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  • Coleon - Introduction Verse

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    (Verse)

    These haters listen, respect me and pay attention
    They'd pay admission, just to hear me say a fuckin sentence (I'm)
    Sicker than half of y'all, better at rappin raw
    You get no dap at all, you touch the mic and pass it off
    I'm tappin jaws, rockin faces with my combinations
    Your job is blatant, cause hatin's your occupation
    .........I been waitin, I'm ready to hold it down
    I haven't had a cavity, so there's no steel-in-my-crown
    I get down, dirty, and grimey for real
    If Cole met his match you must be lightin a grill
    I'm live with the skill, anyone beside me is killed
    If you survive a cypher with me then most likely you're ill
    The mic that you wield....is gettin stole in a flash
    Like an indian's soul whenever ya snappin a photograph
    Grab a cloak and mask...I move in silence
    Takin over crews like Somalian pirates
    Last edited by Coleon; 12-30-2010, 07:37 PM.


  • #2
    Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

    Flow - Near perfect imo. Like the way you flowed throughout the whole song.
    Lyrics - Fire. Better from in the other songs I heard you in.
    Overall - A solid 4.5/5.



    protect dunston at all costs

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    • #3
      Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

      Appreciate the feed. I'm guessing you heard me in the Pryomaniac songs?

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      • #4
        Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

        Originally posted by Coleon View Post
        Appreciate the feed. I'm guessing you heard me in the Pryomaniac songs?
        Yeah.



        protect dunston at all costs

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        • #5
          Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

          I just recently got my quality how it should be. Gettin better by the day now nikka.

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          • #6
            Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

            Dope man. Look forward to hearing more of your music.

            Btw, lololol @ your status.



            protect dunston at all costs

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            • #7
              Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse
              Flow - Very nice flow, kept it up very well.
              Lyrics - Deep. Period. haha
              Overall - 4.5/5
              Yo tell the world to hold their breath...
              Their breathing the wrong air...
              This world belongs to me and this hippie with long hair...

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              • #8
                Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

                Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                Dope man. Look forward to hearing more of your music.

                Btw, lololol @ your status.
                Word. Dreezy is dope.

                Originally posted by BBeasley View Post
                Flow - Very nice flow, kept it up very well.
                Lyrics - Deep. Period. haha
                Overall - 4.5/5
                Thanks man.

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                • #9
                  Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

                  I don't rap by the way regarding your question in your intro thread haha.

                  This was sick though I mean the flow was very good there were points where I was reading the lyrics while you were spitting them and I didn't think you'd be able to pull off the speed and timing for each line and word but you didn't do a thing wrong.

                  Lyrics were good too, had some great multi-ryhmes going on at some points which made it sound real nice

                  The beat was also really sick. Good job overall, keep it up.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

                    Ayee this shit is dope imo. I'd do a song with yo ass no doubt.
                    Lyrics: nice as fuck, like the cavity line
                    Flow: was nice too, white boy can flow on these hoes
                    Other: Wish it was longer
                    Overall: 4/5 keep it up my nig

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                    • #11
                      Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

                      Coleon killin it. He even got the best rapper alive to compliment him :O

                      http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
                      http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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                      • #12
                        Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

                        Originally posted by Wisheezy View Post
                        I don't rap by the way regarding your question in your intro thread haha.

                        This was sick though I mean the flow was very good there were points where I was reading the lyrics while you were spitting them and I didn't think you'd be able to pull off the speed and timing for each line and word but you didn't do a thing wrong.

                        Lyrics were good too, had some great multi-ryhmes going on at some points which made it sound real nice

                        The beat was also really sick. Good job overall, keep it up.
                        Good break down man. Thanks for taking the time out to peep it. More to come soon.

                        Originally posted by DreezyBaby View Post
                        Ayee this shit is dope imo. I'd do a song with yo ass no doubt.
                        Lyrics: nice as fuck, like the cavity line
                        Flow: was nice too, white boy can flow on these hoes
                        Other: Wish it was longer
                        Overall: 4/5 keep it up my nig
                        Thanks man. I just got over a cold that stopped me from recording for a few days. Maybe we can bang something out down the road.

                        Originally posted by Sentus View Post
                        Coleon killin it. He even got the best rapper alive to compliment him :O
                        Sentus play nice lol.

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