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    Round 2 Jrock23 Vs trillphill

    Im ridiculous, hard to discuss
    so dirty Mr. clean cant even spit shine this rust
    Put the pistol to your brain, squeeze the trigga
    White kid from Houston, TX acting like SHHhhhhh (nigga)
    Back to my message, back in session
    outlining trill's body in white chalk is todays class lesson
    put the chalk to trill's dome and begin to question
    if the red ploom of smoke is a good investment
    trillphill you tongue twisted, you musta missed it
    the thesaurus is online if you wanna visit it
    YOu talk like your from the Projects
    but I bet your a high tech white kid doing projects for college
    Im son of sam delirious, tear you apart like opponents vs. serius
    Because Im so serious, leaving people curious
    as to what made this cat so furious
    Ill be honest it starts in my mental
    Then it goes down synapses’ and then through my dentals
    Then Ill rip a track, lay heat on an instrumental
    Making trillphill second guess his hip hop credentials
    Listen I know you’re good at what you do
    You spit till ya lungs are blue through and through
    But you’re going against a seasoned pro, with a flow
    that contains katrina force winds that blow
    You talk slow about Brooklyn’s white snow
    Ill talk about fully converted auto AK’s that glow
    so lets prep your vien, begin the campaign
    to inject real lyrics as raw cocaine
    cause Im leavin trill's brain full of pain
    drowning him with hallucinations and mental strains
    It is not luck my skill is unreal, I contain mass appeal,
    That will leave your wounds from this battle hard to heal
    Cuz "You can be alot better" this site says
    I know that comment ruined your night going straight to ya head
    So you switched flow, with a finer thread
    But to think you can win against me you must be mad misled
    Because I can go for days, spitting under sun rays on Sunday
    setting paper ablaze with my pen just to amaze
    And that is the difference between me and a fake
    It’s natural, if I don’t write my hand begins to shake
    Vowels that tremor, making your body quake
    Vocal going in your ears trill, making your brain ache
    I guess you can say I’m a walking time bomb
    Approaching you with a pen as a detonator in my palm.
    And the explosion will resonate and employ white noise that annoys and destroys
    So trillphill its time to separate the men from the boys..

    Please don't vote on who you like best as a person but on who has the better lyrics, trillphill you have 24 hrs to reply back


    Y.O.L.O

  • #2
    Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

    You were only supposed to do 16 bars :suprised:

    No more or no less.

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    • #3
      Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

      Originally posted by KrisJohnson
      You were only supposed to do 16 bars :suprised:

      No more or no less.
      Nononononono it's okay I already did more than 16. I'll drop it later so yall can anticipate
      “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

      -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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      • #4
        Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

        Originally posted by trillphill
        Originally posted by KrisJohnson
        You were only supposed to do 16 bars :suprised:

        No more or no less.
        Nononononono it's okay I already did more than 16. I'll drop it later so yall can anticipate
        lol so suspensful
        Tha Carter Franchise <3

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        • #5
          Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

          Since we both decided to go over 16 bars it seems these are the only verses for the battle, so vote up.

          BitchCock you're fakin being a dude so Ima kill you in this bout.
          I'll have niggas callin you Pam when I put the Tommy in ya mouth.
          If acting like a nigga is bein you that's not what I'm about.
          Cus real niggas can rap and that's not what YOU'RE about.
          How does that sound? cus against K3v0 you straight ho'd man.
          You're such a failure I should sue the retards at Trojan.
          My confidence has grown man, the voters selection is easy.
          Cus you got lollipop rhymes and kiss bald guys like lil weezy.
          Don't even talk about class lesson shit cus you're fuckin illiterate.
          Nigga couldn't even win this rap battle if he re-wrote his lyrics.
          Oh wait he previously did and only won due to Patriarch.
          Your shit turned me bulimic cus it fuckin made me barf.
          And no your lines weren't sick, they were pathetic.
          Like Aids patients..only good for a little bit.
          You're like a bitch the way you try to disrespect
          till' I pull out that thing that you know'll getcha wet.
          And I ain't talking sex nigga, I'm talking ya death
          cus I'm known for night "caps" that'll take away your breath.
          My rhymes make you mope..even you know you have no hope.
          Cus I've faced one person better than you..and he No-showed.
          I'd thought you'd be decent at rappin being from New York.
          Well after reading your shit I'd say find a New Sport.
          You're in cohorts with all the retards on this site for Wayne.
          You probably are just like him...minus the fortune and fame.
          Yes I'm straight up callin you lame so get outta this rap game.
          Voters read this and get hyphy like Mac Dre cus you're gone after today.
          But why celebrate? I beat someone incompetent for this battle.
          Call for an emergency, better yet shake your baby rattle.
          Cus I'm gonna enforce harsh shit..call me cold and raw.
          My bars have you on lock more than Martial laws.
          You're flow is fuckin weak didn't I tell you on your first drop?
          We could get MIE to no-show and he'd still finish you off.
          I promise to stop, I had to go one to ask a Question.
          Cus you're pathetic..while I give voters hand erections.
          Why should I drop two when this one eats yours like Pac-Man.
          Dude you just get boo's..not girls..I'm talkin the voter's reaction.
          Victory for me is inevitable like death..I know you're hurt.
          This win is for K3v0 cus to me beatin you has no worth.


