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    This is my first project so don't be to hard on me, but tell me your opinion, whats good and whats bad!

    Take it out the wrapper, sit it on the stove
    Break a gram off and put it in my bitch nose
    She tells me how it feels, she's numb, she's froze
    Bitch! wake up and help me cook these o's
    I gotta get my cake up see all I eat is dough
    I'm a dangerous mothafucka watch your feets, your toes


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    Re: Feedback Please!

    I do like the whole idea behind what your tryin to do.

    Use the pen tool when cutting out Wayne and find some higher quality images. The Lil Wayne font looks a bit edgy I'm sure there's a file on the forums for is font or just the file.
    Fair enough you used brushes but don't use them too much it sometimes makes your work look cheap.
    Use textures and blend them in to make a back ground an mess around with brightness and contrast.

    Also just download some fonts and mess around with different fonts.

    Just keep on working on your work watch tutorials and you'll surely get better in time!
    Last edited by Waq1; 10-18-2011, 07:37 PM.



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    • #3
      Re: Feedback Please!

      First try then it's not bad.

      You should practice some blending, some blurring, some gradients etc.

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      • #4
        Re: Feedback Please!

        Originally posted by Waq1 View Post
        I do like the whole idea behind what your tryin to do.

        Use the pen tool when cutting out Wayne and find some higher quality images. The Lil Wayne font looks a bit edgy I'm sure there's a file on the forums for is font or just the file.
        Fair enough you used brushes but don't use them too much it sometimes makes your work look cheap.
        Use textures and blend them in to make a back ground an mess around with brightness and contrast.

        Also just download some fonts and mess around with different fonts.

        Just keep on working on your work watch tutorials and you'll surely get better in time!
        Great feedback! I knew my editing was bad, so if you liked my idea that is the best feedback I could get right now!
        Gonna try the pen tool out!

        ---------- Post added at 01:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 01:54 AM ----------

        Originally posted by ABjerg View Post
        First try then it's not bad.

        You should practice some blending, some blurring, some gradients etc.
        Will take a look at it
        Take it out the wrapper, sit it on the stove
        Break a gram off and put it in my bitch nose
        She tells me how it feels, she's numb, she's froze
        Bitch! wake up and help me cook these o's
        I gotta get my cake up see all I eat is dough
        I'm a dangerous mothafucka watch your feets, your toes

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