Rate the Verse Above You Thread

[JrockHQ]

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Nvm. Edited

[Little Son]

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Enter my world, its full with alot of true shit
And everyday you'll catch me with a new bitch..
I'll attack your world, call it World War III
After all of this, haters still following the same path as me
But in reality a king is what you'll never be
I'm rocking with my boy Artille
You boys sorry, And I am the king of this hill
I'm so rich I could pay a million bills
Ha, I could go harder than metal
This is no game, but you can't get on my level
I spit fire, it will even melt the devil

last line was a lil cheesy but 6.5

another quick one before i head out to a pool tournament:

I play around but you can bet i play fair
my, delivery is like, next day air
i get texts every day asking where is my new shit
so i go hard, no soft, no cool whip
i'm, doin my thing, like the girl that was on it
i don't kill a track, i atomic bomb it
cuz i'm about the beat, dwight schrute
and i,eat beats like i eat my food
but for now, i gotta head to the pool hall
i hit the 2 ball, but never get blue balls.

ya dig.

[Artille]

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last line was a lil cheesy but 6.5

another quick one before i head out to a pool tournament:

I play around but you can bet i play fair
my, delivery is like, next day air
i get texts every day asking where is my new shit
so i go hard, no soft, no cool whip
i'm, doin my thing, like the girl that was on it
i don't kill a track, i atomic bomb it
cuz i'm about the beat, dwight schrute
and i,eat beats like i eat my food
but for now, i gotta head to the pool hall
i hit the 2 ball, but never get blue balls.

ya dig.

6/10

Ok, I'm with my boy Jay from MIA
And this is Artille from Tampa Bay
Undefeated on HQ, thanks Dizzy Mays
Skim stay away, I don't hang with the gays
I'm reppin my team, shoutout to the Rays
Shoutout to the champion Pittsburgh Steelers
Cuttin dudes, no potato peelers
Yeah bitches ain't nobody realer
I stay near the money and away from drug dealers
And I could keep going, but what's the purpose
Pay attention my words deeper than the surface
Yeah, my lyrics deep like the Pacific
Shoutout to YNR, YungNRuthless to be specific
Let me finish by saying my flow is fucking terrific

EDIT: Realized I had an uneven amount of bars, had to make things right

[mykill]

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Ok, I'm with my boy Jay from MIA
And this is Artille from Tampa Bay
Undefeated on HQ, thanks Dizzy Mays
Skim stay away, I don't hang with the gays
I'm reppin my team, shoutout to the Rays
Shoutout to the champion Pittsburgh Steelers
Cuttin dudes, no potato peelers
Yeah bitches ain't nobody realer
I stay near the money and away from drug dealers
And I could keep going, but what's the purpose
Pay attention my words deeper than the surface
Yeah, my lyrics deep like the Pacific
Shoutout to YNR, YungNRuthless to be specific
Let me finish by saying my flow is fucking terrific

6/10, not bad...not bad at all

here i go:
diamonds bright, that mean they glossy
not from the north, hell I stay Aussie
southern style, keep it wild, stay flossin'
we all crazy, man we done lost it
I lock em up like I was Rossy
take your dough, Kelis, I'm Bossy
words so heavy, man you can't toss me
get you a Garmin if you just lost me
pop em off, I'm Orville's copy
headbang, yeah I keep them rockin'
bars wit no brakes, they never stoppin'
do it in one take, keep on watchin'
the game is mine, no I'll never swap it
Elmer'd hands, yo I'll never drop it
you better watch these cards,
cause muthafucka i'm dealin'
slang them thangs, check the name, i Mykill'd it

[Artille]

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6/10, not bad...not bad at all

here i go:
diamonds bright, that mean they glossy
not from the north, hell I stay Aussie
southern style, keep it wild, stay flossin'
we all crazy, man we done lost it
I lock em up like I was Rossy
take your dough, Kelis, I'm Bossy
words so heavy, man you can't toss me
get you a Garmin if you just lost me
pop em off, I'm Orville's copy
headbang, yeah I keep them rockin'
bars wit no brakes, they never stoppin'
do it in one take, keep on watchin'
the game is mine, no I'll never swap it
Elmer'd hands, yo I'll never drop it
you better watch these cards,
cause muthafucka i'm dealin'
slang them thangs, check the name, i Mykill'd it

