Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

[Cli-City]

Still haven't set up my mic (Did it on garage band)..but I write all the time.....let me know what yall think...I started this about 2 years ago...and just added some shit tonight..

Stream/Download: LimeLinx - Preview - My Life Real shit.mp3


Lyrics:

Cli-City nigga
Ohk I’mma go all the way in until the beats over
Climbing steadily up to the top until I see hova
And the I reach over, and then I creep closer
Until he has no choice but to hand that seat over
I got bras, I mean I got bars
But since im standing on my own I don’t fuck with A and R’s
See this industry corrupted they only willing if you hitting
They so busy looking for Jordan, they don’t even notice pippen
They on that bullshit and me I’m rhyming
They say your clock is wrong nigga, I reply perfect timing
see the doubters become shouters when the routers start signaling
the haters become fans when the money start getting in
that’s just the way it is, same shit different urinal
in the booth, homicide… nigga spitting funerals
death bars, I speak from the heart
bleed on the pad, I aint wearing no Teflon
Im tired of getting step on
Stop moving or I tear them fucking legs off
And Mail em to your step moms, damn you
This aint a game this the real world cancun
Fake niggas fake fucking friends
When will it fucking end
We in two different lanes nigga stop cutting in
and if that bitch just wanna talk, tell that hoe fuck it then
no time matters of the broken heart
time never stops, got to build it up my noahs ark
I speak my mind and if you read between the lines
You recognize the real lies with in me word to Kendrick
Overly Dedicated, under appreciated
Overly confident so they under appreciate him
Aint worrying my head with all these rap critiques
So if you find me dead tomorrow you know rap didn’t
Stay on your tippy toes niggas
God flow like the baby in a manger
Yea And when I spit these flows nigga
Don’t act like you know me…. to me you are a stranger

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[mykill]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 3.75/5, Lyrics are more than "on point", shit's phenomenal. Recording needs work though. A few technicals that hold ya back, but other than that this is a pretty smooth track. Good beat choice. Good subject matter. Nice concept you got here. You say you did this in Garage Band? Not bad really. If you get a good mic and a pop filter, you'll be good to go. A few plosives here and there, but nothing too bad. You got a good presence on the mic too. Just add a bit more into your delivery and you'll be great to listen to. Keep doin' what you are doin sir!

[matbouli]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

aight aight aight ... hold on hold on .. Garage band nigga ? lol

Your flow is dope
Your lyrics : Not bad..

You need to get a mic so you can drop a better and more music and shit namean ? so you can compete with them other niggas
You also have the potential to become one of the dopest in the studio ya digggg

Keep doin ya thing son and good luck ..

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

aight aight aight ... hold on hold on .. Garage band nigga ? lol

Your flow is dope
Your lyrics : Not bad..

You need to get a mic so you can drop a better and more music and shit namean ? so you can compete with them other niggas
You also have the potential to become one of the dopest in the studio ya digggg

Keep doin ya thing son and good luck ..

Good look nigga...that's big right there....

Flow: B-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 3.75/5, Lyrics are more than "on point", shit's phenomenal. Recording needs work though. A few technicals that hold ya back, but other than that this is a pretty smooth track. Good beat choice. Good subject matter. Nice concept you got here. You say you did this in Garage Band? Not bad really. If you get a good mic and a pop filter, you'll be good to go. A few plosives here and there, but nothing too bad. You got a good presence on the mic too. Just add a bit more into your delivery and you'll be great to listen to. Keep doin' what you are doin sir!

Blessings man...Yea I have a mic but i gotta buy some other shit...to make the little studio im putting together complete

[ATLien666]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

Whoa, wasn't expecting this, no offense. Shit's dope.

Flow: B (Yeah, I'm stealing the lettering system) - You have a classic, laid back flow. It's nice and relaxing. Flowed well with the beat, but with that being said, I couldn't picture you on a real hype beat.

Lyrics: B+ - Nice as fuck. You stayed on point and didn't jump around many topics, like I said, you have a classic hip-hop feel to you. I can bump your mixtape while smoking and playing madden or some shit.

Overall: 4/5 - Overall, good song. The recording quality's a little lacking, but sounds good if you recorded this off of garageband. Do you a mic or was it built in? Either way, it was cool. Wasn't exactly crispy, but it wasn't terrible and didn't take away a lot of the song.

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

Whoa, wasn't expecting this, no offense. Shit's dope.

Flow: B (Yeah, I'm stealing the lettering system) - You have a classic, laid back flow. It's nice and relaxing. Flowed well with the beat, but with that being said, I couldn't picture you on a real hype beat.

Lyrics: B+ - Nice as fuck. You stayed on point and didn't jump around many topics, like I said, you have a classic hip-hop feel to you. I can bump your mixtape while smoking and playing madden or some shit.

Overall: 4/5 - Overall, good song. The recording quality's a little lacking, but sounds good if you recorded this off of garageband. Do you a mic or was it built in? Either way, it was cool. Wasn't exactly crispy, but it wasn't terrible and didn't take away a lot of the song.

I'm on my macbook pro...so the mic is built in...I knew the quality would've have been terrible...but I wanted to test it out..I'm glad you guys liked it...
Imma start writing something to a more hype beat and see how I sound on those types of songs.....
Thanks again for the feedback

[Young Corruption]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

dawg that was dope i love the lyrics and the flow was pretty good. just get a mic man lol sound would be so much better but for using garage band its decent. those mac mic's are pretty decent compared to the alienware one i have. but just get more into the music and to sound as bored while rapping and you will be good

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

Does anybody here use USB mics? are those any good

[Young Corruption]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

Does anybody here use USB mics? are those any good

pretty much everyone in here uses a usb mic cause you can get really good quality and also the easiest to set up

[Syko]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

That's dope man.

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

That's dope man.

Thanks bro..

[RaYZoR]

Re: Cli-City- My Life (Prod. Streetrunner)

dude you should post more often. I like yo ish