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Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.
Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.
not a bad song bro u just need to work on ur flow it was off a good amount on here just practice ur songs alot be4 recordin n if u can liek memorize ur lyrics so then they can flow easier i liked the lyrcis on here though but decent track bro keep it up
Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.
Flow: Different. Style I've never seen from ya, but not bad by any means. Needs work maybe, but I feel bad telling any and everyone (with only slight exceptions) they need work on their flow lol
Lyrics: Good deal. Keep getting witty. Keep gettin at em.
Other Notes: hook's off. not bad, just off beat. like you moved it by mistake when you were putting things together. i like how you're stepping up your mastering game, with that double hook voice. nice
Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.
Pestrator :Thanks for the feed man, I'll continue working on the flow.
Mykill: Glad you notice the doubling of the hook. I heard the offbeat part, I'm gonna fix it before thew tape drops.
Youngtalent: It was written thanks for checking it out.
Re: Show Me What You Got by MC_Crary First Single from new mixtape.
dude, it's like u rushed the hole song
take ur time and repeat, it's like u wrote ur stuff and just recorded it and posted take 1
memorize ur lyrics and flow and repeat the shit
overall it's really great
but with ur mistakes u made it bad
"Ok, they say my girl look regular
But having a bad bitch don’t make you better bruh
And she don’t diss me like your bitch ass
She’ll let me fuck your girl and even help me spread that bitch ass"
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