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  • Paradox - We Gonna Make It (freestyle)

    Here is a short snippet of a song I just recorded this morning. I will be re-recording it soon. It might be on my upcoming tape "the day the moon comes crashing down". Over the Ruff Ryders beat We Gonna Make it instro.

    Feedback would be appreciate?

    http://limelinx.com/files/5ee6acf699...2cefb2227e727c

    (verse)
    its about 10 in the morning,
    just woke up from a two hour nap, stretching, yawning.
    running on so little sleep, you can say Im an insomniac,
    dreamt that a bitch would arrest my heart, her name was cardiac.
    matter of fact, let me get straight to spitting,
    the shit Im here to spit, no chewing tobacco,
    fuck the calories, place the beef on my tacos.
    you talk shit, I hope your ready for the battle,
    haha. eh oh.
    case shit gets muddy I got my boots, my two arms, better yet two armies.
    fuck around and this great white, will get rid of you sardines.
    an idol to these haters, when they say shit to my face, they look up to me.
    these rappers looking like nails, Im get my MC hammer on.
    stop being stupid silly this moment isn't blonde,
    I kill moments, blonde moments, to be exact.
    uh!
    I got a needle, Ill pop your bubble,
    stay away from me, unless your a member in the huddle.

    .....

    Gemma Arterton

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    Re: Paradox - We Gonna Make It (freestyle)

    So you have a Jadakiss beat and a mixtape name based off Zelda: Majora's Mask?
    I like the color contrasts


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    • #3
      Re: Paradox - We Gonna Make It (freestyle)

      Well its going to be mostly freestyles over other peoples beats, I got a couple of my own beats as well. And wtf is Zelda? Ill do my research on zelda in a bit haha.

      Gemma Arterton

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      • #4
        Re: Paradox - We Gonna Make It (freestyle)

        Second paragraph, third line, new sentence.

        http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tatl#Tatl_and_Tael
        I like the color contrasts


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        • #5
          Re: Paradox - We Gonna Make It (freestyle)

          1) find a beat

          2) write the rap, to the beat.

          If its freestyling, freestyle. if its a rap you wrote and beat you're trying to make it work on, dont. it just sounds rushed, off, and annoying.

          Constructively: can you turn the music up on the track. barely can hear it

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