Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

[Patriarch]

Since the last contest I started evoked such good and honest creations, while simultaneously pissing off shadow, I have decided to start a second contest - this time the focus will be on he other side of hip-hop. Whereas the previous contest stressed the meaning of the lyrics, this contest will focus more on flow. That's not to say that you should all abandon all meaning in your rhymes, but simply that the lyrical content will not be the first thing looked at. I want you all to blow me away with your multies, internal rhyme, alliteration, assonance, and all that good stuff. Like last time, here are some samples to give you an idea of what I'm looking for:

AZ - The Format
Royce Da 5'9" - Royce Is Like
Eminem - Lose Yourself

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

Throw ya hands up, throw ya fucking grams up
if a rapper think he better then me, stand up..
just like i thought, everybody sitting,
the rap game sinking, everybody spitting,
they claim they hardbody but everybody bitches,
these rappers like the weather everybody switching
everybody busting heads, everybody pitching..
but between me and you? i think everybody snitching
cause all the real rappers either dead or in prison
so ima keep it real right now why im living
i aint saying im the hardest dog i be fibbing..
if a hater run up tho, this is what i'd give em
a four five shot to the back of the head
if hes breathing im squeezing, ima clap till he dead..

[biggie>wayne]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

ok this be round 2.
round 1 i went in.
but still didnt win.
i am bout to kill it again.
i got this contest pinned.
every one is down, watch me win.
but lets flip this script.
time for me to light the whick.
and burn ur ass like a candle stick
i will murke this contest and leave the scene quick
then go home and watch my thick girl lick.
here is a tip dont stop till i cup.
u stupid slut i made u suck, u say u wanted money.
well u better run and not slip.
i will hurt u till i am done.
and when it is finished u will be dead and replinshed.
see this is kinda of creepy, u guys can call it a fetish.
now she is dead i take the golds out her teeth like a denist.
i am a monster, i got proof u can test it.

[king b.]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

add me to the list of people this shit pisses off. gay thread names and shit ... ffffffffffuuuuuuuuu

[trillphill]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

add me to the list of people this shit pisses off. gay thread names and shit ... ffffffffffuuuuuuuuu

aww, looks like king baby needs a diaper change. unlike your stupid posts that are uninformal and just make you sound like a bitch on a period, his threads produce creativity, something you lack in your recent posts. add me to the :list of people your that says your shit pisses off. gay posts and shit ... ffffffffffuuuuuuuuu"

[king b.]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

haha qq fag

[trillphill]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

haha qq fag

qq? last time i checked im dissin you im not crying, but you on the other hand, you're bitching like you've been on your period for a week straight

[DeadCivilian]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

Throw ya hands up, throw ya fucking grams up
if a rapper think he better then me, stand up..
just like i thought, everybody sitting,
the rap game sinking, everybody spitting,
they claim they hardbody but everybody bitches,
these rappers like the weather everybody switching
everybody busting heads, everybody pitching..
but between me and you? i think everybody snitching
cause all the real rappers either dead or in prison
so ima keep it real right now why im living
i aint saying im the hardest dog i be fibbing..
if a hater run up tho, this is what i'd give em
a four five shot to the back of the head
if hes breathing im squeezing, ima clap till he dead..

This shit here's pretty sick bro, props

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

Throw ya hands up, throw ya fucking grams up
if a rapper think he better then me, stand up..
just like i thought, everybody sitting,
the rap game sinking, everybody spitting,
they claim they hardbody but everybody bitches,
these rappers like the weather everybody switching
everybody busting heads, everybody pitching..
but between me and you? i think everybody snitching
cause all the real rappers either dead or in prison
so ima keep it real right now why im living
i aint saying im the hardest dog i be fibbing..
if a hater run up tho, this is what i'd give em
a four five shot to the back of the head
if hes breathing im squeezing, ima clap till he dead..

This shit here's pretty sick bro, props

thank u

[djsteezybeatz]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

haha qq fag

Get some hair on your balls sukkah

[Lil' Chamillitary]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

Yo Im sitting in my room
thoughtless as the rhymes hit me like boom
I found a stupid rhyme
although I wasted a whole lot a time
But nothing could go trough my mind
The same thing happen the first time
when Patriarch made a contest
Where I could have proven west is the best
But right now Im lost
I don't have anything to write for my coast
Im writing what im feelin
verses Im still killin
No I don't
Im old like James bond
my rhymes don't draw any pattern
Game is poisoned by the southern
If I ain't rappin about pussy and money
If I ain't make jokes that ain't funny
If I don't use the Auto tune
Thats mean I ain't no goon
Its all fucked up
White boys buy the most albums that new mc are putting up
Now yall hatin
get off wayne's site is wat u sayin
just because Im speakin truth
Im makin my move
Yall dissin me
but I don't give a fuck this is rap to me
Hip-Hop is what Im breathing with
I don't like when it get mixed with shit
Im a MC
And ya all can eat a phat dick if you don't like me

[MszYNR]

Re: Patriarch's Raparrific, Rapmazing Contest Part The Second

Throw ya hands up, throw ya fucking grams up
if a rapper think he better then me, stand up..
just like i thought, everybody sitting,
the rap game sinking, everybody spitting,
they claim they hardbody but everybody bitches,
these rappers like the weather everybody switching
everybody busting heads, everybody pitching..
but between me and you? i think everybody snitching
cause all the real rappers either dead or in prison
so ima keep it real right now why im living
i aint saying im the hardest dog i be fibbing..
if a hater run up tho, this is what i'd give em
a four five shot to the back of the head
if hes breathing im squeezing, ima clap till he dead..

That was frickin frackin amazing.