls join?

lol of course

[Enigma]

Re: Official Rate the Verse Above You Thread

Wow fuck..I just typed something up but copied a youtube url for a reference and it overruled my verse, fuck it I'm done for the night, and I was getting on your ass.