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Shawty said the nigga that she with ain’t shit Shawty said the nigga that she with ain’t this Shawty said the nigga that she with can't hit But shawty I'ma hit it, hit it like I can't miss.
-2pac Shakur
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Re: Critique me honestly please, first time recording
Wasnt so bad for a first track, you need to stay on beat better and work on your delivery more, put more emotion, I believe I hear a bit of a lisp too, but doesnt really effect much.
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Re: Critique me honestly please, first time recording
I was really looking forward to more comments, keep them coming please. But thank's KidComet
Shawty said the nigga that she with ain’t shit Shawty said the nigga that she with ain’t this Shawty said the nigga that she with can't hit But shawty I'ma hit it, hit it like I can't miss.
-2pac Shakur
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Re: Critique me honestly please, first time recording
Ayee this is kinda ill! lol if you stay a little bit more on beat at times you can be good! You were saying some real good deep stuff..Had some good Multi Syllable rhymes in there too..
Like i said before just work on stayin on beat a lil better..but your subject matter is nice
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Re: Critique me honestly please, first time recording
Yeah Multi Syllable for a first timer is very impressive.Comment
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