Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Flow: C-
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3/5, Nice wayne laugh. o.O Anwyay, with the RVD line I assume you're a wrestling fan? There are some moments where you can see your versatility as you change up the flow left and right. Was this a true freestyle? There were a lot of decent punches in this. And there are some parts where you put the appropriate level of energy into it, but its not full circle. You gotta carry that energy throughout the whole thing. The end is kinda mundane and bleh.

Free Programs: Audacity (Good for things like this and just rapping over beats)
Paid Programs: FL Studio, Mixcraft, Cubase

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Flow: C-
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3/5, Nice wayne laugh. o.O Anwyay, with the RVD line I assume you're a wrestling fan? There are some moments where you can see your versatility as you change up the flow left and right. Was this a true freestyle? There were a lot of decent punches in this. And there are some parts where you put the appropriate level of energy into it, but its not full circle. You gotta carry that energy throughout the whole thing. The end is kinda mundane and bleh.

Free Programs: Audacity (Good for things like this and just rapping over beats)
Paid Programs: FL Studio, Mixcraft, Cubase

thanks 1000 bro! i appreciate the feed, this wasnt a freestyle it was a written i just say freestyle cause its over another beat, but with the energy i know what you mean i tried do this in one take and i just was loosing breath lol.

also, i have a question about audacity i just downloaded it cause of your recommendation and its coll the only thing i dont like is the fact that when i cut a part out, it moves the rest of my verse ad makes it off beat. is there a way around that?

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

instead of cutting it, try to just "clear" it. that's what i do in Edison on FL Studio

[kapa99]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

The quality is okay, but sometimes your voice is too loud, need working on that. But its freestyle so its good. Keep up

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

yeah, i dont know how to master so my voice be all over the place lol

[MC_Crary]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

When you get a new mic youre gonna be a problem. In the mean time work on your delivery. Annunciation is important. Good luck.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Thanks A Million Bro.! any mics you reccomend?

[KidComet]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Is everyone in this thread trolling?

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

You No Like?

[KidComet]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Ok nvm it was your first track, no wonder everyone is going easy on u

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

whats wrong with it? im always tryn improve. and also check out my other songs and see if you see any improvement.

[KidComet]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Idk, the mastering,
and ur flow.

I didnt pay attention to the lyrics because of the mastering and the flow were pretty much idk bad