Rate the Verse Above You Thread

[IAmJay]

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3/10

niggas talking about who the "best is" and who can come "get this"
but the vestige is to leave the scene all reckless
mess it all up and fuck up ya best kid
cause you fuckin wit tha wrong nigga to mess with, check this
speak soft and dont get ya head split
my whole crew is dudes that you just dont mess wit
we ride true, mean muggin and slowed down like Texas
shout-out to Houston, that keep it movin like a uhaul van
slowed cause the drank that medicine, its too raw
never been a guy that come harder or better than
the nigga that slang bars just like he was a veteran
now you tell me who better than you, bitch it better true,
or you'll get eat up and threw, straight way up to who,
is liable to save ya poor ass bitch get out my world
and im ridin with my girl, used to be yours, but now im up in that pearl
damn dawg this is easy, please believe me
my shit sweet like Reeses...pieces...dig that

7/10... Pretty good.

Money making machine, nigga I work day and night
I will tear up your face like you just had a dog fight
Ice on my wrist so bright, It will even shine without no light
You better understand you're in the rap game
If I ever leave, might as well place my face on the Hall of Fame
Its my time I can't let this moment go down the drain
I'm insane, flow crazy I need a mental home
Your flow dead, so let me put up your stone
If I ever quit I will be the best you ever known
And my flow is always on point nigga like a cone

[Safe_Kid]

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3/10

niggas talking about who the "best is" and who can come "get this"
but the vestige is to leave the scene all reckless
mess it all up and fuck up ya best kid
cause you fuckin wit tha wrong nigga to mess with, check this
speak soft and dont get ya head split
my whole crew is dudes that you just dont mess wit
we ride true, mean muggin and slowed down like Texas
shout-out to Houston, that keep it movin like a uhaul van
slowed cause the drank that medicine, its too raw
never been a guy that come harder or better than
the nigga that slang bars just like he was a veteran
now you tell me who better than you, bitch it better true,
or you'll get eat up and threw, straight way up to who,
is liable to save ya poor ass bitch get out my world
and im ridin with my girl, used to be yours, but now im up in that pearl
damn dawg this is easy, please believe me
my shit sweet like Reeses...pieces...dig that

7/10... Pretty good.

Money making machine, nigga I work day and night
I will tear up your face like you just had a dog fight
Ice on my wrist so bright, It will even shine without no light
You better understand you're in the rap game
If I ever leave, might as well place my face on the Hall of Fame
Its my time I can't let this moment go down the drain
I'm insane, flow crazy I need a mental home
Your flow dead, so let me put up your stone
If I ever quit I will be the best you ever known
And my flow is always on point nigga like a cone

6/10

Gravity holding you down, you ain't on my level.
Im chillin on mars, dancing with the devil.
He was born in the fire and I spit fire.
Something we got in common is, we never tire.
We never tire, but my car still has four.
Take a tour around Heaven then take a detour.
Welcome to hell, the land of Arson.
"We are not the same ima fuckin Martian."

[mykill]

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Gravity holding you down, you ain't on my level.
Im chillin on mars, dancing with the devil.
He was born in the fire and I spit fire.
Something we got in common is, we never tire.
We never tire, but my car still has four.
Take a tour around Heaven then take a detour.
Welcome to hell, the land of Arson.
"We are not the same ima fuckin Martian."

5/10, LEGOOOOOO!

"we are not the same, im a muthafuckin' Martian"
we are not the same, you talk and i spark it
we are the same, you walk away when i start shit
so get dealt with swiftly if you aint got balls, bitch
see what i did, tore you down and built you up
now that new jack city is worth like a million bucks
better not press ya luck, if you do you will get stuck
ya chicken about? then gon 'head and cluck, shucks
I'm just doin what masa said, makin like hella bread, breakin' yo girl's bed, she give that hella head, the lines spill from my head, the rhymes come before the bread
cause when cheese come easy, its easy to believe me
check my sleeve, nothing is leavin'
i'm mighty, lift bars and keep reachin'
i'm nice B, a sin to deceive me
so be smart and play ya part or else i'm leavin'

[Def Kool]

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"we are not the same, im a muthafuckin' Martian"
we are not the same, you talk and i spark it
we are the same, you walk away when i start shit
so get dealt with swiftly if you aint got balls, bitch
see what i did, tore you down and built you up
now that new jack city is worth like a million bucks
better not press ya luck, if you do you will get stuck
ya chicken about? then gon 'head and cluck, shucks
I'm just doin what masa said, makin like hella bread, breakin' yo girl's bed, she give that hella head, the lines spill from my head, the rhymes come before the bread
cause when cheese come easy, its easy to believe me
check my sleeve, nothing is leavin'
i'm mighty, lift bars and keep reachin'
i'm nice B, a sin to deceive me
so be smart and play ya part or else i'm leavin'[/quote]

5/10 Don't brag dude

But Imma Go In

I'm a big boy now you can't tell me nuthin'
From a baby crying to a little kid laughing
Now I Eat Beats like muffins
*cough* *cough* I hear people coughing
And they're my daily dose of cafeine
The dude walking on the cobblestone dreaming 'bout getting chaufered home
Cleverly using the superdome.

