Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

ah alright tonight for sure. i'll get fucked up after i record

Come on dawg get it moving lol, with all due respect you've had a long time to do it now

[Young Corruption]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

i know i know i'm sorry man i was in San Francisco this weekend and i'll for sure get it to you tonight. i was all barred out and on x last week so when i recorded i sounded too chill. i'm usually faster than this again i'm sorry

[Sentus]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

This is a great beat, Life & Death is a monster, I love him.

1st Verse- Vocals are really soft, I know the beat is soft so it kind of works but you need to put a little more power and distinction in your voice so you're more easily heard. Accent isn't a problem for me cause I've heard worse, I kinda liked it. Lyrics are pretty good, very heartfelt and you were saying some good stuff not just the same old, same old. I would suggest practicing multis a little bit more, I don't think I heard any but I might be wrong. I know this is an emotional song so you shouldn't use them over the top but little multis at the end of the line doesn't hurt.

Chorus-Great chorus, it went right with the beat and you were actually a pretty good singer, good use of the autotune too. However this could have been much better with better quality.

Verse 2- This delivery is much better, the first person needs to rap with more passion in his voice like it. Lyrics were good as well, I really felt what you were saying. You had better rhymes than the first guy but you could work on your multis as well.

Verse 3- Much stronger accent lol, doesn't bother me cause I have an open mind but it might most people. I basically have the same feed for you as number 2.


Pretty good song overall, it was deffinitely something worth listening to again and I didn't hate it so keep it up.