          Yes I was serious about the 4 bars before the last two, since we both wrote way more than 16, which I wanted, there's only one drop from us both.
          Voting is to be done in the thread, NO accounts made since the start of the tournament may vote and YOU MUST have around 30+ votes.

          You will vote following this as best as you can -

          personals: name
          metaphors/similies: name
          punchlines: name
          consistency: name
          flow: name
          multies: name

          Regardless you must say the positive and negatives of the verses, none of this "I just like that one better".

          Vote~
          “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

          -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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          • #6
            Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

            U aint have to do him like dat TrillPhill man.........................BUT Damn u ate his azz

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            • #7
              Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

              Originally posted by K3v0 Swa66
              U aint have to do him like dat TrillPhill man.........................BUT Damn u ate his azz

              K3v0 dude did you read his post below his 24 or 32 bars? only people with 30+ posts votes count so you vote doesn't count

              P.S i was 100% sure you was gonna vote for him regardless how good my lyrics was because he gave you a shout out and plus of my opinions that i stated in round one between me and you


              Y.O.L.O

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              • #8
                Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

                Originally posted by Jrock23
                Originally posted by K3v0 Swa66
                U aint have to do him like dat TrillPhill man.........................BUT Damn u ate his azz

                K3v0 dude did you read his post below his 24 or 32 bars? only people with 30+ posts votes count so you vote doesn't count

                P.S i was 100% sure you was gonna vote for him regardless how good my lyrics was because he gave you a shout out and plus of my opinions that i stated in round one between me and you
                I know I should've been more specific on my post count statement. I gave 30+ as a basis to go off of because people could just have a few posts and just vote for whoever, BUT I THINK it should be anyone over 15 posts, THE MAIN PART is that their account hasn't been made since the start of the event. I won't count Kevo's vote regardless because even if mine is better than yours and he proves it (which he didn't) you'd be mad about it.

                So we're still waiting for votes, people please read up and vote according to my set up.
                “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

                -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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                • #9
                  Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

                  DAT WASNT A VOTE I WAS JUZ SAYIN CUZ I DONT SHOW FAVORTIZM I MEAN IF JROCK BEAT U HE BEAT U BUT IN MY EYEZ HE DIDNT

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                  • #10
                    Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

                    Originally posted by K3v0 Swa66
                    DAT WASNT A VOTE I WAS JUZ SAYIN CUZ I DONT SHOW FAVORTIZM I MEAN IF JROCK BEAT U HE BEAT U BUT IN MY EYEZ HE DIDNT
                    Yes, I'm saying regardless he will bitch about your vote even if you truly do believe I won. If you want you can go ahead and still write your vote, but be very detailed and try to follow the setup I posted at the bottom of my Diss post.
                    “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

                    -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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                    • #11
                      Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

                      Originally posted by trillphill
                      Originally posted by K3v0 Swa66
                      DAT WASNT A VOTE I WAS JUZ SAYIN CUZ I DONT SHOW FAVORTIZM I MEAN IF JROCK BEAT U HE BEAT U BUT IN MY EYEZ HE DIDNT
                      Yes, I'm saying regardless he will bitch about your vote even if you truly do believe I won. If you want you can go ahead and still write your vote, but be very detailed and try to follow the setup I posted at the bottom of my Diss post.

                      How is that bitching and im just saying what you stated? if he says of u won or i won information about why would be respected


                      Y.O.L.O

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                      • #12
                        Re: Jrock23 Vs trillphill

                        for the sake of getting votes even though this is a Friday night and people are out, add- [READ & VOTE NOW] to the end of Jrock23 Vs trillphill, and fix it up, make Vs to "vs. and put my name as TrillPhill with those caps, much appreciated.
                        “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

                        -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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