[mykill]

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5/10 Don't brag dude

Hmm? I'm just spittin' a verse. What are you implying?

But Imma Go In

I'm a big boy now you can't tell me nuthin'
From a baby crying to a little kid laughing
Now I Eat Beats like muffins
*cough* *cough* I hear people coughing
And they're my daily dose of cafeine
The dude walking on the cobblestone dreaming 'bout getting chaufered home
Cleverly using the superdome.

3/10, Dont get the rhyme connections sometimes. laughing and coughing dont rhyme. period. lampin' or tossin' maybe, but those two are "not the like the other. one of these things just doesnt belong"

Like Yeezy said, you can't tell me nuthin'
you gon be unlucky like a baker's dozen
ya boy stay movin, while the others is strugglin
always cool when you thought i wasnt, ya feel that?
play ball, knock it out with any bat
never small, walking tall you still a rat
good call, my pockets long and stupid phat
"catch my gal's legs open, betta smash that"
recycle reduce and reuse
these dudes is just food
i hate to be rude
im makin these moves
they wait and they lose
i take and i choose
the plan is to make the most and be champ kid
my crossover make ya hear ya anks split
like Iverson to Stuckey yellin' "Stop it!"
but i'll pat ya on the head, maybe next time you'll be smart and listen to what i said

[Artille]

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3/10, Dont get the rhyme connections sometimes. laughing and coughing dont rhyme. period. lampin' or tossin' maybe, but those two are "not the like the other. one of these things just doesnt belong"

Like Yeezy said, you can't tell me nuthin'
you gon be unlucky like a baker's dozen
ya boy stay movin, while the others is strugglin
always cool when you thought i wasnt, ya feel that?
play ball, knock it out with any bat
never small, walking tall you still a rat
good call, my pockets long and stupid phat
"catch my gal's legs open, betta smash that"
recycle reduce and reuse
these dudes is just food
i hate to be rude
im makin these moves
they wait and they lose
i take and i choose
the plan is to make the most and be champ kid
my crossover make ya hear ya anks split
like Iverson to Stuckey yellin' "Stop it!"
but i'll pat ya on the head, maybe next time you'll be smart and listen to what i said

6/10.... Been off for a week, so here goes nothing

Been a week since I wrote my last verse
Now it's time to put these HQ rappers in a hearse
Coming up with this as I go, I don't have to rehearse
These dudes on HQ gayer than that dude Merce
Cunningham, I go ham on the beat
Killin these rappers like a spartan to an elite
I'm Master Chief, and you're just a brute
Kick you off of HQ, yea I give you the boot
I come back, and bring up an old thread
Kill ya with the flow, you better call a med
And I don't care how you take this
Just know that this was not a direct dis

I'M BACK!!!!

[YoungFire420]

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Been a week since I wrote my last verse
Now it's time to put these HQ rappers in a hearse
Coming up with this as I go, I don't have to rehearse
These dudes on HQ gayer than that dude Merce
Cunningham, I go ham on the beat
Killin these rappers like a spartan to an elite
I'm Master Chief, and you're just a brute
Kick you off of HQ, yea I give you the boot
I come back, and bring up an old thread
Kill ya with the flow, you better call a med
And I don't care how you take this
Just know that this was not a direct dis

4/10

I want this shit forever, like that dude from 'Toronto'
I might not know ya girl, but im 'what ya whore want though"
She want it pronto, you she'll probably get 'it later'
Yalls hatin' on me aint doin shit though..'quit hater'
My flow is pro, yours is minor 'league'
Challenge me, and ill leave yall with battle 'fatigue'
Reppin THP, and that 'Suicide Squad'
Bow down bitch, we gettin 'worldwide applaud'

[WeezyFan90]

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6

My first ever verse, go easy

Yeah i'm in love with the game, call it my girlfriend
Not in love with my bitch, call her a loose end
i'm living for my fam'ly, i'll die for my friends
So if you've beef with them why not murder me then
I don't tote guns and i've never been a gangster
But i know how to fight and i do smoke that ganjaa
so call me bob marley, or a superfly dancer
cos i'm like michael jackson or crichton without the cancer

[Dreezy Baby]

