Rate the Verse Above You Thread

[Enigma]

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4/10

Wow Enigma that was some true dick ridin
I'm first in line, your second like Joe Biden
My lyrics got you scared, now you're hidin
Hidin like a bitch, like Osama Bin Laden
But I'ma find you like you are Sudam Hussein
I kill you for real, no fake shit like David Blaine
But they think my flows magic like Chris
I hope you don't take this petty shit as a dis

EDIT: I agree with you trill. But I think that if you did that and somebody did post, you would have to redo the whole thing if its ether

You're similes are similes none the less, but aren't very hard hitting. I'll give you the grade "better than your previous", but high 3's to maybe a 4.

Not word for word but about the same,

Yea I got that Paki terrorist flow watch who you messin wit'
Just like the war with us you just fail at ever winnin'.
Aieee use my smarts to whip up a quick plastic explosive.
While you trippin cus your plastic dick ain't leave one girl moanin'
Osama wit it "long hair don't care", you can tell me who I've quoted.
Better yet close ya mouth cus for a midget he has ya head bloated.
And No homo can't save you from this, I'm questioning ya sexuality.
You'll never get a girl cus your teeth look like they pin dropping.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQyS47juMOU

[JrockHQ]

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Come on Young Fire don't be mean
I'm sorry I can't rap, I'm new on the scene
That right there was called sarcasm
Flow crazy, I might have a spasm
You get no love, no X or O
You're lucky I saw your post, cause I have you as a foe
Young fire, he thinks he's cool
I'll have you swimming in your blood like a fucking pool

Considering I don't know what a 10 would be, and saying it would be perfect none of yall will be.

3ish/10

Man if yall going at Skim come harder then that
Real talk, 8 bars should be killed like the curious cat
And bitches crazy (jcock) if they come at me on the attack.
Cus no fat ass you'll lose it quicker than slim-fast.
I still don't understand why you talking love with Skim
Need to stop it, we know it's reserved for the one thiefin'.
Yea jrock, no sneak dissin' asking where'd ya flow go.
Looking down on the competition, I think I'm catching vertigo

4/10

Wow Enigma that was some true dick ridin
I'm first in line, your second like Joe Biden
My lyrics got you scared, now you're hidin
Hidin like a bitch, like Osama Bin Laden
But I'ma find you like you are Sudam Hussein
I kill you for real, no fake shit like David Blaine
But they think my flows magic like Chris
I hope you don't take this petty shit as a dis

EDIT: I agree with you trill. But I think that if you did that and somebody did post, you would have to redo the whole thing if its ether

5/10

I never claimed to be "Hood" that's quite apparent
never lived there either, Im a resident of maryland
i love this rap game, along with the success it brings
i don't expect to fit in, cus Im'a do my own thing
Im not christmas lights, I never spark the tree
my flows equipped with wings, cant get as high as me
i don't have to go hard, to get the respect that's mine
and i don't skateboard, but youll catch me on my grind
you can post a diss, you think that shit bothers me?
Im in this game to kill, got an assassins mentality
i pop up like harmful viruses, XXX im hardcore
i flow like a tsunami, think you goin make it to shore?
im in this game, to obtain what i can take
got these niggas shoken up, no earthquake
your girl, she love me, but all she talk about is fashion
she got an ass of a goddess, and i dont speak kardashian

[Enigma]

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5/10

I never claimed to be "Hood" that's quite apparent
never lived there either, Im a resident of maryland
i love this rap game, along with the success it brings
i don't expect to fit in, cus Im'a do my own thing
Im not christmas lights, I never spark the tree
my flows equipped with wings, cant get as high as me
i don't have to go hard, to get the respect that's mine
and i don't skateboard, but youll catch me on my grind
you can post a diss, you think that shit bothers me?
Im in this game to kill, got an assassins mentality
i pop up like harmful viruses, XXX im hardcore
i flow like a tsunami, think you goin make it to shore?
im in this game, to obtain what i can take
got these niggas shoken up, no earthquake
your girl, she love me, but all she talk about is fashion
she got an ass of a Goddess, and i dont speak kardashian

5.5/10

A resident of every state in the US, that's more apparent
But all that running left your family gone, just got a parent
Hiding underground like a mole on the run from border patrols
You've lived with so many zip codes it's longer than pi's decimals
Your Seattle statement made me realize why people think we're stupid.
It's just illegals that don't know where New York is but know who Dora is.
Some espanol for you and your rojo clique, ohhh but I don't wanna start shit
Chingas tu madre, No...Chingas tu vida and all the mexicans you live with.

