Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

[THA GR8 M8]

Rollin' all day. This is the outcome. Shouts to the homie HK for the cover!

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See we rollin', you don't even understand
We all just tryna get in to a space, and than we'll never land
People ask me where I'm goin
I just tell 'em to a place that they ain't been before (been before)
X2

See we rollin' up, what the fuck you think that rillo for?
We all just tryna get to a place that we ain't been before
Rollin' down this road of life, I'm cruising down the interstate
And we keep the windows up, we choosing not to ventilate
.....And whats the speed limit anyways?
I'm tryna get to cloud 9 before the sun begins to fade
Right now thats my focus, wait let me smoke this
.....We ain't the losers in this winners race
Bottle full of aqua, now lets down this capsule
Feelin' oh so natural, my level is past you
Am I fuckin' rollin'? Why the fuck you asking me
I'm in a whole other galaxy

(Hook)

3 O's of that sticky shit, lets roll up at least fifty spliffs
You ain't on this rotation, bitch go have a pissy fit
I be on my spiffy shit, clean fit, hat forward
Bitch you know I'm ballin', you don't even hit that backboard
And ya tracks boring, mine be on fantastic shit
Record a song, smoke some more, then I go and master it
Then I listen it to it, sounding like classic hit
Play that song, smoke some more, than I go and smash ya bitch
This that kinda high, you won't feel up in your life time
They ask how I'm feelin', I say I'm quite fine
On a flight line, runnin' to a fuckin' place that we ain't been before
So we roll up many more
Swag

(Hook)

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[Cody]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

I like the verses, they are not bad. I didn't like the hook at all though. About a 3.8/5

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

The chorus isn't the best, but the beat and your lil "aggresive" way of rappin' in this fits the flow good and all verses are dope. You should make another chorus, cause the verses are good.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

I like the verses, they are not bad. I didn't like the hook at all though. About a 3.8/5

Yeah, I've gotten lots of bad feedback on the hook. But thanks man!

The chorus isn't the best, but the beat and your lil "aggresive" way of rappin' in this fits the flow good and all verses are dope. You should make another chorus, cause the verses are good.

Yeah, I think I'm gunna work on a new hook tomorrow! Thanks for the feedback!

[mykill]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

you stoles my beat! lol

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

you stoles my beat! lol

He killed ya beat?

[Eazy_F_Baby]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

4/5 for you lol but yeah the hook... keep going bro !

[Artille]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

I like the direction you went with this, but I don't think you executed it very well. The chorus had potential, but the bad singing being drowned with hard autotune really ruined it. You need to work on spitting still. Some of your lyrics are hard to understand, mainly when you try to fit too much on one line. So some of the words become hard to understand. Lyrics were good and on topic, saw a few nice punchlines in there as well. Overall, I disliked it mainly due to the chorus. Nice seeing you try other styles though.

[mykill]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

He killed ya beat?

i reckon. u think im mad or something?

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

Finishing up the version with the new hook now. I hope everyone will check it out again to let me know what they think.

---------- Post added at 03:58 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:40 PM ----------

Peep the version with the new hook everyone!


http://thpmusic.bandcamp.com/track/to-a-place

[mykill]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

Peep the version with the new hook everyone!

NICE! Maybe put some reverb on it... slight delay on the (been before) part. instead of a flanger, maybe give it a doubler

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

NICE! Maybe put some reverb on it... slight delay on the (been before) part. instead of a flanger, maybe give it a doubler

The reverb was sounding really weird with the spacey feel on the beat. I even put a tiny tiny bit, still gave the hook a weird sound.