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    Show Me What You Got


    First single from Break Your F*ckin Radio....

    Might post the lyrics later, depending on feedback

    Street Date
    September 7th 2010


  • #2
    Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

    not a bad song bro u just need to work on ur flow it was off a good amount on here just practice ur songs alot be4 recordin n if u can liek memorize ur lyrics so then they can flow easier i liked the lyrcis on here though but decent track bro keep it up

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    • #3
      Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

      Flow: Different. Style I've never seen from ya, but not bad by any means. Needs work maybe, but I feel bad telling any and everyone (with only slight exceptions) they need work on their flow lol
      Lyrics: Good deal. Keep getting witty. Keep gettin at em.
      Other Notes: hook's off. not bad, just off beat. like you moved it by mistake when you were putting things together. i like how you're stepping up your mastering game, with that double hook voice. nice

      OVERALL - 3/5

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      • #4
        Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

        Flow: u gotta nice flow
        Lyrics: lyrics were pretty good. was this a freestye or written?
        Overall: 3/5

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        • #5
          Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

          Pestrator :Thanks for the feed man, I'll continue working on the flow.
          Mykill: Glad you notice the doubling of the hook. I heard the offbeat part, I'm gonna fix it before thew tape drops.
          Youngtalent: It was written thanks for checking it out.

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          • #6
            Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

            Just not feeling this one, sorry. Feel this is your weakest song you put out in awhile... Sorry.



            protect dunston at all costs

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            • #7
              Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

              Have to agree with yf, not good at all. dont mean to be harsh but its the truth..

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              • #8
                Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

                dude, it's like u rushed the hole song
                take ur time and repeat, it's like u wrote ur stuff and just recorded it and posted take 1
                memorize ur lyrics and flow and repeat the shit
                overall it's really great
                but with ur mistakes u made it bad
                "Ok, they say my girl look regular
                But having a bad bitch don’t make you better bruh
                And she don’t diss me like your bitch ass
                She’ll let me fuck your girl and even help me spread that bitch ass"


                Nappy Mula Baby !

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                • #9
                  Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.

                  Thanks for the honest feedback guys.

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