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Dreezy did his thang on this....Some punchlines could've been left out...but overall a great verse....."I still rap on wax even under the candle heat" dope line
Akkucc....your verse was funny as fuck....I respect it for what it was....you shouted out HQ so you good nigga...
Overall dope track....
Lyrics 3/5
Flow 3/5
Overall 3/5
Dreezy I would really like to hear you out of your element....like on some J Cole type shit...Mississippi x California x North Carolina
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Mixtape's gonna be fire.
Dreezy - Lyrics: 3.5/5 - Like Cli-City said, some punchlines could've been left out, but overall, nice shit.
Flow - 4/5 - It wasn't that it fell off, you just pronounced some shit really, really weird. Other than that, good flow as usual.
Overall - 4/5
Akkucc - Lyrics: 3/5 - You have definitely got a lot better, seriously. I wanna hear you on a more serious song about something personal to you or around you. Would be dope.
Flow: 3.5/5 - Fell off a few times, but it was actually pretty good. I like.
overall: 3.5/5
Song overall:
3.9/5
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Originally posted by Cli-City View PostDreezy did his thang on this....Some punchlines could've been left out...but overall a great verse....."I still rap on wax even under the candle heat" dope line
Akkucc....your verse was funny as fuck....I respect it for what it was....you shouted out HQ so you good nigga...
Overall dope track....
Lyrics 3/5
Flow 3/5
Overall 3/5
Dreezy I would really like to hear you out of your element....like on some J Cole type shit...
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Originally posted by ATLien666 View PostMixtape's gonna be fire.
Dreezy - Lyrics: 3.5/5 - Like Cli-City said, some punchlines could've been left out, but overall, nice shit.
Flow - 4/5 - It wasn't that it fell off, you just pronounced some shit really, really weird. Other than that, good flow as usual.
Overall - 4/5
Akkucc - Lyrics: 3/5 - You have definitely got a lot better, seriously. I wanna hear you on a more serious song about something personal to you or around you. Would be dope.
Flow: 3.5/5 - Fell off a few times, but it was actually pretty good. I like.
overall: 3.5/5
Song overall:
3.9/5
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no disrespect or anything, but i always thought indians were quite good at english, since india is an old english colony.
you're actually not that bad at rapping, but you're english is not that good, sorry.
i mean, i'm considered to be quite good at english, despite me being a swede and all, but I still don't think i'm good at it.
it's all work baby.
by the way, i ain't got no songs on this forum so i guess it's kind of wrong of me to criticize you. but i got some lyrics in the writers block, so feel free to check em out if you feel that you need to understand what i mean by working hard on the english, which i am doing.
solid song, i'm actually looking forward to your mixtape.
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Re: akkucc bill gates remix with dreezy
Originally posted by Cli-City View PostDreezy did his thang on this....Some punchlines could've been left out...but overall a great verse....."I still rap on wax even under the candle heat" dope line
Akkucc....your verse was funny as fuck....I respect it for what it was....you shouted out HQ so you good nigga...
Overall dope track....
Lyrics 3/5
Flow 3/5
Overall 3/5
Dreezy I would really like to hear you out of your element....like on some J Cole type shit...
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Re: akkucc bill gates remix with dreezy
You are definitely improving Akkucc. Keep working hard, keep dropping more tracks, you'll keep improving man!
Dreezy's verse was sick as hell. That flow >
Overall : 3/5 stay on your grind Akkucc!
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Originally posted by UnknownP View Postno disrespect or anything, but i always thought indians were quite good at english, since india is an old english colony.
you're actually not that bad at rapping, but you're english is not that good, sorry.
i mean, i'm considered to be quite good at english, despite me being a swede and all, but I still don't think i'm good at it.
it's all work baby.
by the way, i ain't got no songs on this forum so i guess it's kind of wrong of me to criticize you. but i got some lyrics in the writers block, so feel free to check em out if you feel that you need to understand what i mean by working hard on the english, which i am doing.
solid song, i'm actually looking forward to your mixtape.
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Originally posted by Mr. FTP View PostYou are definitely improving Akkucc. Keep working hard, keep dropping more tracks, you'll keep improving man!
Dreezy's verse was sick as hell. That flow >
Overall : 3/5 stay on your grind Akkucc!
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Originally posted by martian master View PostFinally got to hear this U did yo thing bro . I love how mellow the hook was, and then you come in nd straight rip shit.
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Originally posted by akkucc View Postindia is not old english colony, we learn hindi from childhood yeah but we know english also cause we learn that as a one subject. that's why i know english but not very good grammatically and in speaking but within 6months or 1 year i will gonna perfect in that.[COLOR="Silver"]
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Originally posted by UnknownP View PostIndia is in fact an old english colony, i'm surprised you didn't know that. Although, India became independent in 1947 so that's before your time. I just thought the english language kind of stuck around, since it's still considered the official language of india along with hindu.
and no indian can write like american's cause they use different slangs and pharses. if i will live in america one year or some i will learn all that and speak like em. yeah i can correct myself grammatically but i can't write it like them for sure untill i will not live with them. you don't have enough knowledge bout my country then me.and the indians that live outside the country they live in that environment surrounded by that people but we are not.we have people all around who talks in hindi always. okayLast edited by akkucc; 10-08-2011, 05:06 AM.
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