6/10 - Welcome to the forums MyKill

This new guy comes in spittin the heat
Hi MyKill, I'm the best writer that you'll ever meet
Naw I'm just playin, and I don't know about you
But the only time I write is when I get on HQ
Since your new, you should check out my thread
Better yet, just go throw shots at SS instead
SS stand for stands for Suicide Squad
And every member in it loves to suck on long rods
Skim and Haikes, two peas in a pod
I can't wait till they get banned by Fredd the mod
Suicide Squad - Young Fire and YME
Take your ass off the forum and go back to DC
They stole their name from a comic book
Time to finish this verse, you bitches got shook

[IAmJay]

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6/10 - Welcome to the forums MyKill

This new guy comes in spittin the heat
Hi MyKill, I'm the best writer that you'll ever meet
Naw I'm just playin, and I don't know about you
But the only time I write is when I get on HQ
Since your new, you should check out my thread
Better yet, just go throw shots at SS instead
SS stand for stands for Suicide Squad
And every member in it loves to suck on long rods
Skim and Haikes, two peas in a pod
I can't wait till they get banned by Fredd the mod
Suicide Squad - Young Fire and YME
Take your ass off the forum and go back to DC
They stole their name from a comic book
Time to finish this verse, you bitches got shook

6.5/10 - Btw, welcome MyKill

Ok I'm never backing down and that's a moment of truth
Gotta stay on my grind, 24/7 always in the booth
Going in on the crew who swears they the shit
Well they are the best at not knowing how to spit
I'm with the crew, CFE stand up
Let me show you a lesson, SS man up
The whip white and black like a fucking panda
Ha, nigga's these days, what you gotta say?
No matter how hard you come, you always gonna pay

[YoungFire420]

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Ok I'm never backing down and that's a moment of truth
Gotta stay on my grind, 24/7 always in the booth
Going in on the crew who swears they the shit
Well they are the best at not knowing how to spit
I'm with the crew, CFE stand up
Let me show you a lesson, SS man up
The whip white and black like a fucking panda
Ha, nigga's these days, what you gotta say?
No matter how hard you come, you always gonna pay

3

Leanin' all the time, feeel like im walkin' 'sideways'
You're in the booth 24/7, probably cause its you're 'hide away'
Its your moment of truth? Welll you gunna 'lie today'
Dont pussy out from my battles bitch, i advise you to 'abide and stay'
CFE, yall took that shit from 'Ace Hood'
I wipe you out this game, im never leaving.. you cant 'replace good'
Yo everyone, i ran up on CFE. They didnt do shit, 'they stood'..
So we let the motherfuckers clip fly as long as the 'K could'

[IAmJay]

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3

Leanin' all the time, feeel like im walkin' 'sideways'
You're in the booth 24/7, probably cause its you're 'hide away'
Its your moment of truth? Welll you gunna 'lie today'
Dont pussy out from my battles bitch, i advise you to 'abide and stay'
CFE, yall took that shit from 'Ace Hood'
I wipe you out this game, im never leaving.. you cant 'replace good'
Yo everyone, i ran up on CFE. They didnt do shit, 'they stood'..
So we let the motherfuckers clip fly as long as the 'K could'

5.5/10

SS keep coming, I'm still aiming and shooting
CFE took over, don't be mad cause' finally you losing
I'm stuck with a disease, Swag is my infection
You can't wipe it out, not even with an injection
You're at the wrong side of the forums, get off this section
I never pussy out, That's what Young Fire is known to do
You rap like a fucking rookie coming to HQ
I'll beat down Skim, but Haikes can get it too....

Short.

[Artille]

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5.5/10

SS keep coming, I'm still aiming and shooting
CFE took over, don't be mad cause' finally you losing
I'm stuck with a disease, Swag is my infection
You can't wipe it out, not even with an injection
You're at the wrong side of the forums, get off this section
I never pussy out, That's what Young Fire is known to do
You rap like a fucking rookie coming to HQ
I'll beat down Skim, but Haikes can get it too....

Short.

