RayZor - Hopes & Dreams Rmx

[RaYZoR]

This remix was originally recorded as a one-take freestyle. But then I went over it with the background vocals.
I kno I use foul lingo a lot. my bad.
Feedback is appreciated.


RayZor - Hopes & Dreams RMX
Instrumental Used: Wiz Khalifa - Hopes & Dreams


Feedback:
Kage- 3.0 Cypher
Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

[pgathriller]

Re: RayZor - Hopes & Dreams Rmx

flow is really dragging; you sound like your holding yourself back, like you're not trying to wake someone up in the next room or something. The Rhythm sounds really "shoe-horned" in some places too, work on a more natural rhythm and get some more energy in your flow to really get things into a groove

keep at it man

[RaYZoR]

Re: RayZor - Hopes & Dreams Rmx

flow is really dragging; you sound like your holding yourself back, like you're not trying to wake someone up in the next room or something. The Rhythm sounds really "shoe-horned" in some places too, work on a more natural rhythm and get some more energy in your flow to really get things into a groove

keep at it man

lol. I'm not sure what you mean by Shoe-Horned. can you explain? And flow is really dragging?
The instrumental is looped, but I thought it would be a good one to try. Yeah I will improve on rhythm.

[akkucc]

Re: RayZor - Hopes & Dreams Rmx

bro it is cool, but not that good. flow is little weak . but overall it is cool. so continue the hard work bro.

[TupacShaquer]

Re: RayZor - Hopes & Dreams Rmx

Wasn't feeling your flow tbh,
But I did feel your lyrics
"I don't need to write lyrics down,I'm the pencil fucking the paper"

Haha just work on your flow
Lyrics: B+
Flow: D

[RaYZoR]

Re: RayZor - Hopes & Dreams Rmx

Wasn't feeling your flow tbh,
But I did feel your lyrics
"I don't need to write lyrics down,I'm the pencil fucking the paper"

Haha just work on your flow
Lyrics: B+
Flow: D

by flow are you saying the rhyming bars or referring to something else?
thanks for the feedback. Will try and work on that.

---------- Post added at 04:46 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:45 PM ----------

bro it is cool, but not that good. flow is little weak . but overall it is cool. so continue the hard work bro.

that's not really feedback. but sure I'll work on it. but how do you recommend I fix it?