Poyo - Racks Freestyle

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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The first verse was the the first verse i ever wrote, added a second verse, and wah lah, lol i think this is one of my better tracks. i had sore throat but i dont think its not that noticable. Tell me what yall think

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...the-floor.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post726699

[DeezyMac]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

It's painfully obvious that it sounds like you're simply reciting your verse from a piece of paper. You're focused more on getting the words out, than how you're saying them. Definitely should work on that. Or start memorizing your lines and recording without reading. (And if that's what you're already doing, then work on it).

The lyrics are decent. Nothing special. Ray Charles & Fresh Prince line pissed me off because they're overdone but there are some gem lines in here. Flow was on point though. Mixing could have been better. Overall, if you polish up your delivery, then you'd be muchhh better.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

It's painfully obvious that it sounds like you're simply reciting your verse from a piece of paper. You're focused more on getting the words out, than how you're saying them. Definitely should work on that. Or start memorizing your lines and recording without reading. (And if that's what you're already doing, then work on it).

The lyrics are decent. Nothing special. Ray Charles & Fresh Prince line pissed me off because they're overdone but there are some gem lines in here. Flow was on point though. Mixing could have been better. Overall, if you polish up your delivery, then you'd be muchhh better.

I was spitting from memory but i know what you mean it just doesnt sound natural. And What do you mean by mixing? i have no idea what that is lol. thanks for the criticism, hop you enjoy my next track a lil more

[DeezyMac]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

Mixing your vocals better with the instrumental so that the sound is smooth. EQ...Compression....shit like that.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

yeah im still learning the production aspects

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

First off... I'm not gonna be hard on you, no homo. You aiight but sounds like you're trying to hard to rap ? Just let it come out easy ! No homoo Lol

Flow: seemed force... i give it 3 though
Lyrics: Not bad actually! 3
Overall: 3.... just make sure you're comfortable when you record and you'll be straight..dont force it

[BlakeJay]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

You have a decent flow. Ofcourse the mixing could be better but ull get that down as you keep on recording songs..The lyrics were aight too..

Lyrics - 3.8

Flow - 4.0

Overall 3.9

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

First off... I'm not gonna be hard on you, no homo. You aiight but sounds like you're trying to hard to rap ? Just let it come out easy ! No homoo Lol

Flow: seemed force... i give it 3 though
Lyrics: Not bad actually! 3
Overall: 3.... just make sure you're comfortable when you record and you'll be straight..dont force it

Lmaoo, thanks for the feed i was comfortable though when i was recording, you the second person to say it sounded forced lol but i didnt think it was. do i sound more at home on my other tracks?

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You have a decent flow. Ofcourse the mixing could be better but ull get that down as you keep on recording songs..The lyrics were aight too..

Lyrics - 3.8

Flow - 4.0

Overall 3.9

Thanks! What part of the DMV you from?

[Late122]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

Well the lyrics are good, did you do any mixing? Vocals sound is too loud in some points. in the last verse you got it, the best energy and flow right there. 3.9/5 because of the quality and energy. You got potential bro, work on these.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Racks Freestyle

Well the lyrics are good, did you do any mixing? Vocals sound is too loud in some points. in the last verse you got it, the best energy and flow right there. 3.9/5 because of the quality and energy. You got potential bro, work on these.

Nah I have no fucking clue how to mix! I just rap then put the song out lol. thanks on the feed and for commenting on my page. Love