Rembrandt - Wishing Well

[wayniac number1]

man the dream sequence was dope af imo
i didnt read your lyrics the first time i heard it,so i was confused, but its a rlly nice concept...

the lyrics were fresh too, not these typical rap topics

the only thing i dont like about this track is the hook, its way too generic , seems like you got lazy with it tbh

the 2 beats are both decent, nothing mindbreaking, but yeah decent
flow wise this was okay, you used this talking-flow (dont know how to express it lol)


so all in all nice track

and btw, u have nice rap name

[ATLien666]

man the dream sequence was dope af imo
i didnt read your lyrics the first time i heard it,so i was confused, but its a rlly nice concept...

the lyrics were fresh too, not these typical rap topics

the only thing i dont like about this track is the hook, its way too generic , seems like you got lazy with it tbh

the 2 beats are both decent, nothing mindbreaking, but yeah decent
flow wise this was okay, you used this talking-flow (dont know how to express it lol)


so all in all nice track

and btw, u have nice rap name

Right on, glad you liked the concept and yeah, the hook was a last moment thing. I was recording my verse and I just thought what the hell, lol.

'preciate it, you're the first to compliment me on it. nobody else knows who he is, so I always get asked dumb questions about it, lol.

[megan92037]

Damn Girl that was Bomb!! I totally related to the college vs. rapper or 9-5 institutionalized. betta off just doin what you want in life. i got allkinds of works, heres one for instance-- i dont have it to a jam yet, but its comin along

no i wont lie, i gotta lotta problems today
nothing that ic ant change, but not this way
why try, when i been there, done that
seen that, tried that. lived that
gived that, served that, wished that
-- you gonna miss that
its another thing that happened
its one more time thats been blasted
its once again the same predicament
whats the story been, if its
not the one we know then wtf is it?
keepin it as best i can, to live with
myself and serve you with the same hand
too small for holding all i need
or having enough to suceed
and its always falling down
and its always just bringing me down
forever unable to stably stay faithful
to the things that need me to try
i can do anything i want,
i seen the road its life
but the jounrey you start on with certain goals
turn into deeper longings in your soul
and you get lost in the trials and
dont you cant forget
how life sometimes seems
more than a mockery now isnt it.
forget it

[JAYRMe]

Had to work double shifts the last two days but i get off early tonight so i'll have something for this later.

[ATLien666]

Damn Girl that was Bomb!! I totally related to the college vs. rapper or 9-5 institutionalized. betta off just doin what you want in life. i got allkinds of works, heres one for instance-- i dont have it to a jam yet, but its comin along

no i wont lie, i gotta lotta problems today
nothing that ic ant change, but not this way
why try, when i been there, done that
seen that, tried that. lived that
gived that, served that, wished that
-- you gonna miss that
its another thing that happened
its one more time thats been blasted
its once again the same predicament
whats the story been, if its
not the one we know then wtf is it?
keepin it as best i can, to live with
myself and serve you with the same hand
too small for holding all i need
or having enough to suceed
and its always falling down
and its always just bringing me down
forever unable to stably stay faithful
to the things that need me to try
i can do anything i want,
i seen the road its life
but the jounrey you start on with certain goals
turn into deeper longings in your soul
and you get lost in the trials and
dont you cant forget
how life sometimes seems
more than a mockery now isnt it.
forget it

damn near mad I got called a girl, though. lmao.

Had to work double shifts the last two days but i get off early tonight so i'll have something for this later.

Ight, bruh.

[MC_Crary]

Great concept on this one man. Sounded like a little movie. I hope all the tracks on Monster feel that way. Your lyrics were very in depth and heart felt. You're pretty young to be thinking about things like this already but hey maybe if some of us thought like that at your age we'd be in better positions now lol. So many standout lines. The Zimmerman line, the trapped us wordplay, the Full Metal Alchemist line and that's just the first verse. This beat seemed a bit hard to flow on, but you stayed on dude. I would've expected more slip-ups with your past flow problems but I didn't hear any slip ups. The Nightmare sequence set this a part. You really went deep with the concept. Hook was simple but good for this one. I'm feeling this track man, I even downloaded it. Waiting for Monster.

[ATLien666]

Great concept on this one man. Sounded like a little movie. I hope all the tracks on Monster feel that way. Your lyrics were very in depth and heart felt. You're pretty young to be thinking about things like this already but hey maybe if some of us thought like that at your age we'd be in better positions now lol. So many standout lines. The Zimmerman line, the trapped us wordplay, the Full Metal Alchemist line and that's just the first verse. This beat seemed a bit hard to flow on, but you stayed on dude. I would've expected more slip-ups with your past flow problems but I didn't hear any slip ups. The Nightmare sequence set this a part. You really went deep with the concept. Hook was simple but good for this one. I'm feeling this track man, I even downloaded it. Waiting for Monster.

They all most definitely will. I decided to really step it up for this mixtape.

Right on, though, I truly appreciate it. Especially coming from you, you and Mykill's advice with each song really helped mold me.

[mykill]

Definitely seems you're falling back on your old flow.... I think its more of the old verses that you wrote reflect it. Would have been better if you went back and re-wrote them to work out better, because the latter verse was the best flow/delivery wise.

MONSTER coming soon.

[KidComet]

Where the fuck did you come from?

You sound like big sean! Damn, you got good flow and good voice,
You def got potential man! You sound professional tbh,

your flow fell of a few times on in this song tho, but if you work on it you can make it, only if u have a good team behind you tho

[DatWeezy]

voice was dope, lyrics were pretty on point honestly and your flow was there! You got a lot of potential and imma start lookin out for you..

4/5

[ATLien666]

Definitely seems you're falling back on your old flow.... I think its more of the old verses that you wrote reflect it. Would have been better if you went back and re-wrote them to work out better, because the latter verse was the best flow/delivery wise.

MONSTER coming soon.

Damn, I'mma keep working on it, though. Hopefully the last two songs will be the last one with noticeable flow problems.

Where the fuck did you come from?

You sound like big sean! Damn, you got good flow and good voice,
You def got potential man! You sound professional tbh,

your flow fell of a few times on in this song tho, but if you work on it you can make it, only if u have a good team behind you tho

Truuuuu, right on, I appreciate it!

voice was dope, lyrics were pretty on point honestly and your flow was there! You got a lot of potential and imma start lookin out for you..

4/5

Right on! Monster coming soon.