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  • Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

    New collab between me and Explicit, expect many more. Take a listen and let us know what you thought of the song and our verses. Thanks, its really appreciated.

    Noble - I Told You So | Explicit - Therapy Treatment
    COMING SOON!

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    Hook
    This is life, starin' at the stars
    Life isn't about the money and all of the cars
    Life is what you make it, day by day
    You take the wrong step, you'll be fading away
    X2

    Verse 1 (Explicit)
    Can someone tell me what the fuck is going on here
    It seems that lately I've ran outta luck, can't even shed a fucking tear
    I'm angry at every person that walks my way
    I don't know whats gotten into me, I'm cursing like its my last day
    I stare right out my window, the window that I stare out
    How long will I live for, how many years I got left to doubt
    Thinking about all the decisions that I've done in the past
    Drinking large amounts of precision, that will quickly put me in a cast
    Rain drops hit the glass, and slowly slide down
    Even though that I'm alone, I'm up and you can't get me down
    But people change, they never stay the same
    People take the wrong step, and then they fade away
    That's why I'm thankful for what i got, cause I could die any day

    (Hook)

    Verse 2 (Noble)
    See I tell 'em, I tell em', this ain't for the fame
    I do it for the fact that some things just really need to change
    Its hurts me to see things like this, shit it even brings me pain
    But in the future, all of this will probably just be the same
    And these days things material, this ain't how its meant to be
    And if it don't change eventually, then this life really ain't meant for me
    And if you ain't bout change then you won't get a cent from me
    And just know that you can't sin for free, I got demons that been sent for me
    And my past ways would've led me to my last days
    I'm the sole director of my life, and I'm just hoping that my cast stays
    But people change, they never stay the same
    People take the wrong step, and then they fade away
    And I'm just thinking about this shit every fucking day

    (Hook)

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    protect dunston at all costs

  • #2
    Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

    Alright so I listened and I must say it's pretty good bro! The beat is dope, the verses are nice, and the hook is catchy. You did really good as usual. Explicit killed this shit too. I like this because its deep, seems like it has meaning to it and it has emotion in it and emotion in music is good. It seemed like that, atleast. Overall good track, cant wait for "I Told You So" and the other tracks.

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    • #3
      Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

      Dope ass beat, I like the hook.

      Explicit kill's you though...


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      • #4
        Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

        Flow: B
        Lyrics: B

        Overall: 3.5/5, Better than others, but nothing majorly astounding. Good effort by both parts. Flow's could be tightened up a bit, but mostly on point throughout the whole song. Lyrics are solid. Good job fellas.

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        • #5
          Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

          Originally posted by chapweezy View Post
          Alright so I listened and I must say it's pretty good bro! The beat is dope, the verses are nice, and the hook is catchy. You did really good as usual. Explicit killed this shit too. I like this because its deep, seems like it has meaning to it and it has emotion in it and emotion in music is good. It seemed like that, atleast. Overall good track, cant wait for "I Told You So" and the other tracks.
          Appreciate that bro! Glad you liked it!

          Originally posted by mykill View Post
          Flow: B
          Lyrics: B

          Overall: 3.5/5, Better than others, but nothing majorly astounding. Good effort by both parts. Flow's could be tightened up a bit, but mostly on point throughout the whole song. Lyrics are solid. Good job fellas.
          Thanks man! I always forward look to your feedback! Appreciate you checking out the song!



          protect dunston at all costs

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          • #6
            Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

            4.5/5, This Song Is Fire!

            You Both Seem To Have Simillar Rapping Style's And Voices Which Works Very Well On The Songs. The Chorus Is Sweet, And The Beat Is Perfect For This Song. Can't Wait For More Collab's .

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            • #7
              Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

              dope ass beat and song topic - fading away , i like that.

              explicit continues to bring the dopeness, shitting on everyone in the studio.
              dope flow, and lyrics. i like the emotion here.

              noble brought a nice addition and expressed more emotion than usual, and switched his flow up.
              his emotion in this was very impressive, and nice lyrics and flow as well.


              WOW, very nice song guys, u sound good together, u should do an entire mixtape collab.

              yall probably the top 2 best in the studio, so a mixtape together would be epic.
              EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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              • #8
                Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

                explicit kills his verse i like his verse there some parts were he could kinda tighten up his verse liek mykill said but he did the hook is solid
                i liek ur verse too i liek how his voice hits harder n urs doesnt really hit as hard just cause of how ur voice is so its a nice combination good lyric and flow yall killed this keep it up 4/5

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                • #9
                  Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

                  Thanks for the good reviews everyone! There will definitely be more collaborations between Explicit and myself.



                  protect dunston at all costs

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                  • #10
                    Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

                    Is Explicit on this forum?

                    Your verse was good seemed off beat a little bit though, Explicits was good as well.

                    Overall track-4/5

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                    • #11
                      Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

                      Originally posted by Cody View Post
                      Is Explicit on this forum?

                      Your verse was good seemed off beat a little bit though, Explicits was good as well.

                      Overall track-4/5
                      Yeah, His username is Explicit.

                      http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/explicit-54887



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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

                        Originally posted by YoungTune. View Post
                        Yeah, His username is Explicit.

                        http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/explicit-54887

                        Oh, never seen him on here before.

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