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  • Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

    Still haven't set up my mic (Did it on garage band)..but I write all the time.....let me know what yall think...I started this about 2 years ago...and just added some shit tonight..

    Stream/Download: LimeLinx - Preview - My Life Real shit.mp3


    Lyrics:

    Cli-City nigga
    Ohk I’mma go all the way in until the beats over
    Climbing steadily up to the top until I see hova
    And the I reach over, and then I creep closer
    Until he has no choice but to hand that seat over
    I got bras, I mean I got bars
    But since im standing on my own I don’t fuck with A and R’s
    See this industry corrupted they only willing if you hitting
    They so busy looking for Jordan, they don’t even notice pippen
    They on that bullshit and me I’m rhyming
    They say your clock is wrong nigga, I reply perfect timing
    see the doubters become shouters when the routers start signaling
    the haters become fans when the money start getting in
    that’s just the way it is, same shit different urinal
    in the booth, homicide… nigga spitting funerals
    death bars, I speak from the heart
    bleed on the pad, I aint wearing no Teflon
    Im tired of getting step on
    Stop moving or I tear them fucking legs off
    And Mail em to your step moms, damn you
    This aint a game this the real world cancun
    Fake niggas fake fucking friends
    When will it fucking end
    We in two different lanes nigga stop cutting in
    and if that bitch just wanna talk, tell that hoe fuck it then
    no time matters of the broken heart
    time never stops, got to build it up my noahs ark
    I speak my mind and if you read between the lines
    You recognize the real lies with in me word to Kendrick
    Overly Dedicated, under appreciated
    Overly confident so they under appreciate him
    Aint worrying my head with all these rap critiques
    So if you find me dead tomorrow you know rap didn’t
    Stay on your tippy toes niggas
    God flow like the baby in a manger
    Yea And when I spit these flows nigga
    Don’t act like you know me…. to me you are a stranger
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    Mississippi x California x North Carolina




  • #2
    Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

    Flow: B-
    Lyrics: A

    Overall: 3.75/5, Lyrics are more than "on point", shit's phenomenal. Recording needs work though. A few technicals that hold ya back, but other than that this is a pretty smooth track. Good beat choice. Good subject matter. Nice concept you got here. You say you did this in Garage Band? Not bad really. If you get a good mic and a pop filter, you'll be good to go. A few plosives here and there, but nothing too bad. You got a good presence on the mic too. Just add a bit more into your delivery and you'll be great to listen to. Keep doin' what you are doin sir!

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    • #3
      Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

      aight aight aight ... hold on hold on .. Garage band nigga ? lol

      Your flow is dope
      Your lyrics : Not bad..

      You need to get a mic so you can drop a better and more music and shit namean ? so you can compete with them other niggas
      You also have the potential to become one of the dopest in the studio ya digggg

      Keep doin ya thing son and good luck ..
      "Always had a black tool,even when i was at school 'cuz bullies aren't bulletproof..."

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      • #4
        Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

        Originally posted by matbouli View Post
        aight aight aight ... hold on hold on .. Garage band nigga ? lol

        Your flow is dope
        Your lyrics : Not bad..

        You need to get a mic so you can drop a better and more music and shit namean ? so you can compete with them other niggas
        You also have the potential to become one of the dopest in the studio ya digggg

        Keep doin ya thing son and good luck ..
        Good look nigga...that's big right there....

        Originally posted by mykill View Post
        Flow: B-
        Lyrics: A

        Overall: 3.75/5, Lyrics are more than "on point", shit's phenomenal. Recording needs work though. A few technicals that hold ya back, but other than that this is a pretty smooth track. Good beat choice. Good subject matter. Nice concept you got here. You say you did this in Garage Band? Not bad really. If you get a good mic and a pop filter, you'll be good to go. A few plosives here and there, but nothing too bad. You got a good presence on the mic too. Just add a bit more into your delivery and you'll be great to listen to. Keep doin' what you are doin sir!
        Blessings man...Yea I have a mic but i gotta buy some other shit...to make the little studio im putting together complete
        Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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        • #5
          Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

          Whoa, wasn't expecting this, no offense. Shit's dope.

          Flow: B (Yeah, I'm stealing the lettering system) - You have a classic, laid back flow. It's nice and relaxing. Flowed well with the beat, but with that being said, I couldn't picture you on a real hype beat.

          Lyrics: B+ - Nice as fuck. You stayed on point and didn't jump around many topics, like I said, you have a classic hip-hop feel to you. I can bump your mixtape while smoking and playing madden or some shit.

          Overall: 4/5 - Overall, good song. The recording quality's a little lacking, but sounds good if you recorded this off of garageband. Do you a mic or was it built in? Either way, it was cool. Wasn't exactly crispy, but it wasn't terrible and didn't take away a lot of the song.


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          • #6
            Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

            Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
            Whoa, wasn't expecting this, no offense. Shit's dope.

            Flow: B (Yeah, I'm stealing the lettering system) - You have a classic, laid back flow. It's nice and relaxing. Flowed well with the beat, but with that being said, I couldn't picture you on a real hype beat.

            Lyrics: B+ - Nice as fuck. You stayed on point and didn't jump around many topics, like I said, you have a classic hip-hop feel to you. I can bump your mixtape while smoking and playing madden or some shit.

            Overall: 4/5 - Overall, good song. The recording quality's a little lacking, but sounds good if you recorded this off of garageband. Do you a mic or was it built in? Either way, it was cool. Wasn't exactly crispy, but it wasn't terrible and didn't take away a lot of the song.

            I'm on my macbook pro...so the mic is built in...I knew the quality would've have been terrible...but I wanted to test it out..I'm glad you guys liked it...
            Imma start writing something to a more hype beat and see how I sound on those types of songs.....
            Thanks again for the feedback
            Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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            • #7
              Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

              dawg that was dope i love the lyrics and the flow was pretty good. just get a mic man lol sound would be so much better but for using garage band its decent. those mac mic's are pretty decent compared to the alienware one i have. but just get more into the music and to sound as bored while rapping and you will be good
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              Props to Woocky

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              • #8
                Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

                Does anybody here use USB mics? are those any good
                Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                • #9
                  Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

                  Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                  Does anybody here use USB mics? are those any good
                  pretty much everyone in here uses a usb mic cause you can get really good quality and also the easiest to set up
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                  Props to Woocky

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                  • #10
                    Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

                    That's dope man.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

                      Originally posted by DARKAVELI View Post
                      That's dope man.
                      Thanks bro..
                      Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                      • #12
                        Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

                        dude you should post more often. I like yo ish

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