Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

[DatWeezy]

Here is the 2nd single off the upcoming Mixtape ..

Friend Zone -1st Verse
A-Mitch -2nd Verse
Lil Trev- 3rd Verse


Let us know what you think!

TIC.mp3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform

Feed 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post771048

Feed 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post771047

[DatWeezy]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

27 views and no feed.. cmon..

[DatWeezy]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

ya'll are fuggin sleeping...

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

ya'll are fuggin sleeping...

Sleeping on wackness?

[DatWeezy]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Sleeping on wackness?

haha fugg you man, fugg you.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

haha fugg you man, fugg you.

Step your lyrics up for real though.

[DatWeezy]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Step your lyrics up for real though.

ok lol thanks for the great feed.

[__cas__]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

ehh, was alright.

Flow: B
Lyrics: C

Not tryin to be a dick but the original song is so good that you gotta come harder than that.

[Late122]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Friend-zone has kinda wack flow and delivery but It's aight. Trying a eminem flow or what?
A-Mitch has a good energy and flow. Alright lyrics.
Lil Trev I like your flow in every freaking track. Quality is a lot better than in your latest songs. Good lyrics. I like your verse the most.
Like ^ said you gotta give all you got in to a song as legendary as this. R.I.P Nate Dogg!

[Laudacity93]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

It's cool but the lyrics definitively need to be upgraded..the thrid verse was nice tho.

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Lil Trev you obviously had the best verse on this track,
Lyrics could improve a lot, but the flow was on point
Lyrics: C+
Flow: A-
with good lyrics you could turn out to be really good

[Gibbsy]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Start off by saying eminem beats are always mostly amazing beats, and this is one of my favs by him so good choice on the instrumental,

i like the intro, its decent the flow is pretty cool to , strange but good, quality is decent too i like the way you are delivering the sounds but sounds like you need spome adlibs an shizzzz, overall 4/5 keep going homie