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Damn, been on the lookout for more new music by you and shit. This was worth the wait. The flow was crazy good. It was so on point. The lyrics... I didnt like how you said "Eight fifty" I think if you said "Reppin for the eight five o" would sound better but nbd. My favorite line:
And I go hard in the mufuckin' paint
I go hard when you mufuckers can't
I stay high as a mothafuckin' plane
I'm so raw thats why you mothafuckers hate
10/5
(It sounded like you started singing at the beginning of the last line )
Thanks man! And the end was just alittle freestyle type thing I added. I think it made it end better lol. Glad you enjoyed it.
Overall: 4/5, Nice freestyle with some gems in there and good delivery. Flow wise there's some work that's apparent, but nothing that doesnt come with time. Great job!
pretty good track bro there are some parts i dont liek on the begginning and on the very end but on the middle leaning towards the end it was all on point n ur lyrics were killer bro i liek the q tip tribe called quest line it was fire keep it up bro 3.5/5
Great track man, your startin to ride the beat more. Your flow's always been pretty good but you accenting the right words and shit now. Your lyrics were pretty called to man. Group's called a Tribe Called Quest though, just saying. You always come pretty hard with the multies and the qtip line followed by the tribe line was sick. Waiting fot he new music man, sounds like youre gonna be doing some big things in the near future, I'll be on the lookout.
I go hard in the mufuckin' paint brah Roll an eighth up, smokin' only dank brah See, Imma kill all of these rappers with my wordplay Take 'em back to school mayne like they in the first grade And when I say I'm killin' this, believe its in the worst way Reppin' for the 8-50, do it for my birth place Get the booth shakin' up like there was an earthquake If they say I ain't hot, thats false info you heard 'em say Uhh, and Imma beast when it comes to this Cause I got you all sayin' damn before the verse play Uh, and you know I'm fuckin' killin' this Its that all natural flow, yeah I stay real as shit And shout out to my haters, y'all better just chill and dip Cause if you comin' with negativy, seal your lips Uh, but now I'm on that new shit If you didn't hear me clearly get your ass a Q-tip THPs my crew, we a tribe on a quest And we stay equipped with 16's, its the survival of the best mothafucker But I ain't gunna take a break Room smellin' like teen sprit, I'm about to paint my face And my team stay winnin' shit, yeah we in a race But we were born to do this so I guess its all fate And I go hard in the mufuckin' paint I go hard when you mufuckers can't I stay high as a mothafuckin' plane I'm so raw thats why you mothafuckers hate
You're like a natural with the way you construct the lyrics. I loved the way you managed to incorporate Nirvana and The Tribe into your punchlines. The flow of the lyrics couldn't have been more on point. All i gotta say is that you're better than me at keeping it infectious. I got a hand full of jewels in this shit that i wanted for myself...
Oh well.
5/5 + 5/5
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