Check this new verse

[Slags]

Re: Check this new verse

me or that random scrub? he shouldnt be postin here

[tjb]

Re: Check this new verse

nah not tht pce of shit
you
but each "verse" or whatever you want to call it got better each time
so im sure eventually theyll just come naturally
props

[Slags]

Re: Check this new verse

nah not tht pce of shit
you
but each "verse" or whatever you want to call it got better each time
so im sure eventually theyll just come naturally
props

i like bein a punchline factory, i tell a story w/ it once in a great while, but it aint my thing

[Slags]

Re: Check this new verse

Money by the pound
fiendin like a hound
got my head in the sky
yet my airs r on the ground
man i'm really tired
of all these wack rappers around
i don't get how people can let them go
n sleep safe n sound
I don't know bout them
but i'd be ashamed
to even poke my head in the game
if every track i had was lame
they go soft n tame
i swear to God they need a bullet in the brain
its drivin me insane
to hear such good beats go waste
whoever thought dorough could handle ice cream
had bad taste
i don't care if they got the cash for the beat
don't give a record deal
to some random bitch off the street
sorry i'm not discreet
about my distaste for that shit
all i know if biggy was alive
he would throw a fit
he would never permit
that sloppy bullshit
I have no clue why any real rapper
don't show hate towards it
cuz nowadays if your voice is on a hot beat
its somehow a hit
you don't even have to rhyme once
through all of it
youtube is not a talent agency
if you think you got hot shit
then u gotta run it by me
no more soulja boys n guccis
gonna get past me
you shouldn't get hype if you can't rap
this means you shouldn't give a deal
just cuz he can trap
just cuz u can slang
doesn't mean you can sang
you don't have rap skills
cuz u can move the damn thang
don't be hatin on me cuz i''m tellin the truth
if you can't spit then get outta the booth

[lil-fred]

Re: Check this new verse

That stuff is good. You got any samples out or anything? With music?

How you create your rhymes like that? What is your thought process ect. I always wondered how Wayne does it...

but you not wayne, so maybe you can explain how You do?

[Slags]

Re: Check this new verse

i turn off all music, actually, i think of some real shit n type it, simple, i'm a poet, it comes to me easily

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: Check this new verse

heres a idea,, fuck slag and lil fred, i didnt say nothing bad about ur garbage ass flow.. fuck nigga

[Safe_Kid]

Re: Check this new verse

I dunno why some people need to hate for no reason...if you didn't want Don posting his verse on this thread, just tell him. But nahhhh just start shit, its the festive season after all...<_<

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: Check this new verse

look slags, im start by sayin u cant rap, and that ur ugly and probably fat,
no matter fact u just a fag, and thats that,flat out dont give a fuck what u write,
cause to me that shit aint right, like why the fuck dude spit but nobody listen,
heres a vision, go get permission, next time u livin, cause with me ur dead with the fishes,
this is the buisness, and if u dont like it get out the kitchen, and as for lil fred,
dude stop hatin on me cause u dont get bread, like i said, fuck u till both u dead,
u aint going like me once i put the lead to ur head, but ur girls gunna like once i fead,
instead of being a bitch, why dont u come do something, lil fred i bet ur mom still makes ur bed,
u aint never got ur dick red, maybe by palmale handerson, ur in the past like lanteren, me im a bulb,
see lets compare me to u, like im god and ur bob, just a normal dude, that i will shoot,
u niggas going be spooked just like boo, u aint going have a clue, u pussy scobby doo

[tjb]

Re: Check this new verse

dude lay off his shit fuck face

[Slags]

Re: Check this new verse

haha, wat a pussy, way to start shit outta fucking nowhere, ur a hater simply due to the fact that you are jealous, nothing you wrote in retaliation was even quality