Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

[TupacShaquer]

This is like a week on youtube but been to lazy to post it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Tsww...feature=relmfu

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[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

No Feedback? Really?

[mykill]

Re: Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-
Delivery: C

Overall: 3/5, Get rid of that noise on the mic. Seems like your lyrics stepped it up on this one. Not exactly the best they could be, but better than the first songs I heard from ya. Need more work on the delay effect you used for the hook. I also enjoyed the experimenting you did with effects and on your delivery for this one. Great job improving. Great job trying to get better. Yall need to stop sleepin' and give this man some feedback so he can improve. Cheers

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-
Delivery: C

Overall: 3/5, Get rid of that noise on the mic. Seems like your lyrics stepped it up on this one. Not exactly the best they could be, but better than the first songs I heard from ya. Need more work on the delay effect you used for the hook. I also enjoyed the experimenting you did with effects and on your delivery for this one. Great job improving. Great job trying to get better. Yall need to stop sleepin' and give this man some feedback so he can improve. Cheers

I see my flow went up to a B. #Swag just trying to improve, New mic in a week so prepare for bombs that I have written.
Aprreciate it mykill

[Young Corruption]

Re: Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

Yeah a new mic would be good to get rid of the of interference. The flow was actually pretty good, you still need some work as you fell off a couple of times. Hook was different with the delay but again you need more practice with it as you used too much and it just sounded weird. Lyrics are a little below average and in time they will improve so keep trying and raise they standard you have on yourself. Overall not bad for being a beginner

[ATLien666]

Re: Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

Definitely get a new mic.

Flow - 3/5.
Wasn't bad, but it could've been better. You fell off a couple times and your delivery really made the flow a lot worse.

Lyrics - 3/5
You had some nice lyrics, but because of the quality, I couldn't understand everything. if you could post the lyrics, I could give you more thorough feedback.

Other:
The delay on the hook was horrible. That's all.

Overall: 3/5

When you get your new mic, I see you improving. the song was okay, nothing really stood out, but it wasn't so bad I had to cut it off. Keep it up, though.

[beaniebeanz]

Re: Kage-Make Way (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

the beat is good but the rapping not soo much