[Artille]

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5.5/10

A resident of every state in the US, that's more apparent
But all that running left your family gone, just got a parent
Hiding underground like a mole on the run from border patrols
You've lived with so many zip codes it's longer than pi's decimals
Your Seattle statement made me realize why people think we're stupid.
It's just illegals that don't know where New York is but know who Dora is.
Some espanol for you and your rojo clique, ohhh but I don't wanna start shit
Chingas tu madre, No...Chingas tu vida and all the mexicans you live with.

3/10, wasn't feeling your flow in that one

A resident of Pinellas Park, yeah that's where I stay
Take a left on 100th onto Maxton Way
Not gonna say I'm a goon, but I advise you to stay away
If you come around here, I'll put your body on layaway
And send you to your family back in the Bay
It's murder all day, and never play
Those were last two bars are what I call fillers
You guys are my dick riders, you're all Artillers

[YoungFire420]

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A resident of Pinellas Park, yeah that's where I stay
Take a left on 100th onto Maxton Way
Not gonna say I'm a goon, but I advise you to stay away
If you come around here, I'll put your body on layaway
And send you to your family back in the Bay
It's murder all day, and never play
Those were last two bars are what I call fillers
You guys are my dick riders, you're all Artillers

4/10

And heres a verse i wrote awhile back. Might as well post it..

My grandma was the person who kept the family up
Even when the roads were rough, she was tough
Its sad she isn't here, thats why im writin' this song
We had some good times, 'till the lord called her home
Shes in a better place, i cant blame him for that
I'm just mad, cause simply i want her back
I cant change that, cause shes in her new home
Just know your grandsons gunna hold down the thrown
When i heard the news i teared up, i could barely see
And i could barely speak, it was like someone was choking me
But i tried to hold all my feelings inside
For the first time in years, i broke out and cried
But the answers in my head was what i was trying to find
I'm gunna take everything she taught me, and im gunna shine
But her spirit will be with me, until the end of time
It doesnt matter where i am, she will be right by my side

[Young Corruption]

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My grandma was the person who kept the family up
Even when the roads were rough, she was tough
Its sad she isn't here, thats why im writin' this song
We had some good times, 'till the lord called her home
Shes in a better place, i cant blame him for that
I'm just mad, cause simply i want her back
I cant change that, cause shes in her new home
Just know your grandsons gunna hold down the thrown
When i heard the news i teared up, i could barely see
And i could barely speak, it was like someone was choking me
But i tried to hold all my feelings inside
For the first time in years, i broke out and cried
But the answers in my head was what i was trying to find
I'm gunna take everything she taught me, and im gunna shine
But her spirit will be with me, until the end of time
It doesnt matter where i am, she will be right by my side

damn pretty deep. i give it a 7

and this is a rhyme that i never finish but why not just put it in this thread

All i hear is a gun shoot
i have no clue, if it went through
am i still alive? am i still high?
no i just arrived, with a strive
standing there with my new crew
i knew there was no way we could lose
thinking of a way, a way to stay true
hearing the cops, thats my cue
i'm going to leave this venue

[IAmJay]

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damn pretty deep. i give it a 7

and this is a rhyme that i never finish but why not just put it in this thread

All i hear is a gun shoot
i have no clue, if it went through
am i still alive? am i still high?
no i just arrived, with a strive
standing there with my new crew
i knew there was no way we could lose
thinking of a way, a way to stay true
hearing the cops, thats my cue
i'm going to leave this venue

5.

Gun on my back, I'm strapped
Hit you with a shot, and make you have an attack
Yeah.. I could keep going, but I'ma let my bitch go
I'ma get em' first, but I'ma let my flow go
I get alot of snow, I'm chillin in the South Pole
Making money, my bitches pay me hoe..
Just know that, nah just know this
Fuck with me, I put my gun through your lips
Or I will put it right through ya' fucking brain
Get it, you better know how to say my fucking name
I am not the same, I'm done fucking with ya' lames
Ballin for awhile, so now its time to change this game.

