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  • Some of my lines :)

    Heyyy all , i was hitting on the blunt and came out with those




    Life on the edge im trying to pay attention
    but it seems that im on misdirection
    i recieve those high vibrations
    my words are so strong that i can
    unite the nations without having
    all petrol stations this is sonny beats
    and we rock so mothafucking hard
    Mr.RainMan made hundred millions rain so bad
    that i can have a heart attack
    from the money in the sky
    outlaw mothafuckers till we die


    Going crazy daily i am bad mothafucka
    Hundred dolla bills rain from the sky mothafucka
    Im talking bout the Gucci Louie and Prada
    From BG to Nevada , time is flying and i fly with it
    Life on the fast lane there is no limit everytime
    i feel confused roll and hit thats my secret shit
    its about keeping my patience till i die
    guidance from the sky , i live like i nevermind this
    shit that happend behind , looking into the future for divine
    searching into times , flying with the lights , doing triple life
    selling dope rhymes , my days are full of signs , its crazy but no lie ,
    my skin is soft and dry and i will always try to protect whats mine
    but no matter how hard i try i never give up thats how i rise

    Hey Sonny on the beat, made a deal for the heat
    it say eat my meat and let me kill the bullshit
    Im really so fucking high that i should ride
    till i die without worry about the time
    cos i can stimulate my mind with light
    i can fuck fuck that bitch in the ass
    hit you and leave you last
    i dont look no more into past
    future and my grass
    thats what i fight for no harras


    I am working on beat for this lines , i am open for critics and feedbacks.

  • #2
    Hi, Honestly, I like some of your lyrics.

    +: I think i caught a double-entendre in the end where you said "future and my grass" so grass could be homeland and/or weed. I myself like double-entendres and I feel as if they help people music last longer

    -: sometimes I lost when reading it, it doesnt seem to hold my attention very well but that could simply be the punctuation because i cant quite grasp the flow, and so that makes it seem as if something may not make as much sense as they should

    Lyrics: 2
    (but that entendre was damn good)

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