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Noble - Been A King Feat Kali Paylinn & J-Smooth

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  • #25
    Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
    And.....?

    First guy: not bad. reminds of a Poyo that spits faster. Didnt understand a bit of what he said in the beginning lol. NO WAIT! He reminds me of that "Rollin'" Guy that people said sounds like Poyo. Jaybee?

    Hook: "fuck yo girl three times, that's a trilogy" That shit's hard (get it!) I like the chorus because its lyrically better than most you hear around here. Alliteration is great. Needs more delay to it a bit, maybe to the pitched voice. Or to some more adlibs and it'd be pretty epic and swagged out.

    Noble: Hmmmmmmmmm.... I think you coulda went harder... You wasted cleverness on that cypher... delivery/flows still good though.

    JSmooth: Same damn flow, same damn time. I bet people say the same thing about my flow, but JSmooth bores me. I really was expecting a clever "loser circle/square" metaphor, but then got a mediocre line. I dont think a lot of the punches here were really that fantastic, and you're a better rapper than me...

    Overall: 3.7/5 (+.2 for the chorus)...so 3.9/5. #lemmegetthatremix

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    • #26
      decided to listen to this, hook was coo

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      • #27
        Thanks everyone!



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        • #28
          Damn dude. you went hard!! we need to get on a track together soon!!! lyrics = dope!

          Shawty got some real good P'nuss
          If that shit stink, then she need to di'nush

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          • #29
            Thanks everyone!!



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            • #30
              cant front shit goes hard

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              • #31
                Originally posted by THEREALDJBMURDER View Post
                cant front shit goes hard
                Thanks dawg



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                • #32
                  Need that Killurz remix for this one lol.

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                  • #33
                    I like the beat, lyrics were pretty decent, got some multis in there...

                    The editing was pretty good too. The hook ill, catchy.

                    4/5. #SWAG

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                    • #34
                      swaggity swig swag swag! I always enjoy a dope track from my brotha. Im really feelin the last verse, the first one was kinda hard to understand at times

                      but overall a solid track!
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                      • #35
                        Originally posted by jmoney850 View Post
                        swaggity swig swag swag! I always enjoy a dope track from my brotha. Im really feelin the last verse, the first one was kinda hard to understand at times

                        but overall a solid track!
                        OMG THANK YOU BASED GAWD. lol





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                        • #36
                          This track was dope thought that all the verses really delivered except the last one. At some parts i thought you were rapping a little bit too fast Noble, but thats just my opinion haha overall 4/5

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