[Little Son]

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Gun on my back, I'm strapped
Hit you with a shot, and make you have an attack
Yeah.. I could keep going, but I'ma let my bitch go
I'ma get em' first, but I'ma let my flow go
I get alot of snow, I'm chillin in the South Pole
Making money, my bitches pay me hoe..
Just know that, nah just know this
Fuck with me, I put my gun through your lips
Or I will put it right through ya' fucking brain
Get it, you better know how to say my fucking name
I am not the same, I'm done fucking with ya' lames
Ballin for awhile, so now its time to change this game.

5.

few lines right quick i guess.

I don't know a lot of people here, but fuck it I'm goin in
because i'll say whatever to people without knowin them
and they're still interested in the shit i am showin them
like, "who's this mother fucker with everyone blowin him?"
yall's verses are ok, no killin like OJ,
i'm bored, starin at the clock like it's a slow day
I think with my dick sometimes - guess im a big thinker
i'm done here - index and middle finger.

[Artille]

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5.

few lines right quick i guess.

I don't know a lot of people here, but fuck it I'm goin in
because i'll say whatever to people without knowin them
and they're still interested in the shit i am showin them
like, "who's this mother fucker with everyone blowin him?"
yall's verses are ok, no killin like OJ,
i'm bored, starin at the clock like it's a slow day
I think with my dick sometimes - guess im a big thinker
i'm done here - index and middle finger.

I'm impressed 7/10

Time for me to follow Lil Son and go in
Keep reading cause this is where the fun begins
I rape the beat and rip it a new asshole
Your girl like a stripper, she be sliding down my pole
She rode my dick all night and fell in love with Artille
But then I broke heart, now she sees Dr. Phil
Yeah bitch, on the real, words could kill
Not talking lethal injection or death by pill
Talking about hanging you from the tree on the top of the hill

[Little Son]

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She rode my dick all night and fell in love with Artille
But then I broke heart, now she sees Dr. Phil

Love it, made me laugh out loud.. haha

[YoungMoneyEnt]

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5.

few lines right quick i guess.

I don't know a lot of people here, but fuck it I'm goin in
because i'll say whatever to people without knowin them
and they're still interested in the shit i am showin them
like, "who's this mother fucker with everyone blowin him?"
yall's verses are ok, no killin like OJ,
i'm bored, starin at the clock like it's a slow day
I think with my dick sometimes - guess im a big thinker
i'm done here - index and middle finger.

I'm impressed 7/10

Time for me to follow Lil Son and go in
Keep reading cause this is where the fun begins
I rape the beat and rip it a new asshole
Your girl like a stripper, she be sliding down my pole
She rode my dick all night and fell in love with Artille
But then I broke heart, now she sees Dr. Phil
Yeah bitch, on the real, words could kill
Not talking lethal injection or death by pill
Talking about hanging you from the tree on the top of the hill

Off. but not terrible.
6/10

A New asshole? I vote you get a cash roll.
Syrup sippin monster im praying i dont crash hoe.
If you could really rate my verse, itd be higher than 10.
Talking 7 digits or just a gizzilion.
I see that your underestimating your oppononent.
Reading every line with such suspense at every moment.
Artille went before but I show him how the big boys do.
Only way to be hot is to fuck wit my crew.
So unless you crew starts and ends with a S.
Someone pass the blunt and tell me whos next.

[IAmJay]

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Off. but not terrible.
6/10

A New asshole? I vote you get a cash roll.
Syrup sippin monster im praying i dont crash hoe.
If you could really rate my verse, itd be higher than 10.
Talking 7 digits or just a gizzilion.
I see that your underestimating your oppononent.
Reading every line with such suspense at every moment.
Artille went before but I show him how the big boys do.
Only way to be hot is to fuck wit my crew.
So unless you crew starts and ends with a S.
Someone pass the blunt and tell me whos next.

6.5/10

Enter my world, its full with alot of true shit
And everyday you'll catch me with a new bitch..
I'll attack your world, call it World War III
After all of this, haters still following the same path as me
But in reality a king is what you'll never be
I'm rocking with my boy Artille
You boys sorry, And I am the king of this hill
I'm so rich I could pay a million bills
Ha, I could go harder than metal
This is no game, but you can't get on my level
I spit fire, it will even melt the devil