5/10 lol "Swag is my infection" Here we go with a fake dis

The only thing you aim is a dick toward your throat
So you can take a shot and swallow the load
You want dudes to come harder, how gay
I would say I'm just playin, but I never play
On the real though, this is all a joke
Haikes fucked skim in the mouth and made him choke
What am I sayin', I'm not reading my own shit
I'm eatin you pussies like a fuckin clit
That was 8 bars, time to spit one more
My lyrics are my wife, and the games my whore

[mykill]

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The only thing you aim is a dick toward your throat
So you can take a shot and swallow the load
You want dudes to come harder, how gay
I would say I'm just playin, but I never play
On the real though, this is all a joke
Haikes fucked skim in the mouth and made him choke
What am I sayin', I'm not reading my own shit
I'm eatin you pussies like a fuckin clit
That was 8 bars, time to spit one more
My lyrics are my wife, and the games my whore

5/10, you can go in better, i read the others

time to explore, my mind lost in the shadows
looking to my left and right, niggas battle
so many shots, a coward would be rattled
but i keep on slaggin' the heat,
damn where is my beat?
tryin to walk straight, but shit they aimin' at me
cant knock me off son, gotta stay on my feet
gotta stick to streets, homie im some duct tape
closing one eye at the target tryin' to bust straight
sound rang out loud just like a earthquake
blow ya shit off, havin' ya lookin for a new face
on bed rest, chillin atcha mom's place
fuck wit me again, the cannon comin' from my waist
always in the fast lane, grabbin' this money i make
you better watch out, I'm tellin you that for your own sake

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

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The only thing you aim is a dick toward your throat
So you can take a shot and swallow the load
You want dudes to come harder, how gay
I would say I'm just playin, but I never play
On the real though, this is all a joke
Haikes fucked skim in the mouth and made him choke
What am I sayin', I'm not reading my own shit
I'm eatin you pussies like a fuckin clit
That was 8 bars, time to spit one more
My lyrics are my wife, and the games my whore

5/10, you can go in better, i read the others

time to explore, my mind lost in the shadows
looking to my left and right, niggas battle
so many shots, a coward would be rattled
but i keep on slaggin' the heat,
damn where is my beat?
tryin to walk straight, but shit they aimin' at me
cant knock me off son, gotta stay on my feet
gotta stick to streets, homie im some duct tape
closing one eye at the target tryin' to bust straight
sound rang out loud just like a earthquake
blow ya shit off, havin' ya lookin for a new face
on bed rest, chillin atcha mom's place
fuck wit me again, the cannon comin' from my waist
always in the fast lane, grabbin' this money i make
you better watch out, I'm tellin you that for your own sake

6/10

Acapella Flowin I Be Goin So In Like I Cant Come Out
Without A Doubt I Be The Bestis Come And Test This
Ill Pass Ya Twice An Overlap Ya Bye Bruh Duece Up
Wheres The Competition Theres None I Wont Ask Ya
Yall Not Rappers Your Jokes Become Actors
Ya Funny To Me Mite Could Win A Oscar But No Grammey
Sorry I Had To Let Ya Kno That You Obviously Dumb To Facts
Unlike You I Murder Tracks Wheres The Nearest ER At

[mykill]

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Acapella Flowin I Be Goin So In Like I Cant Come Out
Without A Doubt I Be The Bestis Come And Test This
Ill Pass Ya Twice An Overlap Ya Bye Bruh Duece Up
Wheres The Competition Theres None I Wont Ask Ya
Yall Not Rappers Your Jokes Become Actors
Ya Funny To Me Mite Could Win A Oscar But No Grammey
Sorry I Had To Let Ya Kno That You Obviously Dumb To Facts
Unlike You I Murder Tracks Wheres The Nearest ER At

3/10

niggas talking about who the "best is" and who can come "get this"
but the vestige is to leave the scene all reckless
mess it all up and fuck up ya best kid
cause you fuckin wit tha wrong nigga to mess with, check this
speak soft and dont get ya head split
my whole crew is dudes that you just dont mess wit
we ride true, mean muggin and slowed down like Texas
shout-out to Houston, that keep it movin like a uhaul van
slowed cause the drank that medicine, its too raw
never been a guy that come harder or better than
the nigga that slang bars just like he was a veteran
now you tell me who better than you, bitch it better true,
or you'll get eat up and threw, straight way up to who,
is liable to save ya poor ass bitch get out my world
and im ridin with my girl, used to be yours, but now im up in that pearl
damn dawg this is easy, please believe me
my shit sweet like Reeses...pieces...dig that