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Dreezy did his thang on this....Some punchlines could've been left out...but overall a great verse....."I still rap on wax even under the candle heat" dope line
Akkucc....your verse was funny as fuck....I respect it for what it was....you shouted out HQ so you good nigga...
Overall dope track....
Lyrics 3/5
Flow 3/5
Overall 3/5
Dreezy I would really like to hear you out of your element....like on some J Cole type shit...
Dreezy - Lyrics: 3.5/5 - Like Cli-City said, some punchlines could've been left out, but overall, nice shit.
Flow - 4/5 - It wasn't that it fell off, you just pronounced some shit really, really weird. Other than that, good flow as usual.
Overall - 4/5
Akkucc - Lyrics: 3/5 - You have definitely got a lot better, seriously. I wanna hear you on a more serious song about something personal to you or around you. Would be dope.
Flow: 3.5/5 - Fell off a few times, but it was actually pretty good. I like.
Dreezy did his thang on this....Some punchlines could've been left out...but overall a great verse....."I still rap on wax even under the candle heat" dope line
Akkucc....your verse was funny as fuck....I respect it for what it was....you shouted out HQ so you good nigga...
Overall dope track....
Lyrics 3/5
Flow 3/5
Overall 3/5
Dreezy I would really like to hear you out of your element....like on some J Cole type shit...
thanks bro,thanks for listen and appreciate what you say. by the way i don't understand the funny thing that you say everytime.
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Dreezy - Lyrics: 3.5/5 - Like Cli-City said, some punchlines could've been left out, but overall, nice shit.
Flow - 4/5 - It wasn't that it fell off, you just pronounced some shit really, really weird. Other than that, good flow as usual.
Overall - 4/5
Akkucc - Lyrics: 3/5 - You have definitely got a lot better, seriously. I wanna hear you on a more serious song about something personal to you or around you. Would be dope.
Flow: 3.5/5 - Fell off a few times, but it was actually pretty good. I like.
overall: 3.5/5
Song overall:
3.9/5
thanks bro, i will try for that serious type song.
no disrespect or anything, but i always thought indians were quite good at english, since india is an old english colony.
you're actually not that bad at rapping, but you're english is not that good, sorry.
i mean, i'm considered to be quite good at english, despite me being a swede and all, but I still don't think i'm good at it.
it's all work baby.
by the way, i ain't got no songs on this forum so i guess it's kind of wrong of me to criticize you. but i got some lyrics in the writers block, so feel free to check em out if you feel that you need to understand what i mean by working hard on the english, which i am doing.
solid song, i'm actually looking forward to your mixtape.
Dreezy did his thang on this....Some punchlines could've been left out...but overall a great verse....."I still rap on wax even under the candle heat" dope line
Akkucc....your verse was funny as fuck....I respect it for what it was....you shouted out HQ so you good nigga...
Overall dope track....
Lyrics 3/5
Flow 3/5
Overall 3/5
Dreezy I would really like to hear you out of your element....like on some J Cole type shit...
Thanks man. And I think I got just what your looking for on my mixtape, be sure to peep that out on the 13th bro
You are definitely improving Akkucc. Keep working hard, keep dropping more tracks, you'll keep improving man!
Dreezy's verse was sick as hell. That flow >
no disrespect or anything, but i always thought indians were quite good at english, since india is an old english colony.
you're actually not that bad at rapping, but you're english is not that good, sorry.
i mean, i'm considered to be quite good at english, despite me being a swede and all, but I still don't think i'm good at it.
it's all work baby.
by the way, i ain't got no songs on this forum so i guess it's kind of wrong of me to criticize you. but i got some lyrics in the writers block, so feel free to check em out if you feel that you need to understand what i mean by working hard on the english, which i am doing.
solid song, i'm actually looking forward to your mixtape.
india is not old english colony, we learn hindi from childhood yeah but we know english also cause we learn that as a one subject. that's why i know english but not very good grammatically and in speaking but within 6months or 1 year i will gonna perfect in that.
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You are definitely improving Akkucc. Keep working hard, keep dropping more tracks, you'll keep improving man!
Dreezy's verse was sick as hell. That flow >
Overall : 3/5 stay on your grind Akkucc!
thanks bro,
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india is not old english colony, we learn hindi from childhood yeah but we know english also cause we learn that as a one subject. that's why i know english but not very good grammatically and in speaking but within 6months or 1 year i will gonna perfect in that.[COLOR="Silver"]
India is in fact an old english colony, i'm surprised you didn't know that. Although, India became independent in 1947 so that's before your time. I just thought the english language kind of stuck around, since it's still considered the official language of india along with hindu.
India is in fact an old english colony, i'm surprised you didn't know that. Although, India became independent in 1947 so that's before your time. I just thought the english language kind of stuck around, since it's still considered the official language of india along with hindu.
no hindi is official language but people also know english but we have to learn that. english is not our mother language.so i am learning.here only 10% people know english very well some little and some none. come ever to india then you will understand that so i am in the middle cause i can talk but not very good grammatically.and i live in this country so i have quite better knowledge bout it. Britishers rule something around 200yrs but it doesn't mean that people learn english by that. so we talk with each other in hindi only few times we use english. okay the way of my speaking is not like amercian's cause we say words clear.
and no indian can write like american's cause they use different slangs and pharses. if i will live in america one year or some i will learn all that and speak like em. yeah i can correct myself grammatically but i can't write it like them for sure untill i will not live with them. you don't have enough knowledge bout my country then me.and the indians that live outside the country they live in that environment surrounded by that people but we are not.we have people all around who talks in hindi always. okay
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