SM Maniac Ft Rembrandt - Mercy Remix

[TupacShaquer]

im makin sure im good enough before i actually start posting stuff. shit is way more complicated than you would think......im good for a verse or two every now and then though im on my andre 3000 status

Alright when you start getting comfortable around it hmu with some exclusive beats for ya boyyy

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Alright when you start getting comfortable around it hmu with some exclusive beats for ya boyyy

i gotchu bruh we gon be on some Drake and 40 shit now

[Young Corruption]

SM:
Your flow was off and on. You should learn to listen for that when you write because then it saves you the trouble of fixing it while recording. It sounds like your still trying to find "your" style of rapping but once you find it your music will improve. Lyrics were okay, nothing that stood out but not bad. Mastering could use some work also. Just keep trying bro

Rembrandt:
Dude you killed it. Flow was good but towards the end it off a little bit but you corrected it, lyrics were good i liked the first few bars the most for some reason and the mastering was actually good. Good job man

[morphineroberts]

"Mothafuck these wack rappers (Cool!)
(But) Mothafuck these back packer?"
go to hell, sir!

I decided not to give this version of Mercy any feedback based on that line