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  • Noble - Go To Sleep

    New shit, hope y'all are feeling this. People wanted some deeper shit... Listen to the lyrics closely!

    I wipe, the fire from my mouth
    Like I was a dragon just tryna guard the princess' house
    Anybody come up on it, well they better just bounce
    Or imma have to spit these lines to show 'em what I'm bout
    Make 'em pout, make 'em cry, make 'em wish that they didn't try
    I'm the guy, I'm so fly, and my rythm never dies
    Oh why? That questions easily answered
    I get the crowds shakin' like a dancer, I'm handsome
    Rhymes are sick, they in the same group as cancer
    Never go away, they are driven like a Lancer
    Hold these beat for ransom, never ever give 'em up
    But their spirits still lifted up like hemi truck
    Many rappers stuck in the mainstream ways
    But ever since the day I started I remain the same
    And thats the way Ill stay, till I rest in peace
    And if you tryna change that you better go to sleep

    Hardly ever go to sleep since I started rappin'
    But sometimes during the day I just find myself nappin'
    But when I catch that my first reaction
    Is to, get up in the booth with every bit of passion
    That I have, but sometimes it ain't enough
    And sometimes I get carried away with the wrong stuff
    This ain't a bluff, I just tell it how it is
    But the answers don't always match to the questions on the quiz
    And yeah I been through some crazy shit, made it through the hardest nights
    Then the first thing that comes to mind, is just start to write
    And some of the dumbest things I left, are my smartest rights
    But still music is my love so I guess that means my heart is right
    Never tryna step back, always tryna take the lead
    But sometimes I end up in a problem that is just so deep
    But the book on the cover ain't how it seems
    And if you don't understand well you better go to sleep

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    Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

    Terrible.
    Not This Is Wow. 5/5

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    • #3
      Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

      Originally posted by WeezYIsCraaazY View Post
      Terrible.
      Not This Is Wow. 5/5
      Appreciate that, dude.



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      • #4
        Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

        Did You Say You Have A New Mixtape Dropping Soon Or Was That Someone Else?

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        • #5
          Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

          Originally posted by WeezYIsCraaazY View Post
          Did You Say You Have A New Mixtape Dropping Soon Or Was That Someone Else?
          I was gunna release one soon, but I'm gunna hold off on it for a bit. I wanna get better before my new mixtape comes you know. I wanna show improvement with each new mixtape. But I will be putting out lots of material still!



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          • #6
            Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

            its an allright track imo u should have added power to ur voice on it instead of having that effect on ur voice i liek the lyrics n ur flow is on point i jsut dont liek the effect on ur voice 3.5/5

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            • #7
              Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

              Originally posted by THP850 View Post
              I was gunna release one soon, but I'm gunna hold off on it for a bit. I wanna get better before my new mixtape comes you know. I wanna show improvement with each new mixtape. But I will be putting out lots of material still!
              Oh Well You Have Proved That This Shit Is Going On My iPod

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                Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

                Originally posted by Pestrator View Post
                its an allright track imo u should have added power to ur voice on it instead of having that effect on ur voice i liek the lyrics n ur flow is on point i jsut dont liek the effect on ur voice 3.5/5
                What effect on my voice? And this track was meant to be more chill, which is why my flow/voice is more laid back.



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                • #9
                  Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

                  Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                  What effect on my voice? And this track was meant to be more chill, which is why my flow/voice is more laid back.
                  lol oh then nv but it seemed liek u used an efect to make ur voice sound liek far awayish n kinda just diff to fit the beat but yea i understand that but thats just my opinion ike u should have made ur voice more present but its still a good track thats just my opinion

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                  • #10
                    Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

                    More feedback?!?!



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                    • #11
                      Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

                      The vocals are really low on this, which is weird coming from you (your stuff is usually on point). I'll listen to it on my surround sound.

                      Lyrics:Good lyrics. Showing diversity on this one. Is this an orginal song or somebody else's?
                      Flow: Flow was good from what I could hear. Didn't catch any drop offs or anything.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

                        Flow - 6.5/10
                        Lyrics - 10/10

                        I've never gave a 10 outta 10, but i really like what i hear... Great job, I think you could of did better with your voice tho.

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