Preview of my new mixtape #FreeAgent

[THA GR8 M8]

Lol tell me this doesn't hype you up..I know hate when I see it bruh, I've been doing this for almost 6 years an for another artist to tell me that my hooks aren't on waka/future level is blasphemy, and I won't stand for it period.

Kailez - FreeAgent2 (Mastered).mp3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform

Not one hype was givin

[Laudacity93]

Not one hype was givin

Cool story bro.

[mykill]

Lol tell me this doesn't hype you up..I know hate when I see it bruh, I've been doing this for almost 6 years an for another artist to tell me that my hooks aren't on waka/future level is blasphemy, and I won't stand for it period.

Kailez - FreeAgent2 (Mastered).mp3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform

you didnt even do that first part of the hook, did you? why do the verses sound like they're in the hole compared to the hook? It might just be an over-mastering problem though. I agree with Noble, I'm still sitting in my office chair chillin'. Maybe its a rhyme scheme thing, like you use a elementary rhyme scheme.

For example:
blah blah blah a, blah blah blah a blah blah blah a, blah blah blah a
blah blah blah b, blah blah blah b blah blah blah b, blah blah blah b
that's a typical verse in that song. and the vocabulary in it is mediocre too. instead of "im getting more money, you're taking none from me, it multiplies like some bunnys, I grind because I'm hungry", and using all those end part rhymes, have you done anything that's more all over the place? Like deeper multis? That's way more interesting...imo. More variety than the same abcd,abcd rhyme scheme.

[Laudacity93]

you didnt even do that first part of the hook, did you? why do the verses sound like they're in the hole compared to the hook? It might just be an over-mastering problem though. I agree with Noble, I'm still sitting in my office chair chillin'. Maybe its a rhyme scheme thing, like you use a elementary rhyme scheme.

For example:
blah blah blah a, blah blah blah a blah blah blah a, blah blah blah a
blah blah blah b, blah blah blah b blah blah blah b, blah blah blah b
that's a typical verse in that song. and the vocabulary in it is mediocre too. instead of "im getting more money, you're taking none from me, it multiplies like some bunnys, I grind because I'm hungry", and using all those end part rhymes, have you done anything that's more all over the place? Like deeper multis? That's way more interesting...imo. More variety than the same abcd,abcd rhyme scheme.

Of course you would agree with Brendon lol. I really think the point I was trying make just flew over your head. Obviously this isn't a lyrical track I wasn't aiming for it to be one, simply something people can vibe to. And don't try to come at me like your rhyme schemes are something out of the ordinary.

[mykill]

Of course you would agree with Brendon lol.

who is that? I dont know that nigga... But if we agree maybe he sees the same thing that I see....

I really think the point I was trying make just flew over your head.

No. It didnt. If I did, I would tell you.

Obviously this isn't a lyrical track I wasn't aiming for it to be one, simply something people can vibe to.

To which I dont, and that previous wall of text was why. I didnt say "OH THIS SHIT HAS TO BE KENDRICK LAMAR/OLD SCHOOL LUPE DOPE ON LYRICS B!". I just said the rhymes were boring. Throw more multis or something in there and done rhyme fuck with fuck. That's all I'm saying.

And don't try to come at me like your rhyme schemes are something out of the ordinary.

I'm the worse rapper in the Studio. Period.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

that's what I'm saying though Diezel. The hooks on his project arent memorable to me. There's nothing catchy about em. Nothing that makes you really listen to em. Not even on a Waka/Future level. You just reiterated everything I was saying earlier...

but you said his "were" on a waka/future level before.....

Look, the hooks are boring. It's like a Future hook, or something Waka Flocka comes up with. I can't relate because they arent really saying anything, so there's nothing to relate to.

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you didnt even do that first part of the hook, did you? why do the verses sound like they're in the hole compared to the hook? It might just be an over-mastering problem though. I agree with Noble, I'm still sitting in my office chair chillin'. Maybe its a rhyme scheme thing, like you use a elementary rhyme scheme.

For example:
blah blah blah a, blah blah blah a blah blah blah a, blah blah blah a
blah blah blah b, blah blah blah b blah blah blah b, blah blah blah b
that's a typical verse in that song. and the vocabulary in it is mediocre too. instead of "im getting more money, you're taking none from me, it multiplies like some bunnys, I grind because I'm hungry", and using all those end part rhymes, have you done anything that's more all over the place? Like deeper multis? That's way more interesting...imo. More variety than the same abcd,abcd rhyme scheme.

myk its othere guys with rhyme schemes as simple as this dude in hooks and verses, here in the studio that you liked before,
i think u just not feelin this dude music.

[mykill]

Diezel you make some valid points. Maybe using Future or Waka is a bad example of what they are. I typically view their hooks as mindless, not putting any effort lyrical in them at all or just general EFFORT into them. However, I am wrong in my analogy. They are VERY catchy, with "Round of Applause" and "Same Damn Time" being some of the most notable.

Maybe what I was thinking was that however similar to those artists' hooks, yours dont stick as well as theirs do. That sounds more appropriate. If I was a newspaper, this would be printing a retraction to the previous statement Diezel quoted, lol. I think you might have hit the nail on the head though Diezel... I just think I'm not feeling his music in general. I just dont get anything from it. That's a better consensus of what I was trying to say. Sorry about that.