Well...yeah. First real song i actually sat down and 'wrote' Haven't done much of doing this at all, so any feedback is welcome. Please help me in what i can gain, and what i should lose.
I'm recording off of a webcam microphone, so not much help there
But here, check it out.
Lyrics:
Problems is what these girls givin' me
Tryna be my friend? More closer to the enemy
I'm just tryna do me, and have fun too
Females try to get under my skin like bugs do.
Yes, you know my swag is on a million.
My money raised higher, it's more like a billion.
I need a Brazilian, dark skin long hair
Ass so round, booty shaped like a fruit pair
She got small feet, and a little waist.
Her body so fit, that she could win first place.
But, lets get back to the money.
One grand, then five grand, now a hundred.
Watch me do me, haters can fall back.
Hope, spirit and courage is what you dudes lack.
Have a heart attack, when they hear me rap.
Your girl is like a keg, yeah she's been tapped.
By me, i'll be number one
And nine months later, she'll be havin my son
Then i'll be the winner when it's all said and done.
Gettin money and the power is how i won.
Little man can't do it like i can
I'll be takin trips, you're nowhere near Japan
Doing shows on the road wasn't part of the plan
But at the end of the day, i'm still the big man.
Chorus(x2)
I'm the man, you can't do it like i can
Being on the road wasn't part of the plan
But i gotta keep my head up as high as i can
and my feet on the ground for as long as i stand.
You know you paid, when you got Weezy witcha
Mess with us and we'll kill ya.
Betcha didn't know thats what we about
Haters keep talkin, shit leakin from your mouth
Next will be blood, flowin like a flood
Dirty white tee, cause you fell in mud
Slower than a slug, hit you with a slug
Now you feelin sluggish, you garbage like rubbish
Take your ass out, bury your body
No fingerprints, evidence, or shotty
Hop in your car, take it for a joyride.
Now you know that we have no reason to hide
Your girls on my side, she's my ride or die.
From the day that you died, nobody even cried.
Yeah, you know that we all lied.
Then we sat there and cried, laughing
as your last moments as you stared into my eyes.
Chorus(x2)
I'm the man, you can't do it like i can
Being on the road wasn't part of the plan
But i gotta keep my head up as high as i can
and my feet on the ground for as long as i stand.
I'm recording off of a webcam microphone, so not much help there
But here, check it out.
Lyrics:
Problems is what these girls givin' me
Tryna be my friend? More closer to the enemy
I'm just tryna do me, and have fun too
Females try to get under my skin like bugs do.
Yes, you know my swag is on a million.
My money raised higher, it's more like a billion.
I need a Brazilian, dark skin long hair
Ass so round, booty shaped like a fruit pair
She got small feet, and a little waist.
Her body so fit, that she could win first place.
But, lets get back to the money.
One grand, then five grand, now a hundred.
Watch me do me, haters can fall back.
Hope, spirit and courage is what you dudes lack.
Have a heart attack, when they hear me rap.
Your girl is like a keg, yeah she's been tapped.
By me, i'll be number one
And nine months later, she'll be havin my son
Then i'll be the winner when it's all said and done.
Gettin money and the power is how i won.
Little man can't do it like i can
I'll be takin trips, you're nowhere near Japan
Doing shows on the road wasn't part of the plan
But at the end of the day, i'm still the big man.
Chorus(x2)
I'm the man, you can't do it like i can
Being on the road wasn't part of the plan
But i gotta keep my head up as high as i can
and my feet on the ground for as long as i stand.
You know you paid, when you got Weezy witcha
Mess with us and we'll kill ya.
Betcha didn't know thats what we about
Haters keep talkin, shit leakin from your mouth
Next will be blood, flowin like a flood
Dirty white tee, cause you fell in mud
Slower than a slug, hit you with a slug
Now you feelin sluggish, you garbage like rubbish
Take your ass out, bury your body
No fingerprints, evidence, or shotty
Hop in your car, take it for a joyride.
Now you know that we have no reason to hide
Your girls on my side, she's my ride or die.
From the day that you died, nobody even cried.
Yeah, you know that we all lied.
Then we sat there and cried, laughing
as your last moments as you stared into my eyes.
Chorus(x2)
I'm the man, you can't do it like i can
Being on the road wasn't part of the plan
But i gotta keep my head up as high as i can
and my feet on the ground for as long as i stand.
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