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    Yo,guys i havent written a 16 in sooooo fuckin long,but im bout to do this collab and instead of freestylin i wanted 2 write it,so any feedback would be cool,still dont know if im going to use it or not. thanks guys


    Stay in the fast lane... gotta get the cash mane
    Stay noticable, like a white t with a black stain
    If u don't, u become nothing but a wack lame
    So I just stay fuckin' with the track like a damn train
    Keep it on the stove i know it cook by it self
    I'm jus tryna stay on top like a book on a shelf
    Bringin straight noise u gon hear me like a car fell
    So yall niggas gn have to wait (weight) like a barbell
    I'm in the sky, u finna hear a star yell
    What is a cat to a big dog? u just a Garfield
    Girls all on me but i only got 1 dick
    Bringin mo heat then volcanoes and the sun mixed
    A buncha lame rappers, shit some sick
    But like a short penis pornstar they cum quick
    no homo like DMC u betta Run bitch
    Cuz hoe i spit fire like my mothafuckin tounge lit
    Download All Of Dreezy's Music @

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    Re: 16bars?

    Originally posted by Sh4d0w
    Yo,guys i havent written a 16 in sooooo fuckin long,but im bout to do this collab and instead of freestylin i wanted 2 write it,so any feedback would be cool,still dont know if im going to use it or not. thanks guys


    Stay in the fast lane... gotta get the cash mane
    Stay noticable, like a white t with a black stain
    If u don't, u become nothing but a wack lame
    So I just stay fuckin' with the track like a damn train
    Keep it on the stove i know it cook by it self
    I'm jus tryna stay on top like a book on a shelf
    Bringin straight noise u gon hear me like a car fell
    So yall niggas gn have to wait (weight) like a barbell
    I'm in the sky, u finna hear a star yell
    What is a cat to a big dog? u just a Garfield
    Girls all on me but i only got 1 dick
    Bringin mo heat then volcanoes and the sun mixed
    A buncha lame rappers, shit some sick
    But like a short penis pornstar they cum quick
    no homo like DMC u betta Run bitch
    Cuz hoe i spit fire like my mothafuckin tounge lit
    im sorry to say this shadow but your hair's nappy.
    not even showerin can fix somethin that nasty.
    and what's that you said? your voice is raspy.
    not to mention your skin is ashy,
    and you in the booth? bet it's a catastrophy.
    cus i spit real shit, this is apathy.
    addin to your homo "bio" where i let the truth speak.
    you rap like you got wayne's dick in your booty.
    but how im gonna rap, it stay a mystery.
    i'd deport you to africa if i had power like judge judy.
    at survival your ill, during rain you'd survive foreal.
    cus your skin could start a fire in an instant still.
    and your voice bein raspy , that aint classy,
    and that lip piercing? now i know your funky.
    you probably have a tongue earring
    cus you like the dick in your mouth feeling.
    not even recyclers would use the trash you speak.
    cus the wack shit would infect many a day,
    somethin like a never ending bubonic plague.
    you're superman with no grace,so i'll abate your disgrace.
    i'll beat you with my lyrics till you make way and dissipate.
    it seems as though the lyrics i speak is ya kryptonite,
    but it's dick that puts you to your knees in spite.
    so run off and play with them animals at the zoo.
    you'll befriend them because they look just like you.

    it's "the studio", don't take it personal
    “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

    -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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    • #3
      Re: 16bars?

      (Ignoring haters) I decided i might use one of Fredd's beats
      Download All Of Dreezy's Music @

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      • #4
        Re: 16bars?

        good job shadow
        im spittin benjamins, and u spittin washinton

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        • #5
          Re: 16bars?

          Originally posted by biggie>wayne
          good job shadow
          Thanks bro
          Download All Of Dreezy's Music @

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          • #6
            Re: 16bars?

            sick dude
            some killer punchlines
            Tha Carter Franchise <3

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            • #7
              Re: 16bars?

              Originally posted by Sh4d0w
              Originally posted by biggie>wayne
              good job shadow
              Thanks bro
              changed his avy...
              “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

              -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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              • #8
                Re: 16bars?

                Originally posted by YoungMoneyEnt
                sick dude
                some killer punchlines
                Thanks man!
                Download All Of Dreezy&#39;s Music @

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                • #9
                  Re: 16bars?

                  Originally posted by Sh4d0w
                  (Ignoring haters) I decided i might use one of Fredd's beats
                  following the footsteps of YNR lol i love it

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