Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

[Young Corruption]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

Flow: it was pretty not gonna lie about that. Thats about all you got going so far.
Lyrics: Got pretty bored cause the rap game is over-saturated with the topic you use. If you going for that style then your lyrical game has to be stepped up major
Quality: Mixing needs work but its hard as everyone here should probably know
Other: Not bad but not great. Its a good song for only rapping for 2 months, but you just need to stand out more as a artist. You'll find yourself eventually and when you do just fucking run with it lol

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

Im 18 bro and im not all i do is smoke weed and fuck bitches but thats a heavy influence in my life lol. like you said i just need to express that in a way that no one has before and thats ultimately my goal. I mean i just started rapping 2 months ago im still tryn find my sound thats why most of my songs have different flows im still tryn see what works ans what people like. I appriciate the critisicm though and i hope you enjoy my future songs.

btw, i have never killed anybody lol

word. like, dont think I dont like you or anything. I actually like your tracks and you got a decently unique voice, so i think you got potential. From an A&R standpoint, you gotta do better to differentiate yourself in this highly over saturated market. A lot of us around us have our own "style" and you'll find yours soon. Maybe we should do some collabs to get you in the right direction.... who knows.

Keep G.R.I.N.D.'n youngin'

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

Thanks bro, put me on to some of your tracks, and we should definitely get that colab done in the near future

[Artille]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

Flow: Your flow isn't too bad, but it was kind of boring. When you say "as much as them dollars go" your vocals get much louder and it doesn't flow well. The rest of the song from this point went downhill unfortunately.
Lyrics: Like the others said, you need more subject in your lyrics. Except, this is just a mainstream beat so it really isn't too vital for this record. If you ask me, you went the right direction for this beat. I will check out your other songs when I have time, but I hope to see more subjects and complex topics in those.
Other: This is a song that will be forgotten for sure, but for my first time hearing you it isn't so bad. Only recording for two months is a short period of time. I expect you to improve within the next few months. You need to work on your recording process in general because there are some obvious cuts throughout the track and the vocal quality is poor. Perhaps a new mic is your first step to this. Also, work on leveling out the sounds to be equal throughout.
Overall: You should have renamed the song "It's Decent" because there are many flaws throughout the track which makes it less enjoyable. I thought it was a decent remix. 3/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

It Decent Though??? Lol you basically echoed what everybody has been saying and im taking the criticism to heart and im trying my best to improve. thanks for the detailed assessment. oh and btw when you said the voice gets louder thats my brother teeda i come back in at like 2:10 with what i think is my best verse yet lol. and please check out my other songs i like how you broke shit down. thanks homie, much love

[Artille]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

It Decent Though??? Lol you basically echoed what everybody has been saying and im taking the criticism to heart and im trying my best to improve. thanks for the detailed assessment. oh and btw when you said the voice gets louder thats my brother teeda i come back in at like 2:10 with what i think is my best verse yet lol. and please check out my other songs i like how you broke shit down. thanks homie, much love

Regardless who came in, the vocal volume levels need to be equal. Just tryna help. Never take feedback to the heart, but instead take it and create a masterpiece. Or... do you and see where it gets you.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

Regardless who came in, the vocal volume levels need to be equal. Just tryna help. Never take feedback to the heart, but instead take it and create a masterpiece. Or... do you and see where it gets you.

Yeah thats what i mean, i never get offeneded it by anything yall say i actually appriciate it, yall are actually taking your time to analyze the shit and not just "yeah thats dope" or "that shits wack". im listining to all the feed and hopefully it helps me grow as an artist.