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    This might sound familiar to some of you. Its the final version of "Unthinkable". This version has a new beat, with a sampled hook. This version is 100X better in my opinion. I wish i would've had this beat when i was first trying to do this song. I was able to let the right emotion out. The lyrics are on some real shit, which is where some of the emotion comes from. The lyrics relate more to me, yall probably wont understand them fully. But i hope yall like this song. Its the single for my upcoming mixtape called "I Told You So". Which will be dropped within a month im hoping! Well check out the song, download, leave some feedback, spread the link to your friends! Thanks.

    Download: Young Fire - Giving Up

    Yeahh, im bout to tell you how my 'life is'
    I wake and I grind till the 'lights dim'
    THP, man you guys aint 'like them'
    A second home to me is any place that a 'mic is'
    I dont 'like kids' but I will 'father the game'
    Shootin for my goals, but I dont 'bother to aim'
    Thinkin back how things changed up in the 'sixth grade'
    Didnt think that things would ever end up 'this way'
    Got to high school, didnt think people were 'this lame'
    But I told them cut the bullshit, no 'switchblade'
    And still, they all remain 'bitch made'
    Yall dont think im hot? Well thats not what ya 'bitch say'

    And ive been rappin since 'sixteen'
    Livin' life fast, bout imma bout to switch to 'six speed'
    I just 'rip scenes', so 'frequently'
    The best newcomer up, man they probably all 'thinkin me'
    Now I get respect but I still gotta few 'doubters'
    Hip hop's on the rise and it couldnt do this 'without us'
    Moved on through the rubble and forgot about the struggle
    Started hanging with this crew that got me in some trouble
    Moved on from that shit, I left it 'all behind'
    Now people lookin at my skills like its the 'rawest find'
    'At this time', Im tryna stay 'real and calm'
    But you never realize what you got 'until its gone'
    Im out



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    Last edited by THA GR8 M8; 07-10-2010, 07:52 PM.



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    Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

    Flow:4.8/5: you rode this beat really fucking well bro. you never fell off and kept a great flow throughout!
    Lyrics:5/5: really felt the lyrics. you put a lot into this i can tell.
    Overall: 4.7/5: one of the best tracks dropped on HQ. your personal best track imo.

    save me a spot on that mixtape homie! and keep doing tracks like this!

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    • #3
      Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

      Thanks man



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      • #4
        Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

        Realest shit I've heard from you.
        Tha Carter Franchise <3

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        • #5
          Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

          Originally posted by YoungMoneyEnt View Post
          Realest shit I've heard from you.
          Real shit bro. Thanks man. Theres gunna be alot of this shit on my new mixtape!



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          • #6
            Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

            I like this version alot better. Great emotion too.

            Flow: There's a few drop offs, like maybe youre running out of breath. Comes from being a smoker though probably. I have the same problem sometime.
            Lyrics: The lyrics were good, real shit is the best.
            Other: This is a great song man. Good work building anticipation for your tape. I'll be on the lookout for it. Hopefully its longer than Ascension though. And is THP's new tape still dropping?

            Overall:4/5

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            • #7
              Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

              Fuckin love the track YF.....Verse 2 was crazy as hell, flow was smooth. Great Lyrics. 5/5 for me on some real shit.

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              • #8
                Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                can't stop listening to it. good job man. its way better than the other beat. glad to hear you'll have more of these songs. thats what i like to hear
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                • #9
                  Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                  Really appreciate the feedback everyone. But...

                  Nino - Thanks man haha. I love my 2nd verse too. Thanks for the 5/5, i hope you really enjoyed it.

                  Mc Crary - Thanks for the feedback. This tape will definitely be longer. Ive already got work done for the tape. Gunna have probably 10ish tracks on it. Maybe a couple bonus' too. The THP mixtape is still on too, but JMoney been going through some busy times so we havent had time to work on it yet.

                  Snowman - Thanks man. You always peepin' my songs. Respect bro.



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                  • #10
                    Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                    Damn you got mad talent. No shit, this is the best song i have heard on HQ.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                      Flow: Crazy flow, shit fit with the beat perfect
                      Lyrics: One of the realest songs i've heard from you, the lyrics were on point
                      Other: Diggin' the second verse alot, keep up the good work bro, & can't wait for your tap to drop
                      5/5



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                      • #12
                        Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                        flow - was good just a few bars a little off, maybe they were too short or too long.. but i didnt affect it that much
                        lyrics - good
                        overall - 4/5 good job Young Fire

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