Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

@THP i see what your getting at now. thanks for clearing it up bro. for all of ya'll who don't really know Noble, he is one of the most intelligent rappers alive. read his lyrics more than once, everytime you look at them you will figure out a new reason behind his lyrics, trust me. he's showed me the proof many times. i've skipped over some of his bars before and then went back and re-read them carefully and saw the true meaning behind them.

#thetakeover

Yeah man. I always try to make every line as good as I can, or make a group of 4 lines blend well. I spend lots of time thinking about the smallest things lol.

[JayBabyyy]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

I rate this song 4.5/5

Lyrics - Deep, although it does tend to fall off beat just a sec but it's still good. Nicely done.

[Explicit]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

wow thank you ALL for your great feedback, glad you guys enjoyed the song

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

Yessir! Thanks for all of the feedback!

[4747]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

Sorry for the late feedback homie, but I wanted to listen a few times before leaving any.

I'm not gonna give you both seperate feedback like others have because it's one track, if one of you was very off in this song then the whole song wouldn't be good.

So on to the feedback....Flow would be a solid 4.5/5 from me, very on point but there is always room for improvements to make it just a bit more natural and smooth so I don't want to give a straight 5 for it. Lyrics - Explicit had a great verse but had flaws with the verse starting about being down then later saying "Even though that I'm alone, I'm up and you can't get me down". I personally prefer Noble's choice of lyrics, they blew me away, especially throwing in the punchline about cent's whilst still keeping it completely on the same topic. So lyrically another 4.5/5 from me.

Overall it has to be a 4.5/5 from me, it is a great track, and oh as I said on msn I did end up sending it to a few people haha Great job on the track!!

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

Thanks man!!! Really appreciate it!



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