Coleon - Introduction Verse

[Coleon]

Feedback:
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(Verse)

These haters listen, respect me and pay attention
They'd pay admission, just to hear me say a fuckin sentence (I'm)
Sicker than half of y'all, better at rappin raw
You get no dap at all, you touch the mic and pass it off
I'm tappin jaws, rockin faces with my combinations
Your job is blatant, cause hatin's your occupation
.........I been waitin, I'm ready to hold it down
I haven't had a cavity, so there's no steel-in-my-crown
I get down, dirty, and grimey for real
If Cole met his match you must be lightin a grill
I'm live with the skill, anyone beside me is killed
If you survive a cypher with me then most likely you're ill
The mic that you wield....is gettin stole in a flash
Like an indian's soul whenever ya snappin a photograph
Grab a cloak and mask...I move in silence
Takin over crews like Somalian pirates

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Flow - Near perfect imo. Like the way you flowed throughout the whole song.
Lyrics - Fire. Better from in the other songs I heard you in.
Overall - A solid 4.5/5.

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Appreciate the feed. I'm guessing you heard me in the Pryomaniac songs?

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Appreciate the feed. I'm guessing you heard me in the Pryomaniac songs?

Yeah.

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

I just recently got my quality how it should be. Gettin better by the day now nikka.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Dope man. Look forward to hearing more of your music.

Btw, lololol @ your status.

[BBeasley]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Flow - Very nice flow, kept it up very well.
Lyrics - Deep. Period. haha
Overall - 4.5/5

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Dope man. Look forward to hearing more of your music.

Btw, lololol @ your status.

Word. Dreezy is dope.

Flow - Very nice flow, kept it up very well.
Lyrics - Deep. Period. haha
Overall - 4.5/5

Thanks man.

[Wisheezy]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

I don't rap by the way regarding your question in your intro thread haha.

This was sick though I mean the flow was very good there were points where I was reading the lyrics while you were spitting them and I didn't think you'd be able to pull off the speed and timing for each line and word but you didn't do a thing wrong.

Lyrics were good too, had some great multi-ryhmes going on at some points which made it sound real nice

The beat was also really sick. Good job overall, keep it up.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Ayee this shit is dope imo. I'd do a song with yo ass no doubt.
Lyrics: nice as fuck, like the cavity line
Flow: was nice too, white boy can flow on these hoes
Other: Wish it was longer
Overall: 4/5 keep it up my nig

[Sentus]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

Coleon killin it. He even got the best rapper alive to compliment him :O

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Introduction Verse

I don't rap by the way regarding your question in your intro thread haha.

This was sick though I mean the flow was very good there were points where I was reading the lyrics while you were spitting them and I didn't think you'd be able to pull off the speed and timing for each line and word but you didn't do a thing wrong.

Lyrics were good too, had some great multi-ryhmes going on at some points which made it sound real nice

The beat was also really sick. Good job overall, keep it up.

Good break down man. Thanks for taking the time out to peep it. More to come soon.

Ayee this shit is dope imo. I'd do a song with yo ass no doubt.
Lyrics: nice as fuck, like the cavity line
Flow: was nice too, white boy can flow on these hoes
Other: Wish it was longer
Overall: 4/5 keep it up my nig

Thanks man. I just got over a cold that stopped me from recording for a few days. Maybe we can bang something out down the road.

Coleon killin it. He even got the best rapper alive to compliment him :O

Sentus play nice lol.