Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

[MC_Crary]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

I like this track alot man. This kinda beat definitely fits your flow.That slowed throwed flow fits you, especially since you say have a problem with breath control. Your wordplay was really nice on this too. I didn't hear the version with the other hook, but I like this one a lot. Keep up the great work man.

[Artille]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

That's a better hook than before, but I can't say that I really like it still. The song overall is better though.

[mykill]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

The reverb was sounding really weird with the spacey feel on the beat. I even put a tiny tiny bit, still gave the hook a weird sound.

turn the "spacey feel" off and turn a doubler on for the hook, then try the reverb and let me know how it sounds. (just a suggestion)

[DeezyMac]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

I fuck with this song up until the backboard line. Because up to that point, the song was consistent and had a central theme. After that line, you kind of went off on a tangent whilst still trying to incorporate the main topic. The Ballin' Line, and the subsequent lines up to "smash ya bitch" don't seem to really fit in. The beat is bananas. But I've always liked Vybe Beatz. The chopped "See" in the beginning of the first verse seemed awkward. I actually like the chorus. It has the 'high' feeling to it. That 'close ya eyes and bob ya head' feel. Wasn't too complex because it didn't have to be. Think it's been said before, but if you buff it up and make it stand out more, it'd be dope. Lyrics were on point and you definitely have a stoner's voice to make this a plausible track. Lol. Feel like a third verse would have been better for it. Abrubt ending is abrupt. But yeah.

3/5

[Eazy_F_Baby]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

now this shit is way better, i might dowload, good song 2 get high too lol

[mykill]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

incoming remix...DONE

[Coleon]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

You had some weird pauses in the chorus but I like the muffled sound of it.
Cool subject matter and I'm glad there's a theme to this. Very fitting for the beat.
Your flow is maturing a lot, I can see the your progress from the first stuff I heard from you.
I didn't like the ending to your second verse, closers are important factors.
Overall it was a cool song and sounded well put together.
The only real technical critiques I have are the pauses in the chorus
and sometimes you cut a line off to hit the next one "winner's race" "begins to fade" "rillo for" but mostly "fantastic shit".
Keep it up Noble, stoner music is a necessity in my life haha.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

I like this track alot man. This kinda beat definitely fits your flow.That slowed throwed flow fits you, especially since you say have a problem with breath control. Your wordplay was really nice on this too. I didn't hear the version with the other hook, but I like this one a lot. Keep up the great work man.

Thanks man, I prefer this version of the hook better so I'm glad I did change it...

That's a better hook than before, but I can't say that I really like it still. The song overall is better though.

Thanks man, sorry you weren't feeling it.

I fuck with this song up until the backboard line. Because up to that point, the song was consistent and had a central theme. After that line, you kind of went off on a tangent whilst still trying to incorporate the main topic. The Ballin' Line, and the subsequent lines up to "smash ya bitch" don't seem to really fit in. The beat is bananas. But I've always liked Vybe Beatz. The chopped "See" in the beginning of the first verse seemed awkward. I actually like the chorus. It has the 'high' feeling to it. That 'close ya eyes and bob ya head' feel. Wasn't too complex because it didn't have to be. Think it's been said before, but if you buff it up and make it stand out more, it'd be dope. Lyrics were on point and you definitely have a stoner's voice to make this a plausible track. Lol. Feel like a third verse would have been better for it. Abrubt ending is abrupt. But yeah.


3/5

Thanks man. The 'ballin' line was off topic. But after that... I feel the lyrics fit the theme. The song is about rollin' (Smoking weed and rollin' on X, both of them I incorporated), and being on your level. And I'm sure others can agree that when you are on your level, recording is a thing that is really fun... and something I enjoy while being high. So I incorporated that into there. And the chopped 'See' yeah lol. I was trying something new, I thought it was decent. But thanks for the review man! Much appreciated!

now this shit is way better, i might dowload, good song 2 get high too lol

Yeah definitely, this is the kind of music I enjoy making the most...

incoming remix...DONE

You killed it bro!

You had some weird pauses in the chorus but I like the muffled sound of it.
Cool subject matter and I'm glad there's a theme to this. Very fitting for the beat.
Your flow is maturing a lot, I can see the your progress from the first stuff I heard from you.
I didn't like the ending to your second verse, closers are important factors.
Overall it was a cool song and sounded well put together.
The only real technical critiques I have are the pauses in the chorus
and sometimes you cut a line off to hit the next one "winner's race" "begins to fade" "rillo for" but mostly "fantastic shit".
Keep it up Noble, stoner music is a necessity in my life haha.

Thanks man! Glad you are seeing progress. I'll work on pauses, but I think they fit good to make the hook seem apart from the verses. Thanks the man. Being able to bump your own stoner music while high is amazing, thats why I love making it haha.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

post the autotune hook, i didnt hear it.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

post the autotune hook, i didnt hear it.

I honestly don't have it anymore smh. I was dumb when I switched the hook. Replaced the file on the desktop when I saved the new hook version. And save the project file on Mixcraft with new hook version when it was done. No way to get it.

[WeezYIsCraaazY]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

Feedback:

Lyrics: Sound Really Good Bro. You're Really Stepping That Side Of Your Music Up!
Flow: Sounded Good, One One Part You Missed The Drop (Not Sure What It's Called) By Like 1/3 Of A Second; Barely Noticeable.
Chorus: Not That Bad... Keep It Up!

4/5.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Noble - To A Place (Prod. By YungExclusive)

Feedback:

Other: The Intro Sounded Good, Voice Wise.

u talkin bout the chorus?? what intro?