Just skipped to that third verse. You're good dude. First part of it your flow was flawless, but got a little shaky in the middle. You picked it back up at the end though. Good verse. 4.5/5 on the verse woulda been a 5 if you fix that flow a bit.
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Originally posted by __cas__ View PostJust skipped to that third verse. You're good dude. First part of it your flow was flawless, but got a little shaky in the middle. You picked it back up at the end though. Good verse. 4.5/5 on the verse woulda been a 5 if you fix that flow a bit.
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That was so dope!!! Best Tune ive heard on here. Imma play and share this around!! First verse fitted with the song well, had good flow and structure. Second one werent really up wit it but showed individuality and passion. and the third one was amazin, very clear and lyrics where the best on the song but you all merk'd it
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Originally posted by MarvySte View PostThat was so dope!!! Best Tune ive heard on here. Imma play and share this around!! First verse fitted with the song well, had good flow and structure. Second one werent really up wit it but showed individuality and passion. and the third one was amazin, very clear and lyrics where the best on the song but you all merk'd it
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Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Postdat sample reminded me of dis beat i had wit da same sample sample, but done a lil differently.
but imma fully feedback dis joint later before i post my next songOriginally posted by ATLien666 View Post
Ight, cool. I heard the sample of it. When you releasing the full thing?
first 2 verses by the same guy i believe and they were decent.
both of yall flows was on point.
your voice is more interesting than his, which prolly makes your verse more favorable.
your flow seemed perfect on this , and it sounded like the beat tempo kinda changed like in the middle of your verse, and you slowed down with it... at first i thought your flow was falling off, but it was dope how you slowed down with it, then sped back up at the original tempo.
lyrics fit the theme and were solid. nice lil story told
also i like ellie goulding shit,
and they been playing the original song of this sample everywhere, so i had to peep this.
keep it up, i see you been grinding wit all these songs you puttin out.Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 07-20-2012, 03:42 PM.CHECK OUT MY SOUNDCLICK PAGE BELOW:
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Yo! That D. Santo guy went for broke on this shit! The concept that he managed to come up with for the song was powerful. Even though I am a person who tends to avoid scrutiny of other individuals and tend to focus on my own inclinations, I found it very revitting. The conviction in his drawl kinda punched through and seized my attention. I'm Sorry, but the first two verses were golden...
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