Some of my lines :)

[SonnyBlack]

Heyyy all , i was hitting on the blunt and came out with those




Life on the edge im trying to pay attention
but it seems that im on misdirection
i recieve those high vibrations
my words are so strong that i can
unite the nations without having
all petrol stations this is sonny beats
and we rock so mothafucking hard
Mr.RainMan made hundred millions rain so bad
that i can have a heart attack
from the money in the sky
outlaw mothafuckers till we die


Going crazy daily i am bad mothafucka
Hundred dolla bills rain from the sky mothafucka
Im talking bout the Gucci Louie and Prada
From BG to Nevada , time is flying and i fly with it
Life on the fast lane there is no limit everytime
i feel confused roll and hit thats my secret shit
its about keeping my patience till i die
guidance from the sky , i live like i nevermind this
shit that happend behind , looking into the future for divine
searching into times , flying with the lights , doing triple life
selling dope rhymes , my days are full of signs , its crazy but no lie ,
my skin is soft and dry and i will always try to protect whats mine
but no matter how hard i try i never give up thats how i rise

Hey Sonny on the beat, made a deal for the heat
it say eat my meat and let me kill the bullshit
Im really so fucking high that i should ride
till i die without worry about the time
cos i can stimulate my mind with light
i can fuck fuck that bitch in the ass
hit you and leave you last
i dont look no more into past
future and my grass
thats what i fight for no harras


I am working on beat for this lines , i am open for critics and feedbacks.

[StephenKING]

Hi, Honestly, I like some of your lyrics.

+: I think i caught a double-entendre in the end where you said "future and my grass" so grass could be homeland and/or weed. I myself like double-entendres and I feel as if they help people music last longer

-: sometimes I lost when reading it, it doesnt seem to hold my attention very well but that could simply be the punctuation because i cant quite grasp the flow, and so that makes it seem as if something may not make as much sense as they should

Lyrics: 2
(but that entendre was damn good)