LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

[mrr3ye5]

What up people, haven't posted a free verse shizz in a minute.. but i'm coming back slowly peeps..
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[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Bump?.. lol.. ya'll forgot about me..

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Swagg and voice is nice 4/5

flow steady and on point 4/5


lyrics, alright 3/5


overall 3.8/5


sometimes kinda corny or amateur lyrics,
but ya flow/voice is nice so it make up for it, so it not so bad, keep it up.

[MC_Crary]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Good to hear you again man. You sound like you've been practicing your flow. Even with the switch ups, you stay killin. The lyrics are pretty good. Reminds me of a rap city freestyle or something like. Quality's not so bad either. Wish we could've gotten on a track together for No Surrender, No Retreat. Guess you were too busy. You remind me of Yung Jin, hope thats not a weird comparison.

[Artille]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Wow, this wasn't too bad actually. This is my first time listening to you, not bad. You have nice quality, do you do your own mixing? Lyrics were pretty good, but there were a few corny ones like DIEZEL said.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Swagg and voice is nice 4/5

flow steady and on point 4/5


lyrics, alright 3/5


overall 3.8/5


sometimes kinda corny or amateur lyrics,
but ya flow/voice is nice so it make up for it, so it not so bad, keep it up.

Thanks for the feedback bro, I took a different approach on this verse, I basically rapped without writing, and just spitting what came to mind

---------- Post added at 08:21 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:20 PM ----------

Good to hear you again man. You sound like you've been practicing your flow. Even with the switch ups, you stay killin. The lyrics are pretty good. Reminds me of a rap city freestyle or something like. Quality's not so bad either. Wish we could've gotten on a track together for No Surrender, No Retreat. Guess you were too busy. You remind me of Yung Jin, hope thats not a weird comparison.

yeah bro, my bad for not jumping on that track with yah, but we'll for sure do a collab soon, thanks for the feedback meng.. yung jin? haha thats tight, i like the dude

---------- Post added at 08:21 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:21 PM ----------

Wow, this wasn't too bad actually. This is my first time listening to you, not bad. You have nice quality, do you do your own mixing? Lyrics were pretty good, but there were a few corny ones like DIEZEL said.

thanks man, i'm still trying to find my flow, and yeah i do my own mixing

[T-DOLO]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

nice...nice consentration...nice lyrics....waiting to hear more form you

[mykill]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Flow: A
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4/5, Seems like you've hammered your flow down to perfection man. Good deal. Flow on this one is really really on-point. Some of the rhymes were kinda elementary, but with the flow being so on point and the delivery being so good, I dont even notice that much. Sounds pretty pro. That chorus was kinda bleh. Good job LaNNy

[Redd Herring]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Flow: your flow had mad swag I fucks with it extra tough
Lyrics: when i first the first couple cars I thought i'd be disapointed but you definitely came back and smashed that joint
Other Notes: not much to say except keep doin your thing
Overall/Rating: 4/5

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Flow - Flowed it really nice. More emotion would make it sound better.
Lyrics - Pretty good. A few lines like others said.
Other - Never realized how dope this beat was lol.
Overall - 3.5/5. Keep it up braah.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

thanks for the feedback ya'll keep it coming

[indiglo09]

Re: LaNNy - Chillin' (Free Verse)

Nice track man Liked the beat nd your flow on it.
Lyrics: 3.5/5 - thought some weren't great but just went 2 keep your verse goin along
Flow:4/5 - really like it on this song
Overall: 3.75/5 - Keep it up man nd maybe drop a full track 2 c how u approach it