D.Santos ft. Rembrandt - Hollywood Lights

[ATLien666]

Don't know when he's putting it out, but hey.

I'm third verse and shit:
Hollywood Lights - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform

Lyrics:
Hollywood dreams and Hollywood nights/
Hollywood life, but she blinded by the lights/
Droppin' out of school 'cause she wanna be an actress/
Okay, love... well, good luck with that shit/
Monroe painting on your wall/
You ain't gonna speak, it tells it all/
Get so high, you don't feel the fall/
But you got it, girl, with your nose so raw/
Higher than you ever been, thinkin' life is perfect/
Tryna find the reason your ass ain't workin/
Everybody gossipin', tryna get they tip in/
You over here considerin' strippin'/
Fairytale to Nightmare - quick how it changed/
Compliments on how quick that you changed/
You wanted all the lights, now you got you a stage/
Get out there, girl, and do yo' thing/

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[@Poyo_Kardashian]

I skipped to your part


Lyrics were pretty much flawless, you told a mini story of your verse. your always consistent with lyric quality

Flow coulda been a lil better felt like you was rushing some lines. but it was still very listenable

overall this was a real dope verse bro With your charisma/voice/swag you i put you in MY top 3 in the whole studio. (not including myself lol) and if you perfect your flow. niggas not gonna be fucking w/ you. keep it up my nigggg

[ATLien666]

I skipped to your part


Lyrics were pretty much flawless, you told a mini story of your verse. your always consistent with lyric quality

Flow coulda been a lil better felt like you was rushing some lines. but it was still very listenable

overall this was a real dope verse bro With your charisma/voice/swag you i put you in MY top 3 in the whole studio. (not including myself lol) and if you perfect your flow. niggas not gonna be fucking w/ you. keep it up my nigggg

ah shit, right the fuck on. yeah, this was my first attempt at the "fast flow" thing, I'm glad it wasn't too bad.

but fuck, I truly appreciate that shit. right on, bruhbruh.

[akkucc]

Nice verse i like it..

[IN10SION]

I love the beat and the hook, good song !

The best Rembrandt verse i heard so far, in my opinion!! Really crazy man!

[ATLien666]

Nice verse i like it..

right on!

I love the beat and the hook, good song !

The best Rembrandt verse i heard so far, in my opinion!! Really crazy man!

I was thinking the same thing earlier, thanks, my nigga!

[yungfamou5]

I like the beat, the hook is nice and u came correct wit ur verse who is the other guy he was alright

[YUNG DIEZEL]

dat sample reminded me of dis beat i had wit da same sample sample, but done a lil differently.

but imma fully feedback dis joint later before i post my next song

[ATLien666]

I like the beat, the hook is nice and u came correct wit ur verse who is the other guy he was alright

right on, bro. and his name's D.Santos. He's a mutual friend, kinda.

dat sample reminded me of dis beat i had wit da same sample sample, but done a lil differently.

but imma fully feedback dis joint later before i post my next song

Ight, cool. I heard the sample of it. When you releasing the full thing?

[mykill]

D. Santos - Quality isnt as good as it could be. Good mic presence, good delivery and flow. Lyrics seemed rushed and dont seem as well thought out as they could be. 2nd verse though sounds like he's just screaming at the mic. The quality of the vocals also hurts being able to understand entirely what he's saying.

Rembrandt - Reverb on the verse is a tad bit too high. There was a point where your flow slipped. Pretty on beat for the majority of the verse. Good lyrics too.


Overall: 3/5

[ATLien666]

thank you, bruhbruh.

[Checkmatemuzick]

5.0 this is phuckn dope! Its different...but in a good way and dats wat I like! both of yall took off and the hook is crazy! def should push dis joint 100%