Who Dat by MC_Crary

[MC_Crary]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

I'll give you indecent exposure/needed the doisha and no feather/ho wetter. But lines like
Sweet taste sweet sound for your ears
Smellin like a pound eyes lookin like a deer
Can't count as a multi because what comes inbetween the words don't rhyme. Therefore you're just rhyming a word at the end of the line and the middle of the line. It's two different lines, not one multi

Mutlti syllable rhyme means that you rhyme more than one syllable of a bar with more than one syllable of the next bar and so on.

[WKinhere]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

Lol, it's called an internal rhyme, dumbass.

no its called shit dumbass

Why would you spell bitch without the t, twice in a row lol. Nah, jk. The first two lines came to me they way I spit em. If the first two lines don't satisfy you read through the rest of the lyrics, you might find something you like.

thats cool hommie, i just dont like that "style", but i can tell u dont be takin shit to serious. Keep it up bro

[MC_Crary]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

no its called shit dumbass



thats cool hommie, i just dont like that "style", but i can tell u dont be takin shit to serious. Keep it up bro

Not takin it seriously at all bro, just lettin ya know

[WeezyFcrazY]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

You got somthing goin on but i think the quality is pretty bad the shit's all over the place ur voice to loud or somthing
lyrics or good to me 3.5/5
flow was good but u fell off somtimes 3/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

Yeah this track is off the tape. Nobody seems to really be feelin it. Back on the grind comin up with harder shit. Might drop something tonight.

[shbasketball12]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

Flow- It was a little bit choppy i think.
Lyrics- They were great. Nice rhymes. Perfect for this beat.
Other-It sounded like you were losin your breath a little bit. Its not that noticeable though
Overall-4/5 jus work on your flow and youll be all good

[Harry62]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

Turn the gain knob down on your vocals and do a little EQing. Good beat.

[morphineroberts]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

MC Crary>>>J Cole

You get a perfect 5 for this shit, sir!
Delivery was on point forever. I could learn something from you

[MC_Crary]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

MC Crary>>>J Cole

You get a perfect 5 for this shit, sir!
Delivery was on point forever. I could learn something from you

I appreciate that to the fullest ,my brother, but I think you listened to the wrong song man lol. I'm not even putting this track on the tape anymore.

[morphineroberts]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

I got the 32 to the song you sent me...I'mma try to get it recorded today

[MC_Crary]

Re: Who Dat by MC_Crary

Fixed the mastering on this track, and its going on the mixtape now. I'm gonna drop a song tomorrow.