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Llame 'Pa Verte / Black & Yellow / Do It (Hustle Hard) - Harvey Soto
Re: Llame 'Pa Verte / Black & Yellow / Do It (Hustle Hard) - Harvey Soto
Not Afraid // Rating: 4.5/5
Lyrically this song's pretty powerful. Religion is always a hot topic to some, and its refreshing to see that become a intricate part of the rhymes and your persona. Good delivery here. Best Lines: "The beat is still goin' so I ride it like a horseman", "Now I keep going like E-T-C"
Wake Up // Rating: 4./5
I like your voice. I wish there was conviction and feeling in your delivery though. Lyrics and Flow are pretty good. (B+) The way you did the hook was pretty good. Best part of the song to me. That the original hook from the original song?
On My Level // Rating: 3/5
Quality on this one is kinda lower than the others. Dont think the bars on this one are as impactful as the previous two tracks. Understand the Wiz mimic ya did here, I did the same thing when I covered this song, but the chorus could use some work and better mastering.
Re: Llame 'Pa Verte / Black & Yellow / Do It (Hustle Hard) - Harvey Soto
@mykill thanks for rating them man! Not Afraid is one of my favorites. That is my own hook on Wake Me Up. On My Level is kinda tricky cause even wiz khalifa sounds like he's talking on that one. I don't know how to mix/master at all so that's how it's going to sound but I wish I knew how to. It bothers me all the time haha thanks man.
---------- Post added at 02:10 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:09 PM ----------
Intro to a 3rd mixtape I'm working on along side of "Oh Hey What's Up Man II" and this one will be called "Originality" with all original beats. Check it out, thanks!
Why'd u do that beat? So dated... But none the less, still a good beat. DONT FORGET TO FOLLOW THE RULES: Put some work in and get some feedback for these other people if you expect em to check your stuff out.
Flow: B-
Lyrics: B+
Overall: 3/5, When you hit that "all my lyrics are in BOLD" part, you need more intensity there. With this beat, and the lyrics that you penned for this, you should have come WAYYYYY harder. Punches are pretty good here. Nice and clever, but some are kind of corny. If you're looking for collabos for real, this is a great place to find some people that'll work with you, but like I said above, you gotta be active here and give them feedback or else no body is gonna pay attention to you. I really like how you're progressing Harvey. Stay cool.
Thanks for the reply man! I did this beat cause I heard it in the car and liked it again. Old beats are sometimes better than new ones. I still have no clue how to mix master so it's tough but thanks man!
Re: Llame 'Pa Verte / Black & Yellow / Do It (Hustle Hard) - Harvey Soto
Anytime Harvey. Just make sure to check out other people's stuff on here and give them some feedback too. It helps you, and you're continued efforts to help them will make everyone become better artists. Cheers!
Re: Llame 'Pa Verte / Black & Yellow / Do It (Hustle Hard) - Harvey Soto
Here's my first listen to your work and I gotta say it was pretty tight. Your flow is what made this song (Talkin Low) good. There were time where I noticed you weren't really saying shit, but it still just sounded good lol. Average lyrics over an old mainstream poppy beat with a sick flow. There were some obvious cuts at some points throughout the song though. Good job, you should check out MyKill's new track featuring myself and let me know what you think in there man. 4/5
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