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6

My first ever verse, go easy

Yeah i'm in love with the game, call it my girlfriend
Not in love with my bitch, call her a loose end
i'm living for my fam'ly, i'll die for my friends
So if you've beef with them why not murder me then
I don't tote guns and i've never been a gangster
But i know how to fight and i do smoke that ganjaa
so call me bob marley, or a superfly dancer
cos i'm like michael jackson or crichton without the cancer

found it funny like 6.5/10

im up n diz bitch finally
u muhfuckaz aint passin me like final week
jus watch cuz nigga ion demostrate
cut u muhfckaz off like the phone bill was late
tool time dreezy...put put the hammer n hiz face
and if he get 2 tlkin shit..throw a pamper n hiz face
whip sittin on 22s david banner in diz place
servin up deez niggas like i work at lamberts n diz place
look bruh...ima soulja
oragomy on deez niggas...i guess ima have 2 fold cha
wake up and smell da coffee muhfucka its folders
paper on deck..ima human fuckin folder
see i can spit it...ion write nuthin
dey say relatin 2 music...like cousins
money to big ima have 2 fight numbers
turn her on...well i guess i pressed the right button
nigga im hotter den a thermostat
watever a monster and a beast iz im turnin dat
i been runnin diz shyt..dey gt a nigga burnin fat
i guess yo skoo lame cuz watever yall niggas learn iz wack
im a b e a s t
its feeding time niggas lets eat
ima start..but wait let me finish digesting
goddamn..i believe that im the best thing

[FuckTheFeds]

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9/10
look let me get my rate, this is a race, and u in last place,
me im first just incase u want to face?
i got guns shootin at a steady pace,
after ur dead there wont be a trace,
ill end ur family race, fate wont be on ur side,
he will stab ur with a knife from behind,
this is no fun game i aint kind,
find out that u tryed, me i found out that i strive,
bye bye is what i say when ur alive, then i shoot and u die,
some ppl say im just a crazy guy, im more like that plus a killer comibined,
ill chop ur arms off and make u climb, if not then i got a pistol that will shoot u in the eye,
u better listen, and if u dont then youll be missin, like where did u go?
and when will u be back, dont count on that, lol i talk non sense is what i tell the feds,
so i dont talk at all cause i aint a snitch like you all, when it comes down i truely am god,
like im in a future pod, they pull my name it says wanted for fraud, thats why i stay away from the cops,
when will this life stop? the lights broke im going past them all, im at the top so i watch them all fall,

[Artille]

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9/10
look let me get my rate, this is a race, and u in last place,
me im first just incase u want to face?
i got guns shootin at a steady pace,
after ur dead there wont be a trace,
ill end ur family race, fate wont be on ur side,
he will stab ur with a knife from behind,
this is no fun game i aint kind,
find out that u tryed, me i found out that i strive,
bye bye is what i say when ur alive, then i shoot and u die,
some ppl say im just a crazy guy, im more like that plus a killer comibined,
ill chop ur arms off and make u climb, if not then i got a pistol that will shoot u in the eye,
u better listen, and if u dont then youll be missin, like where did u go?
and when will u be back, dont count on that, lol i talk non sense is what i tell the feds,
so i dont talk at all cause i aint a snitch like you all, when it comes down i truely am god,
like im in a future pod, they pull my name it says wanted for fraud, thats why i stay away from the cops,
when will this life stop? the lights broke im going past them all, im at the top so i watch them all fall,

5/10 but now it's time to go in

Mic check 1, 2, 3, testing
I can't believe Dreezy said he's the best thing
You're lying like them dudes on the right wing
Still searchin for your talent like your on Bing
Go to a mirror and look at yourself Dreezy
Jockin' the eyebrow piercing from the rocker Weezy
You know I'm just jokin like L-O-L
But, let the fight start, ring the bell
Fuck some body posted, so now I gotta edit
I'm about to throw heat like my name was Andy Pettitte
You call yourself Dons, but you never been in the mob
You suck on The Grandfathers dick like corn on the cob (over used)
But I'm finished with this duded Dons
He gets pumped in the ass more than cons

Meant for Dreezy, had to switch it up at the end for Dons

[IAmJay]

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Mic check 1, 2, 3, testing
I can't believe Dreezy said he's the best thing
You're lying like them dudes on the right wing
Still searchin for your talent like your on Bing
Go to a mirror and look at yourself Dreezy
Jockin' the eyebrow piercing from the rocker Weezy
You know I'm just jokin like L-O-L
But, let the fight start, ring the bell
Fuck some body posted, so now I gotta edit
I'm about to throw heat like my name was Andy Pettitte
You call yourself Dons, but you never been in the mob
You suck on The Grandfathers dick like corn on the cob (over used)
But I'm finished with this duded Dons
He gets pumped in the ass more than cons

6.5/10

Getting so much paper I live around a forest
Ha, you nigga's new like ya are some fucking tourists
I can't stop running the game, its just a usual habit
Put the money on line, I bet I'll be the first to grab it
Let me delete that line, because I already have it
Yeah.. I'ma beat it up to whatever it takes
I'm spitting so much I'm about to cause a lake
I'm in the game like a full time job, I don't take no breaks
Coming around my town I guarantee you its not safe
This is my ring and nigga I'm the announcer
My flow so crazy I think it needs to see a counselor
This is Hip-Hop and I am the founder
I will lead you to what is called real music
If making money is dumb, I am crazy stupid
Trust me I am the only one to do this
My crew, Safe, Zach, and YungNRuthless