Baby Jake Droppin Bars Vol.3 (Wetter Remix) Youtube

[Baby Jake]

Re: Baby Jake Droppin Bars Vol.3 (Wetter Remix) Youtube

Actually sir i was born 11/08/90 northeast medical center so that makes me 19 dumbass..and yes i will win in a shit talking battle so just stop and idk why your still posting in my thread lol this is getting amusing lmao

[djsteezybeatz]

Re: Baby Jake Droppin Bars Vol.3 (Wetter Remix) Youtube

Oh you just look like you're thirteen, my bad. And shit talking battle? Sounds exhilarating. later.

[Baby Jake]

Re: Baby Jake Droppin Bars Vol.3 (Wetter Remix) Youtube

comment plz

[mykill]

Re: Baby Jake Droppin Bars Vol.3 (Wetter Remix) Youtube

Want some feedback eh? Time for.....MR SUPER HATER!

Buy a new hat.

i concur. Get that Colt's joint son. ALL THE WAY BABY!

Vol. 1
keep it simple: you need g.o.w.d. aka -> GET OFF WAYNE DICK. tired of people on wayne beats, try something outta the ordinary

well your work was aight, stop making videos and make a track. You look gay making videos.

very. go get fruity loops from an undisclosed location, do something that "makes it work uninhibited", and get a real mic to record. guess you got a web cam mic going? just a question. ya know you can go get a Philips karaoke mic from your local Wal-Mart for only 10 Georgies? sounds good enough to get something going to boot. wire hanger mic stand, $7 homemade pop filter and you're good to go. Google it.

Vol. 2
Fuck Mr. Hudson. Fuck that damn beat. Fuck people spittin' over it.

Actually sir i was born 11/08/90 northeast medical center so that makes me 19 dumbass..and yes i will win in a shit talking battle so just stop and idk why your still posting in my thread lol this is getting amusing lmao

.... :suprised: don't no one give a shit, this is the internutz! you still look like you iz 14 to most ppl, deal with it. Dont give em an explanation, just move teh fux on bru.

Vol. 3
30 secs of the 1:30 sec thing is the hook. lawl, "finally dropped them bars, baby jake, fully charged" -> wtf does that mean?

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Now, let's sum it up. You're a 14 year old in a dusty red cap, that doesnt make sense sometimes.....

Who isnt it? Constructively, I'd have to say though you're decent. I'd invest in some equip, find some GOOD beats that people havent been spitting over for days, and then learn to put those beats in Audacity and get some work in. Buy a Rhyming Dictionary while you're at it and try to diversify your lyrics. Witty punchlines + non-cliche word choice + solid flow = good rapper. You gotta put it all together, to get to where ya wanna be. Did that help?

Here's a beat you can spit to next while you work on getting stuff to record tracks -> 02-camron-oh_boy_(instrumental)-rns.mp3 - 4.8 Mb Ahhh...classics. Don't know nuttin' bout that Killa Cam son!

(P.S. To put some Hatin' Icing on the Hate-Cake, call yourself something else. B-Jeezy. B-Jizzle. Red Hawt. Oooh! J-Hawt. Baby Jake is gonna get us raggin' you for looking like you just hit puberty forever)