Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [OVER]

[trillphill]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ & VOTE NOW]

So how many votes or hours until this voting call is over?

Give it till July 11th at night or the next day depending on how many of the normal users for The Studio want to vote.

[Patriarch]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ & VOTE NOW]

And the re writting lyrics line when you say it should be left off, what do you mean? It was paired with the previous bar.

I mean that it would have been better had you not included

"Oh wait he previously did and only won due to Patriarch.
Your shit turned me bulimic cus it fuckin made me barf."

because

"Nigga couldn't even win this rap battle if he re-wrote his lyrics."

can stand on its own. It is a punchline.

So your saying i did't utilize actual situations on this site on the diss what about "acting like a White kid from Houston TX" Cuz "You can be alot better" this site says I know that comment ruined your night going straight to ya head So you switched flow, with a finer thread? i understand and respect your opinions and thoughts but i feel a tournament is more then about dissing your opponent and by you saying "Jrock, I can't even figure yours out no matter how I look at it" i was going at more as a story telling/metaphors punchline battle there. but hey thanks for the pointers

I was talking about your flow when I said I "couldn't figure yours out" - don't misquote me. This isn't a cipher. It's a battle tournament. Usually people pick up on that after reading "vs." in the thread title. As for the quality of the disses, you have to understand that there's a difference between saying YOU ARE WHITE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAPUNCHLINE and taking a known situation, such as MIE not showing up, and interweaving that situation with your own ideas to create a diss.

[trillphill]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ & VOTE NOW]

And the re writting lyrics line when you say it should be left off, what do you mean? It was paired with the previous bar.

I mean that it would have been better had you not included

"Oh wait he previously did and only won due to Patriarch.
Your shit turned me bulimic cus it fuckin made me barf."

because

"Nigga couldn't even win this rap battle if he re-wrote his lyrics."

can stand on its own. It is a punchline.

Yea I realized that on another read through, I overlooked your meaning the first time. Why don't you hop in one of these tournaments

[Patriarch]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ & VOTE NOW]

The last time I was in one of these tournaments was before the site got hacked, up against YNR. I did a fair sized verse, then he showed up well past the deadline and posted something like 6 lines. This is where being hated by the vast majority of the board came to be a disadvantage. Then the site's server got hacked.

All of that pails in comparison to the fact that I really just don't like battle rap, though.

[trillphill]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ & VOTE NOW]

The last time I was in one of these tournaments was before the site got hacked, up against YNR. I did a fair sized verse, then he showed up well past the deadline and posted something like 6 lines. This is where being hated by the vast majority of the board came to be a disadvantage. Then the site's server got hacked.

All of that pails in comparison to the fact that I really just don't like battle rap, though.

Lol, too bad I wasn't here before the hacking I'd like to of seen all the stuff.
You must be doing some ho stuff for people to hate on you that much or he must've slaughtered your ass in 6 lines .
Nah just messing around, and I know I sound like a a motivator but how you gonna let that shit make you quit doing it
Than what do you do it not battle rap, write songs?

VOTE UP BITCHES (YES YOU YNR, Mszrockette, Js11, Lil Chamillitary, Sh4dow [even if you hate vote cus we know hittin' the booth up isn't getting you anywhere] , Yungmulacrazy?, Pestrator, All the WEEZY veterans, and so on..)

[weezyavelli]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ & VOTE NOW]

I took into account the fact that Trill went second (and thus had a chance to respond to some of the stuff said).

You mean feeding off his verse; yes I'm a leech

And the re writting lyrics line when you say it should be left off, what do you mean? It was paired with the previous bar. :suprised:

EDIT* forgot to say thanks for constructive criticism and I lol'd at my computer about how saying the in cohorts line won't get me any help in this battle
and did no one like the Pam and Tommy line? shit's too deep for you i see how it is

Yee i liked that Pam and Tommy line , you killed him with that !

Tommy <> Tommy Gun , like the one Tony Montana use lol

oh and my vote goes to Thrill .just likes your methaphors better
cant go deeper in that , i am no Patriarch

[JMSN]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ &amp; VOTE NOW]

TrillPhill had some sick lines.
He went way harder than Jrock,
Jrock didnt really diss Trill so it made it look terrible

final vote: TrillPhill

[JrockHQ]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ &amp; VOTE NOW]

Everyone is saying i didn't diss trill if im not mistaking i dissed him like two or three times, but i didn't realize a rap tournament is 100% about dissing in that case i would of done more of that but where im from you don't win battles just based on your dissing, you suppose to check the lyrics, flow, creatively, delivery, style, and punchlines, and then the disses. but i guess everyone isn't like that

[trillphill]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ &amp; VOTE NOW]

Yee i liked that Pam and Tommy line , you killed him with that !

Tommy <> Tommy Gun , like the one Tony Montana use lol

oh and my vote goes to Thrill .just likes your methaphors better
cant go deeper in that , i am no Patriarch

OMG NOT AS IN THAT, as in they're gonna call him PAM (Pamela Anderson) when I put the Tommy (as in Tommy Lee) in ya mouth referring to that sex video they had, and yes I'm referring to the gun at the same time

Everyone is saying i didn't diss trill if im not mistaking i dissed him like two or three times, but i didn't realize a rap tournament is 100% about dissing in that case i would of done more of that but where im from you don't win battles just based on your dissing, you suppose to check the lyrics, flow, creatively, delivery, style, and punchlines, and then the disses. but i guess everyone isn't like that

Okay, than what are you supposed to rap about if you're against me in a rap tournament? check any battle on youtube or anything and you clearly see it's not about making yourself look good or rapping about some bullsht that has nothing to do with the other person. Punches define who's is better.

[JrockHQ]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [READ &amp; VOTE NOW]

Alight so thus far from the looks of the votes looks like trillphill won so i'll say the battle is over, good stuff trill

[trillphill]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [OVER]

Okay, good battle too regardless of the shit I've talked to you recently ; you went hard in your drop.

[JrockHQ]

Re: Jrock23 vs TrillPhill [OVER]

Okay, good battle too regardless of the shit I've talked to you recently ; you went hard in your drop.

Yeah you where dope to, i think the finals should of been between us two