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  • Freestyle, 6/29

    Please, Please turn me up....

    I can't hear myself right now. Alright, thats good.

    I act like this world is my fortress,
    But Imma bout to sell it because this shit is porchless,
    I am emotionless because nothing gets to me,
    The haters only hate because I am living their dream,
    My flow is so damn good it will cause a mind rapture,
    And it is so good, the flow is like Big Foot, bitch you will never be capture,
    I don't ever give in under any circumstance,
    I will please you if I am given the chance,
    I don't ever disappoint under the chance,
    Because I am clutch when I am given the chance,
    Kneel down to me and kiss my feet like I am Jesus,
    I got such a distinguished glow off of me that niggas actually believe this.
    I don't like to brag much nor do I like to gloat,
    I be the castle and my crew be the moat,
    You need a moat to keep all the chicks off me,
    There is eight to ten that cross the bridge to keep me company,
    The flow is pretty sick and your sitting there wishing you were me,
    I also had so much money that I had to order a couple dolly's,
    I'm with Ras Kass about when I die burry me face down so I can fuck the world while you kiss my ass,
    Not only is that shit true, but it gives me laughs,


    Late night. This one is ehh... Not happy with what all came out of it. I will touch up and add some on as I go.

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    Re: Freestyle, 6/29

    No thoughts. I know it ain't great at all. But, I wanna at least know what you guys think a little.

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    • #3
      Re: Freestyle, 6/29

      Originally posted by KrisJohnson
      Please, Please turn me up....

      I can't hear myself right now. Alright, thats good.

      I act like this world is my fortress,
      But Imma bout to sell it because this shit is porchless,
      I am emotionless because nothing gets to me,
      The haters only hate because I am living their dream,
      My flow is so damn good it will cause a mind rapture,
      And it is so good, the flow is like Big Foot, bitch you will never be capture,
      I don't ever give in under any circumstance,
      I will please you if I am given the chance,
      I don't ever disappoint under the chance,
      Because I am clutch when I am given the chance,
      Kneel down to me and kiss my feet like I am Jesus,
      I got such a distinguished glow off of me that niggas actually believe this.
      I don't like to brag much nor do I like to gloat,
      I be the castle and my crew be the moat,
      You need a moat to keep all the chicks off me,
      There is eight to ten that cross the bridge to keep me company,
      The flow is pretty sick and your sitting there wishing you were me,
      I also had so much money that I had to order a couple dolly's,
      I'm with Ras Kass about when I die burry me face down so I can fuck the world while you kiss my ass,
      Not only is that shit true, but it gives me laughs,

      late night. This one is ehh... Not happy with what all came out of it. I will touch up and add some on as I go.
      the first highlighted part to me should be shortened, it just ran too much.

      the second one, im guessing you threw ras kass' name in there to make it rhyme with kiss my ass? otherwise it was too lengthy in my opinion.
      “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

      -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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      • #4
        Re: Freestyle, 6/29

        Completely agree. I will see what I can do later tonight on that.

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