Originally posted by PrettyFlacko.
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Hook: "fuck yo girl three times, that's a trilogy" That shit's hard (get it!) I like the chorus because its lyrically better than most you hear around here. Alliteration is great. Needs more delay to it a bit, maybe to the pitched voice. Or to some more adlibs and it'd be pretty epic and swagged out.
Noble: Hmmmmmmmmm.... I think you coulda went harder... You wasted cleverness on that cypher... delivery/flows still good though.
JSmooth: Same damn flow, same damn time. I bet people say the same thing about my flow, but JSmooth bores me. I really was expecting a clever "loser circle/square" metaphor, but then got a mediocre line. I dont think a lot of the punches here were really that fantastic, and you're a better rapper than me...
Overall: 3.7/5 (+.2 for the chorus)...so 3.9/5. #lemmegetthatremix
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